FF: Beauty and the Geek: Last Part: Page 68:Jan 14

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Hey Guys, decided to start a new FF, hope you all like it, you will notice some familiar characters in it, hehe!! Anyway- here's the first part, hope you enjoy it!!

FF- BEAUTY AND THE GEEK

He stumbled into the room, the mountain of books he carried almost toppling over, yet somehow he managed to steady the books before reaching his chair. He sighed, dropping the books on his desk and collapsed on the chair, fixing his glasses up, which by this time had slipped down to the tip of his nose.

Oblivious to the sniggers that echoed through the air, he skimmed through the pages of the Calculus textbook that lay in front of him, hoping to squeeze in some more revision before the teacher Mr Patel entered the classroom. He began mumbling equations under his breath and began jotting down notes in his notebook that his mother had gifted him on his birthday. His mother sure did know about his tastes and distastes, he thought to himself and smiled.

Suddenly a hand on his shoulders made him jump, the sudden jerk of his body causing his glasses to plunge forward on to the desk. His hands fumbled around the desk searching for them and when he finally got a hold of them, he gently placed them back on his face, relieved to be able to see clearly again. He looked up to see her smiling down at him. She shifted in the seat beside him and he lowered his head back to his book.

'Did I scare you?' asked Meera simply before taking her own textbook out of her bag.

'Ummm...no of course not Meera...I was just reading that the derivative f'(x) of a curve at a point is the slope of the line tangent to that curve at that point,' he said without removing his gaze from the book.

Meera rolled her eyes. 'Yeah...that sounds really...interesting,' she uttered, trying to suppress her giggle.

'Where were you at lunchtime Prem? Me and Ravs were waiting for you' she asked observing him as he remained engrossed by the symbols spread across the page in front of him.

'Well I thought it would be good if I did some revising over lunch, so I gave lunch a miss.'

Meera shook her head and placed her hand on his shoulder again. 'That's not good Prem! We all know you're going to get an A anyway, there's no point going hungry- Don't go too overboard with the revising' she said in a caring tone, her eyes clearly showing concern.

They had been best friends all their lives- being neighbors meant that they always saw each other and that their families were the best of friends. When Meera began dating Gaurav Sharma, it did not affect her and Prem's relationship in the slightest- she still took care of Prem's little needs, making sure he looked after himself- almost like a big sister would. Sometimes it was she who felt that Prem did not give her as much attention as he used to. His life began revolving around his studies from the day his father left him and his mother. Prem strived to make his mother proud of him, endeavoring to be her pillar of support. Therefore, day and night all Prem could think about was getting good grades.

He was not the typical teenager chasing after girls and letting hormones run ravage on his body. Yes, he believed in love. Yes, he was waiting for the right girl to come along and steal his heart. But that one special girl just never seemed to enter his life. He couldn't comprehend why girls would take one look at him and run a mile. Thankfully, he had amazing friends like Meera and Ravjot who were always there to support him, giving him company whenever he was alone and listening to his drivel about calculus and quantum physics.

'It's okay Meera. I wasn't hungry anyway, plus the...' he stopped his sentence midway, drawn to a certain female who just happened to walk into the classroom, followed by a swarm of boys, like bees to a flower. Her heeled shoes tapped against the wooden floor as she swayed across the room to her desk. She gently swung her long tresses of black luminous hair behind her back, exciting the boys further, before taking a seat between her best friends Shifali and Asma.

'Close your mouth- You'll catch flies' laughed Meera, bringing her fingers up to close Prem's jaw. He looked at her, shook his head and looked back down to the textbook, unable to understand what had just come over him.

How was it? I know it's probably a bit weird and funny at the moment- Meera, Shifali, Asma and Ravs will understand, hehe!! I'm not a great writer, so bear with me please! 😆😆😆 Anyway, can't wait to read your comments!!
Love Zahra xx
PART ONE: Page 1
PART TWO: Page 6
PART THREE: Page 9
PART FOUR: Page 12
PART FIVE: Page 18
PART SIX: Page 22
PART SEVEN: Page 26
PART EIGHT: Page 29
PART NINE: Page 33
PART TEN: Page 36
PART ELEVEN: Page 40
PART TWELVE: Page 43
PART THIRTEEN: Page 47
PART FOURTEEN: Page 49
PART FIFTEEN: Page 53
PART SIXTEEN: Page 56
PART SEVENTEEN: Page 59
PART EIGHTEEN: Page 60
PART NINETEEN: Page 62
PART TWENTY: Page 68
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooo me is first!😆😆

awwwww omgd zahra i lovedd itttttt!!😲😲😲 it was seirously sooo kool haha😆😆😆

man i love this prem hes soo geeeky and cuteeee lmaoooo😆😆😆 awwww meera sounds adorbale hehe😆😆 hes glasses at the tip of his nose muahahhaha sooo cuteee😆😆😆 omdz he reaally is a geek he missed lunch with ravs and meera to revise and hes revsing just beofre the teacher comes in too haha😆😆😆

meera and prems relationship sounds really cuteee..why do i sense that prem isnt happy abwt guarav and meeras relationship😆 woooo meeera u got guarav and premmm..bonus haha😆😆😆

wow heers seems like some character😆 and me and shifs are her freinds😆

seriousy zahra it wasnt werid at all alll i enjoyed every part of it! do carry on soooon!

