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Posted: 16 years ago
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How? How did I miss this FF loll...

Hey Zahra, You started another FF *jumping up and down* yeahhhhh!! Awww prems the 🤓geek and heers the beauty😊!! Its a great concept..hehe...the Geeky guy is simply gorjus....copying down every word the teacher says..awww even in that form he luks totally adorable!!😍😍😍

YEAHHH GO PREM!!! Studyin as hard as he can 4 his mother!!! AAWWWW isn't he soooo...umm..*scratching head* SMART....hahahahaha...an A+ student lol..😃

Lool the girl who gets an 'F' comes from a really smart family and her brothers a 'A' grade student!! Now thats something Heer should be upset about😒...Ohh and meeras been paired with shifali..wonder how they r gona get along??? N Shifali with dev...hes seems like a real joker...

" 'Prem Juneja- Now who in the world is that?' she asked." 🤣Haha I have no idea why but this is totally hilarious!! I mean seriously I can just imagine the look on her face when she finds out that she has the geekiest guy in class as her partner...😳.....Damn i wish i was heer...😆😆😆

Gaurav and prem are 2 diff ppl...das a gr8 idea....even though i ha8d gaurav quiet a bit when he first entered the show..oh well....

Course she was gonna like his voice....I mean I defo do...Its like music to my ears....hehe☺️☺️

""'We have to create a diagram by looking at the data we have been given by Mr. Patel. The patterns in the data will then be used to draw inferences about the process or population being studied. So we will have to focus on correlation, standard deviation and percentile equivalents. This will help us produce the graph, through which we will be able to analyze the data' he said."" 😕Oh my days....ewww🤢 so much maths and stats...like heer even I was wondering wt the hell was he talking abt....haha...😆

Hmm...dat was a great update..will be w8in 4 da next part

Take care xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

hi zahra🤣🤣🤣i cudn't cntrl my laughter😆.u r amazingggg.u rocked👏👏👏.i lov this premeer vry much ,thy r soooo cute😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was fantastic. 👏 awww...premeer finally met. cant wait for the next part...continue soon. 😊

Hiya!! Wow, I'm glad you liked it so much!! Thank You- yep they have finally met- will try to update over the weekend!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum update
prem heer met yay
poor heer got f
prem is soo cute

Hello!! Aaaww, thank for for this amazing comment. I know, Prem is such a cutie!! Even as a geek, hehe!! I'm happy you liked it!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Khushi34

How? How did I miss this FF loll... Hey Khushbu!! Aaaww, I'm glad you found it!!

Hey Zahra, You started another FF *jumping up and down* yeahhhhh!! Awww prems the 🤓geek and heers the beauty😊!! Its a great concept..hehe...the Geeky guy is simply gorjus....copying down every word the teacher says..awww even in that form he luks totally adorable!!😍😍😍 Yep, I started another one 😆!! Hehe, they're total opposites!! Yeah, Prem will always be adorable no matter what!!

YEAHHH GO PREM!!! Studyin as hard as he can 4 his mother!!! AAWWWW isn't he soooo...umm..*scratching head* SMART....hahahahaha...an A+ student lol..😃 Prem will always get the top marks in my FF, so you should get used to it, hehe!!

Lool the girl who gets an 'F' comes from a really smart family and her brothers a 'A' grade student!! Now thats something Heer should be upset about😒...Ohh and meeras been paired with shifali..wonder how they r gona get along??? N Shifali with dev...hes seems like a real joker... Poor Heer, her family expects a lot from her, but she is too busy doing things like shopping 😆 So it is kind of her fault that she is failing! Don't worry, Shifali is the nice one, so her and Meera will get on just fine!! It's Asma with Dev the joker, not Shifali- he is a right character isn't he? 😆

" 'Prem Juneja- Now who in the world is that?' she asked." 🤣Haha I have no idea why but this is totally hilarious!! I mean seriously I can just imagine the look on her face when she finds out that she has the geekiest guy in class as her partner...😳.....Damn i wish i was heer...😆😆😆 I wish I was Heer too, LOL!! She was totally shocked and dissapointed, hehe!! Don't worry, this dissapointment will soon change to something else!! 😉

Gaurav and prem are 2 diff ppl...das a gr8 idea....even though i ha8d gaurav quiet a bit when he first entered the show..oh well.... Yep, they are two totally different characters, but with similar faces, lol!!

Course she was gonna like his voice....I mean I defo do...Its like music to my ears....hehe☺️☺️ I know!! Hehe!! HC's voice is so nice!! 😳

""'We have to create a diagram by looking at the data we have been given by Mr. Patel. The patterns in the data will then be used to draw inferences about the process or population being studied. So we will have to focus on correlation, standard deviation and percentile equivalents. This will help us produce the graph, through which we will be able to analyze the data' he said."" 😕Oh my days....ewww🤢 so much maths and stats...like heer even I was wondering wt the hell was he talking abt....haha...😆 Even I didn't really get what he was saying 😆!! You all better get used to this all, cuz this is how Prem will speak throughout most of the FF, lol!!

Hmm...dat was a great update..will be w8in 4 da next part Thank you for the lovely comment Khushbu!! Love Zahra xx

Take care xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sugi77

hi zahra🤣🤣🤣i cudn't cntrl my laughter😆.u r amazingggg.u rocked👏👏👏.i lov this premeer vry much ,thy r soooo cute😛

Hi Sugi!! Hehe- I made you laugh, awww!! I am happy now!! Thank you- that means sooo much!! 😃 I love them too, they are adorable!! Thank you for the amazing comment!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here's Part Four- Enjoy!! Sorry Ravs, couldn't squeeze you into this chapter, but I promise, you are DEFINANTLY in the next chapter!! 😉
PART FOUR
Heer pushed the sheet away from her and set simply to filing her pink nails.

