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hi zahra thts awesome and grt.....am vry excited for nxt part.plzzzz continue asap.

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛

You shouldn't be waiting besabri se!😆😆😆 It's not a good comment!😆 Awww Meera- I love all your comments- they are always amazing!!

Wow...I love love love the way you described Heer's pain Zahra!😃 Thank you, at first I didn't really know how I should write her pain, so I just ended up showing desperation and failure on her part!!

But I do like the way Prem doesn't back away when she like puts him down, Yeah, he is my strong geek!! He isn't submissive like usual geeks.

But I think the whole addition of how Prem reacts to her pain was just fantastic! It shows that now they're going to have more of a connection in all the updates!😛😳 And seriously don't worry about not updating frequently, we know that whenever you do update...it's going to be FANTASTIC!😳 Hehe, yeah he will feel her pain, which will connect them furthur. Fantastic?! Really?! Lol, we'll see!!

But seriously...I can not wait to see what you do in the next update!😃😳 Gonna update soon, so no more waiting!! 😛

Love you loads, Me loves you too, Zahra xx

Meera😳

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesome update
aww prem felt heer's pain
sooo cute loved it
tooo gooood me loving it

Originally posted by: Khushi34

Reserved!!!!!

*Backk*

Hey Zahra!! Yeahhhh you updated.... Yesh, me updated, hehe!!

Awesome update!!! Thank you!!

Awwww Your description of Heer was fab...Very well written👏. Poor thing is insecure and wishes that she was someone else. Awww, thanks- yeah she feels a bit like a failure, just doesn't want to be proved as inadequate in front of everyone!!

Even though Prems a Geek I loved his confidence and he didn't let, wt heer said to him, hurt his feelings😆😆😆. Hahaha Looks like he's the only one in this world who's going to be excited about receiving Homework🤢, Because I for one would never be excited about that....😆 Yeah, I made him strong and brave, he's not going to let anyone walk over him- I guess his father leaving him has made him stronger rather than weaker, ashe has learnt living kind of alone!! Hehe, yeah he loves homework- I would never get excited about getting homework either, lol!!

Silly heer, they were meant to be the best 60 minutes of her life if she hadn't acted all mean to him!! 😕😕Bechari, the teacher is going to call her house...Wonder what her parents are going to say??? I knowww- she didn't make the most out of those 60 minutes. Her parents are NOT going to be happy, that is all I can tell you at the moment, wait and read to see what their reaction will be!!

Aaawwwww, prem is a sweet heart he felt her pain.😆..See heer even your friends don't understand that pain LOL!!!! He's just a cutie- Well she doesn't show her pain to her friends, so they don't understand. Prem saw the tears and it touched his heart strings!!

""He always seemed to have the answers to everything- so then why didn't he have the answer to this question?"" Wow...I think that was the perfect ending for this part...It couldn't have been better...😛 You know, this is my favourite line. He is so smart, he usually has answers for everything, yet this is the one question- the question from his heart- that he just cannot answer!!

Take care Thank you for the lovely comment Khushbu!! Love Zahra xx

xx

Originally posted by: munam_13

Zahra.....👏👏👏 I love this ff of your's .. I love this over intelligent Prem and stylish Heer.... I think this Beauty and Geek jodi is gonna rock in the forthcoming updates....😃 Heer is weak inside and she knows that... therefore to hide that she does not extend her helping hand to Prem...(like he cares😆) but somewhere he cares right???? which we came to know by that accidental eavsdroping of his😳... now let's see if PJ agrees to tutor her and something something😉