FF: Beauty and the Geek: Last Part: Page 68:Jan 14 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
hey
awesome update
aww prem felt heer's pain
sooo cute loved it
tooo gooood me loving it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Z! Now I need to comment on Part 2, 3 and 4!

SORRY!!! Hehe!! xx
Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesome update
aww prem felt heer's pain
sooo cute loved it
tooo gooood me loving it

Thank you Poonam- that was the reaction I was hoping for, I'm glad you loved it!! Love Zahra xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94

Reserved!!!!!

*Backk*

Hey Zahra!! Yeahhhh you updated....

Awesome update!!!

Awwww Your description of Heer was fab...Very well written👏. Poor thing is insecure and wishes that she was someone else.

Even though Prems a Geek I loved his confidence and he didn't let, wt heer said to him, hurt his feelings😆😆😆. Hahaha Looks like he's the only one in this world who's going to be excited about receiving Homework🤢, Because I for one would never be excited about that....😆

Silly heer, they were meant to be the best 60 minutes of her life if she hadn't acted all mean to him!! 😕😕Bechari, the teacher is going to call her house...Wonder what her parents are going to say???

Aaawwwww, prem is a sweet heart he felt her pain.😆..See heer even your friends don't understand that pain LOL!!!!

""He always seemed to have the answers to everything- so then why didn't he have the answer to this question?"" Wow...I think that was the perfect ending for this part...It couldn't have been better...😛

Take care
xx
Edited by Khushi34 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#95
Zahra.....👏👏👏 I love this ff of your's .. I love this over intelligent Prem and stylish Heer.... I think this Beauty and Geek jodi is gonna rock in the forthcoming updates....😃 Heer is weak inside and she knows that... therefore to hide that she does not extend her helping hand to Prem...(like he cares😆) but somewhere he cares right???? which we came to know by that accidental eavsdroping of his😳... now let's see if PJ agrees to tutor her and something something😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#96
hey zahra...i read ur ff...its fabulous yaar...n prem...aww...he is nice ....n heer...wow i loved her...hehe...plz continue soon....u r very nice writer though...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
hey
that was awesome. poor heer...hope prem helps her out. cant wait to read the next part...continue soon. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
Zahra, that was a brilliant part! Heer's desperation was very well portrayed, and the way you showed that she is not just a superficial girl, she's just scared to show the world the real her. Very nicely handled. And Prem feeling a connection with her, I cannot wait for more of their interactions, because now Prem will probably be nicer. Cannot wait for more!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#99
hey...
Sry..i missed the last update..and i just read both updates!!! amazing..
loved the Prem-Heer first meet, ur rite its opposites attract😆😉..i cant wait to read how they fall for eachother..
sooooooooo,,,, Prem the Genius finally has no answer to a question..that seems to be troubling him about Heer..this is very interesting!! i really cant wait for the next update..do so wen u get the chance
take care till then
~nikki😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Updated my comment...but it's not that good! 😳

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