Love Asma =D

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OK Z, I have to say, GHOSH, you make THE Prem sound like such a nerd as Ravz said😆. I was partially shocked because, I expected you to write this FF, but not in such a way that you would rather be afraid of Prem then love him😆 Partially cus I hate people who are too Studi-acious...but Prem makes the character...or shall I say you, make the character sound cute.😆
Especially the part when you said "He tumbled into the room carrying a big pile of books."...that just made me want to pull Prem's cheek's at the moment.😆 And the part when Meera and Prem's friendship was introduced, I was like "Oolalala"😆😆😆 but then the part about her acting as his big sister totally ruined it🤣 because in PTHHT, I have her opposite him.🤣 Thank god, I am not in Meera's place...I would have totally killed you!😆
Sachi, Prem seems like a mama's boy when he said his mother knew about his tasts and detasts.😆
Prem and Meera's friendship is..."Kya kehna"😆😍
Just one single request, please don't make me look like one of those Heer's pet pals who wears loads of make-up and acts like one of those chamchi's😆 I would totally kill you, you know.😆 Add me as the friend with brains and who knows what to say and when.😆
Other then that, the part when Prem described how guys were attached to Heer...was just...>>🤣. That makes me wonder if Heer is the Queen bee?😆
Do continue soon!
Edited by *Shifali* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww he's so nerdy. I love him😳
Eww I hate calculus🤢 He seems very into derivatives doesn't he? If I had to pick one thing I liked about calc, it would bederivatives😆 I swear those things are so easy. Way better than integrals. And why am I talking about math?😆
Anyway! Yay!! I saw my name😃 Aww Meera's such a great friend. And I am too😃 I love my role in this. Thanks Zahra😃
Poor Prem...his father left him? I hope Prem gets better and stops putting so much pressure on himself. It's not good for him.
I'm guessing that the girl is Heer? So her best friends are Shifali and Asma? So we're all divided? Can't wait to see how that turns out. And I wonder how Meera feels about dating Gaurav😆
Btw you're an awesome writer. I dunno what you're talknig about
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashmii

woooo me is first!😆😆 Yayyy!!

awwwww omgd zahra i lovedd itttttt!!😲😲😲 it was seirously sooo kool haha😆😆😆 Aaaww thankoo Asma!!

man i love this prem hes soo geeeky and cuteeee lmaoooo😆😆😆 awwww meera sounds adorbale hehe😆😆 hes glasses at the tip of his nose muahahhaha sooo cuteee😆😆😆 omdz he reaally is a geek he missed lunch with ravs and meera to revise and hes revsing just beofre the teacher comes in too haha😆😆😆 Yeah when I was writing that bit I couldn't stop laughing, he'd rather revise than eat and hang out with his friends! 😆 He is a typical geek, hehe!!

meera and prems relationship sounds really cuteee..why do i sense that prem isnt happy abwt guarav and meeras relationship😆 woooo meeera u got guarav and premmm..bonus haha😆😆😆 Ummm I guess he maybe feels a bit odd about her being with someone, but I guess it's more because he himself doesn't have someone to love yet!! Yeah lucky bugger Meera!! 😛

wow heers seems like some character😆 and me and shifs are her freinds😆 Yeah she is a right snob in this FF, typical popular girl, and of course you two will be her kinda evil friends, but obviously you won't be as evil as Heer, LOL!!

seriousy zahra it wasnt werid at all alll i enjoyed every part of it! do carry on soooon! Thank You, it means a lot that you left a comment!!

Love Asma =D Love you too!! Zahra xx

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank You- I hope you will continue liking it!! xx
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first of all i loved ur ff title good choice of the title
ok it was brilliant i am loving it
wow hope it's heer

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Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

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Aww he's so nerdy. I love him😳 Yeah geeky guys can be soooo adorable!! 😳
Eww I hate calculus🤢 He seems very into derivatives doesn't he? If I had to pick one thing I liked about calc, it would bederivatives😆 I swear those things are so easy. Way better than integrals. And why am I talking about math?😆 I hate anything to do with Maths, I am completely useless at it, hehe!! Ummm, because you are totally random? 😛
Anyway! Yay!! I saw my name😃 Aww Meera's such a great friend. And I am too😃 I love my role in this. Thanks Zahra😃 Yaaayy, you're in it too- you both are Prem's trusted friends, always by his side!! No need to thank me, hehe!!
Poor Prem...his father left him? I hope Prem gets better and stops putting so much pressure on himself. It's not good for him. Yeah, poor father left him and his mother, I guess that's why he feels the need to prove himself and not feel so inadequate!! True, putting too much pressure on yourself is not a good thing!
I'm guessing that the girl is Heer? So her best friends are Shifali and Asma? So we're all divided? Can't wait to see how that turns out. And I wonder how Meera feels about dating Gaurav😆 Yep, there will be a lot of masala coming up, hehe!! Meera is totally over the moon about it, I wanted her to be with Saagar from BMTD, and she was like 'Gaurav, please' 😆
Btw you're an awesome writer. I dunno what you're talknig about Aaawww thank you!! *blushes*

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

first of all i loved ur ff title good choice of the title
ok it was brilliant i am loving it
wow hope it's heer

Hey Poonam!! Glad you liked it!! It will be Heer, no doubt about it!! Keep reading! xx
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AAAHHHHH!!!!! Another FF?!?!?! U guys are rocking at this!! OMG cant wait to read more!! oohhhh Prem all nerdy???? Kool kool!!!!! me like hehe...so whose this girl which totally mezmerized him??? Hmmm...
lol continue soon zahra!! i love it!!

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Garima

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