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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Garima93

Zahraa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What a cute update yaar!!! Loved it!!! Garimaaa!!!!!!! Thank you!!! I'm happy you loved it!!

LOL, awww, Prem got his usual A+ I'm so proud of him!! *pats his back* He's a good boy!! and Yay for Meera!! she got an A-!!!! lol Yeah Prem the geek got top marks!! Good bachcha, hehe!! I know, Meera did her revising, you see, unlike some people *cough* Heer *cough*!! 😆

Oh wow, Heer and stuck up?? Nice nice!! Very new concept, and I'm really loving it!! and the title totally fits!! lol!! Thankoo, you haven't seen anything of Heer yet!! 😛

Aww poor Heer, she got a bad grade!! Hope she studies well next time, and doesn't go SHOPPING!! *cough cough* LOL, yeah...she should try that!! and focus on her studies more!! lol I know, she needs to get her priorities straight!!

Ohh! can't wait for the attraction to start between Prem and Heer, I can already kinda tell Prem's falling for Heer *wink wink* LOL, He is a boy, what can you expect?!! When they fall, they fall flat- the question is, when she will fall for him!!

Overall It was a FANTASTIC update Zahra!!! I really really loved it!! Continue soon!!!!!!!!! Aawww thankoo Garima, thanks for the amazing comment!!

Byee!!! Luv, Love you too, Zahra xx
Garima =]

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oooo do we get an update?? 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oooo right now? 😳 cus I won't be online tom morning at all 😔 *sniff*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Here's part three, hope you like it!!


PART THREE
The huge 'F' accompanied by a 'See me after the class,' was not something Heer was prepared for. Yes, she was not a genius, but she managed to scrape decent grades here and there. Her parents were not going to be pleased, especially since she was the daughter of Balraj and Teji Maan- Biology and Physics professors at the University of Mumbai. Plus being the younger sister of Nihaal Maan, a straight 'A' student on his way to earning his optometrist degree, meant that she should follow in his footsteps and make their father and mother proud. The big fat 'F' that stared back her was not a letter her family was accustomed too, and neither would they ever want to be accustomed to such a letter.

Shifali's voice cut into her thoughts. 'Heer...Heer!!' she said, tapping her gently on the arm.

'Huh?' responded Heer.

'Mr Patel has put us in pairs' said Shifali.

'What- but why? Who am I with?' asked Heer.

'We don't know- he wrote it on the backs of our papers- what name does it say on the back of your paper?' Asma asked.

Heer flipped her paper around and frowned at the name. Prem Juneja. She didn't know or notice anyone of that name in their class- maybe it was someone new, she thought.

'Prem Juneja- Now who in the world is that?' she asked.

Asma and Shifali looked at Heer and then at each other. Shifali tried to suppress her laugh, but failed miserably. Asma followed suit, both girls exploding in a fit of giggles.

'GIRLS' said Mr Patel, in his disciplinary tone, indicating for Asma and Shifali to calm down. They both put their hands to their mouths.

Heer leaned over to them 'Why are you two laughing at me?!! What's so funny guys??!!' she whispered, anger beginning to rise in her.

Shifali pointed to the geeky looking boy, hunched over his book who was noting every word that was coming out of Mr. Patel's mouth. His ruffled hair and ancient looking clothes indicated his lack of interest in style and fashion.

'Oh my goodness!! No!! You CAN'T be serious?!!!' she said, her jaw dropping open. 'I mean- look at him!! Who do you have to be with?'

'I have to be with Meera over there' answered Shifali, pointing to Meera who was cheekily texting Gaurav underneath the desk.

'Can we swap?' asked Heer desperately.

'Ummm...No' Shifali laughed.

'I have to be with Dev,' said Asma sulking. 'He's like the silliest boy in class- always pulling stupid little pranks.'

'Oh I know him- Isn't he the one who pretended to get an emergency phone call during class shouting 'don't worry I'll be there soon' and ripped his shirt off...' started Shifali.

'...and he was wearing a superman costume underneath!!' continued Asma, and they erupted into another fit of laughter. 'Then...he...ran out of the class with one arm extended in the air!' she said whilst giggling.

'That was hilarious- I can't believe that guy is still in our college and hasn't been suspended yet' said Shifali.

'I don't understand why I have to get stuck with him?!' moaned Asma.


'Maybe he isn't into that kind of stuff anymore' added Heer.

'I hope so' said Asma simply.

'Okay everyone, get into your pairs,' exclaimed Mr. Patel, causing the class to become alive with movement as students shifted around the class to sit with their assigned partner. Heer mouthed a 'HELP' to Asma and Shifali, pouting, before turning around to go to her partner.