Prem stared at her in incredulity. She pretended not to notice, yet, she couldn't help but cast tiny glances towards him as he went back to working on the graph that they were supposed to be creating together. It wasn't that she did not want to help- it was more the fear that she would appear unintelligent and useless in front of him that stopped her from lending him a hand. The outer shell that she showed to the world may seem strong, yet within it dwelled only insecurities and weakness.

'What do you think?' a voice pierced through the air, disturbing her train on thoughts.

He stared at her holding the graph up to her face.

She waved her hand in front of her face in frustration, 'Urgh, you don't need to put it right up to my face!' she uttered rudely.

'Well SOR-RY!!' he answered back. 'Well, do not think you are going to take credit for MY work' he thought, throwing unpleasant glances towards her. He still hadn't forgotten her snide remark about statistics.

Before the end of class, Mr. Patel set everyone homework, which had Heer sighing in frustration and Prem lighting up with joy. When the lesson finished, Mr. Patel collected the graphs and signified everyone to leave.

Prem could not get out of there fast enough.

'Thanks for the most boring sixty minutes of my life!' Heer derided as he carefully placed his stationary in his backpack.

'Your welcome' he shot back.

He gathered his books with difficulty and made his way out of the class. She was about to do the same, meeting up with Shifali and Asma, and scurrying away when Mr. Patel's words stopped her in her tracks. 'Can I have a word with you please Heer?' he said, although it was not really a question.

'Ummm...We'll talk to you later Heer' said Shifali, and her and Asma left Heer alone to talk to Mr. Patel, something which she dreaded.

Mr. Patel spoke, 'Heer- I have been noticing your lack of attendance in class and this has seriously been affecting your grades.'

She gulped, fiddling with her fingers and looking down at her hands, unable to meet his eyes.

'I don't want to have to contact your parents, but I don't see any other option...' he continued.

'Sir, please don't tell my parents, I'll try to bring my grades up. Please, I promise I will work harder,' Heer pleaded.

'I thought I should tell you that there is a good reason why I paired you up with Prem today. I feel that Prem's influence could really give you that push into raising your marks. Maybe you should meet up with Prem every now and then for tutoring sessions- In my opinion, it could really help you.'

'What? No...I mean...I don't think that's necessary' said Heer. No way was she going to bear spending any more time with that Prem Juneja.

'Well, think it over- the decision is up to you. But I still feel the need to call your parents' he stated.

'But...' she started, but it was of no use.

'That's all- you can go now Heer' he said before taking a seat behind his desk and looking through the papers that lay scattered all over it. There was nothing more she could say or do. She felt as small as an ant- an ant that had just been stomped on. Her biggest fear was coming true.

Being proved as a failure in front her family and causing them embarrassment was far from what she wanted. She was Heer Mann, nearly everyone wanted to be like her. Thus, at that very moment she certainly did not want to be Heer Mann. In fact, she would give anything to be anyone else in the world. She turned and made her way out of the classroom, almost colliding into a warm, sturdy figure, as her healed shoes failed to find any grip on the polished floor.

He caught her smoothly, steadying her up as. She slowly raised her eyes to see Prem Juneja's deep brown eyes gazing back at her through his chunky glasses. 'Watch where you're going!!' she muttered, even though it was she who stumbled into him. Pushing him back, she rushed out of the door, leaving him to watch her fading figure.

'Prem, you again?' asked Mr. Patel, noticing Prem at the door of the classroom.

This brought Prem back to consciousness, and he swiftly turned his head to look at Mr. Patel. 'Actually I forgot my Physics book...' replied Prem, rushing over to his desk and grabbing his Physics guide.

'Okay' laughed Mr. Patel.

'See you tomorrow Sir' he said politely before leaving.

Prem wandered around the corridor oblivious to everything else around him. He hadn't failed to notice the tears that brimmed at the corners of her eyes. Yes, he had heard everything Mr. Patel had said to her. He had only gone back to get his book, he didn't mean to eavesdrop- it just happened. Now for some reason everything seemed trivial in comparison to her pain.

Why did he feel that there was more to her that met the eye- that deep inside there was a Heer that was concealed from the world. The desperation is her voice echoed through his ears and the image of her dejected face would not escape his mind. Why did her pain seem to reach his heart?
He always seemed to have the answers to everything- so then why didn't he have the answer to this question?

Hope you liked part four!! Looking forward to reading your comments!! Will try to update the next part a soon as possible, but got loads of uni assignments, so please bear with me if I don't update!!

Love Zahra 😃 xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! 😛

You shouldn't be waiting besabri se!😆😆😆 It's not a good comment!😆

Wow...I love love love the way you described Heer's pain Zahra!😃

But I do like the way Prem doesn't back away when she like puts him down,

But I think the whole addition of how Prem reacts to her pain was just fantastic! It shows that now they're going to have more of a connection in all the updates!😛😳 And seriously don't worry about not updating frequently, we know that whenever you do update...it's going to be FANTASTIC!😳

But seriously...I can not wait to see what you do in the next update!😃😳

Love you loads,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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^^ Thank you Meera- besabari se intezaar karoon gi!! 😆 xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Z! Now I need to comment on Part 2, 3 and 4!

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