Heer's shoulders sagged as she made her way to join Prem. Awkwardly she swapped places with Meera and dropped down on the seat next to him, letting out a big sigh. This was going to be a long hour.

Prem felt his palms begin to sweat as she sat next to him. What was happening to him- why did he suddenly feel restless? Why was a girl making him feel this way? Concentrating on the book was becoming difficult- she was so close, yet so far from him.

'You are Prem, right?' she asked, trying to plaster a smile on her face.

He nodded gently. 'I'm Heer' she added.

'I know' he stated simply.

'Nice voice' she thought casually. It was deep and husky. His appearance did not compliment it in the slightest. She mentally kicked herself- 'nice voice, puhleez' she thought, shaking her head.

'How come I've never noticed you in class before?' she asked.

'Because you were too busy with yourself?' he answered matter-of-factly. Ouch, that hurt. Her nostrils flared and she crossed her arms. Who was he to say that to her? Why did she care anyway? She glanced down at Prem's common grey t-shirt and olive green cargo pants. 'Eewww' she thought to herself, her eyes screwed up in aversion.

Mr. Patel handed them each a piece of paper instructing them on what they needed to do. Heer scanned the sheet and frowned- she was baffled by the equations, unable to comprehend them.

She leaned over to Prem, 'Excuse me? What are we meant to be doing exactly?' she tentatively asked, intimidated by the way he wildly scribbled formulas onto the sheet.

He slowly lifted his head to look at her through his thick-rimmed glasses. He blinked a couple of times in nervousness before answering, 'We have to create a diagram by looking at the data we have been given by Mr. Patel. The patterns in the data will then be used to draw inferences about the process or population being studied. So we will have to focus on correlation, standard deviation and percentile equivalents. This will help us produce the graph, through which we will be able to analyze the data' he said.

Heer stared at him as if he had spoken in a completely different language. She huffed, 'I hate statistics!!' she said, and began playing with her nails. He frowned. Her comment about statistics felt as if she had thrown an insult at him- he loved statistics, it was the one thing he looked forward to. She was clearly not someone he would get on well with.

I hope you guys liked the update!! So Prem and Heer have met, and they don't like each other, hehe!! Well you know what they say -opposites attract' 😆 Let's see how these opposites attract!! Can't wait to read your comments!!

Love Zahra xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mine! 😳

*unreserved* WHOA! Heer comes from a very smart/intelligent family!😆😆😆 Go Nihaal!😉 I love optometry, if I didn't get creeped out by looking at ppls eyes closely, I would have done it!😆😆 But whoa....physics? That goes on top of my head! 😛 I can not understand it, even if my life depends on it!😆😆😆

Teehee, nice way for the teacher to divide them into pairs!😆 God...she's so mean to my Prem! 😔😳 And wow.....you've described me PERFECTLY!!! I'm always texting under the desks!😳 The only difference is in here, I'm texting my boyfriend!😳😉😆

Poor Heer, she really judges the book by it's cover!😆😆😆 Wait till she gets to know Prem!😃 Wow this Dev, seems hilarious!😆 I think the superman thing was totally adorable!😃 I was watching Dancing with the stars today and someone did that!😆

I do like that Heer isn't a complete ditz in this! 😊 You've given her some character! 😳 I like that...it's not like totally "uhh....whatever," And like she doesn't go around blowing bubble gum!😆😆😆 Ohh!!! She liked his voice!! 😃 Who wouldn't??😆 I am super proud of him by the way!😆 The way he stood up to her, and wasn't all nerdy and shy in front of her!😃 She's mean for judging his clothes, although I have to admit I ocassionally do it too!😆

I loved how they're not going to get along yet!😳😃 This line amused me! "She was clearly not someone he would get on well with. " Very well written Zahra!😳

Continue soon Zahroo! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera!😳

P.S. You write fantastically well for when you don't feel well!😉😳😆
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
Boo!

Oh wow. Poor Heer, her parents have such high hopes for her. And I'm guessing her parents aren't gonna be too happy about her failing...

Ooh Heer's paired up with Prem? And omg superman costume?🤣 Dev is hilarious😆

And I see she likes Prem's voice? Who wouldn't? She's in denial! She takes that comment back based on his appearance but the truth is that she does like his voice! I have no clue what I'm saying right now😆

I love how blunt Prem is with his answer to why Heer never noticed him😆 And I see they're getting along nicely😆 Ooh I remember percentiles and standard deviation! I swear your FF is starting to make me sound like a nerd😆
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haha Heer didnt even know who Prem was😆.... Prem is soooo cute though i can just imagine him with glasses and all!! Update Soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey zahra...awesome update as usual... aww felt bad for heer, who scored a F...I know how you feel when ur background is so serious and you dont match it... I was guessing that this pairing thing will take place and am glad it did...aww Prem's with Heer.. and seriously he's choice is so baaaad!!! grey with olive green..ewww!!! now let's see what happens when they are together... wll be waiting...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😳

*unreserved* WHOA! Heer comes from a very smart/intelligent family!😆😆😆 Go Nihaal!😉 I love optometry, if I didn't get creeped out by looking at ppls eyes closely, I would have done it!😆😆 But whoa....physics? That goes on top of my head! 😛 I can not understand it, even if my life depends on it!😆😆😆 Yep, they have high expectations from her!! I would have done optometry too, but I am not good at science subjects, hehe, I am more of an arty person! I am the same about physics- goes through one ear comes out the other!! 😆

Teehee, nice way for the teacher to divide them into pairs!😆 Yeah, smart teacher!! 😉 God...she's so mean to my Prem! 😔😳 I knowww- Bechara Prem!! And wow.....you've described me PERFECTLY!!! I'm always texting under the desks!😳 The only difference is in here, I'm texting my boyfriend!😳😉😆 Hehe, I'm glad I got that right, then!! Lucky you, I will try to introduce Gaurav soon!

Poor Heer, she really judges the book by it's cover!😆😆😆 Wait till she gets to know Prem!😃 Wow this Dev, seems hilarious!😆 I think the superman thing was totally adorable!😃 I was watching Dancing with the stars today and someone did that!😆 Once she gets to know Prem furthur, it will all change!! Yeah I loved writing that bit about Dev- it cracks me up whenever I read it!! Oooh, I love Dancing with the Stars, haven't watched it in ages though!

I do like that Heer isn't a complete ditz in this! 😊 You've given her some character! 😳 I like that...it's not like totally "uhh....whatever," And like she doesn't go around blowing bubble gum!😆😆😆 Ohh!!! She liked his voice!! 😃 Who wouldn't??😆 I am super proud of him by the way!😆 The way he stood up to her, and wasn't all nerdy and shy in front of her!😃 She's mean for judging his clothes, although I have to admit I ocassionally do it too!😆 Yeah, Heer isn't a 'bimbo' in my FF, she just needs a push in the right direction and a bit of help!! Yep his voice- aaaahhh!! Don't we all just love his voice? 😍 I think we all end up judging appearance at some point or the other, I know I have done it occassionally too.

I loved how they're not going to get along yet!😳😃 This line amused me! "She was clearly not someone he would get on well with. " Very well written Zahra!😳 Hehe, total opposites!! I love that line too, glad you liked it!!

Continue soon Zahroo! 😃 Will do, thankoo!!

Love you loads, Love you loads too!! 🤗

Meera!😳 Zahra xx

P.S. You write fantastically well for when you don't feel well!😉😳😆 Aaaaww, thank you!! 😳 Maybe I should only update once a month then- what say?? 😆😛

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Boo! *hides behind covers* 😲

Oh wow. Poor Heer, her parents have such high hopes for her. And I'm guessing her parents aren't gonna be too happy about her failing... Yeah, they have high expectations and she isn't meeting them!! They are not going to be pleased in the slightest!!

Ooh Heer's paired up with Prem? She certainly is!! And omg superman costume?🤣 Dev is hilarious😆 I know, I love Dev, I'm thinking I should maybe expand his character, poor Asma will have to bear the brunt as she is his partner 😆 But that superman thing I just found really funny, so had to include it in!!

And I see she likes Prem's voice? Who wouldn't? She's in denial! She takes that comment back based on his appearance but the truth is that she does like his voice! I have no clue what I'm saying right now😆 Who doesn't like Prem's voice- it's so dreamy!! 😍 I get what you're saying, she is judging him by his appearance, therefore she retracts her thoughts. She needs to get over this fixation with appearance and look at inner beauty!!

I love how blunt Prem is with his answer to why Heer never noticed him😆 And I see they're getting along nicely😆 Ooh I remember percentiles and standard deviation! I swear your FF is starting to make me sound like a nerd😆 Yeah, my Prem isn't afraid to speak his mind!! I don't like geeks who are all submissive and quite, letting people walk all over them and bully them!! Yes I have made him a geek n here, but not a typical push-over geek!! Oye don't blame my FF for you sounding like a nerd- the geek is in you, you just needed a small push to let it out 😆

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago

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