FF: Kya.....yehi pyaar hai? part 14 updtd p20 - Page 6

Originally posted by: *Twinkle_Shine*

Oh YAY me first!

yay!

AWESOME update Kay!

Thank you so much

Really can't wait for your next part!

when the dashng Robbie and innocent Kasturi will meet!

i hope you like how they meet 😳

and this part was so NOT boring!

lol i thought it might be since there was no RoKa 😛

please cont. soon

-->Samiya

oh great you up[dted two parts together tnat nice of you

kasturi is just keep staring robbie oh my god and robbie is thinking why he invited kasturi only to his cabin

Originally posted by: *Twinkle_Shine*

Me first!

again😆

lol yay!

WOW Kay!

OMG Kasturi whats with you girl?😆

contrrrooolll sweetheart😆

lol yep Kasturi is trying hard to control these new found feelings

drop dead gorgeous... It's true😆

no doubt!

Loved the super fast update!

Thanks

update next part ASAP!

i will as soon as i can

it's really good..and it was so cute!

We don't have RoKa scenes in the serial so let's enjoy RoKa scenes right here in your FF!

Thats why im happy to write an ff......i ca have and keep RoKa exactly how we want them

brilliant part!

really nicely described!

Thank you so much

she'll go pink to red to purple to blue to black blushing like that!😆

lol

Please cont. soon! can't wait for the next part

i will update soon

-->Samiya

Originally posted by: nrasheed

hey kay, missed your fanfic....alot.. so happy you came out with a double whammy..thanks a ton...

awwww thats so sweet.....ye i started writing part3, it grew so long so i decided to split into two parts

Part 3: kasturi.... is very simple and i love that about her...

ye i wanted to portray her how she was at the start of the serial, she was much better being simple than what shes turned into now

and Puru, i totally pictured him in that silver shirt. OMG talk about a total signature shirt for him, i literally imagined him smiling with his mustache..LOL...😆

lmao sooooo glad you pictured it like i did 😆

and ufff Alaana totally the suspicious wife again😆😆 and Nikal's mess up with the words was sooo funny..

lol ye these two can provide the comic relief here and there 😆

this part was very well described i felt the buinsess aura surrounding the whole part..

Thanks diii i was worried i might be going over board with all the business details

and when you mentioned Barack Obama..that had me 🤣 the look that chick must have given kasturi was priceless..the comparision was something i'll remember...😆 good one..kay..

lol thanks dii

Part 4.... was simply put WOW, i felt a certain amount of friction...in the air whenever robbie and kasturi were together,

yep the feelings are slowly coming up

so you've done a very good job already with these two feeling some complication...

ye they are starting to feel somthing......im just wondering who should figure it out first? 😉

and i luved how you took the time to describe Robbie's cabin (is that what you call an office in UK as well)?

ye i thought it would be nice to describe the setting......easy to picture

we call it both an office and cabin, most of the time it is refered to as someones office

and i luv the glass look, its simple and clean and professional....👏 are tastes are very similiar...not only in smell😉😆

lol yep i too like the look of glass finishes, we just keep finding similarities between us diii 😉

and Uff Kabir a peon, did i read that right, the best line to date was when robbie asked him what are you doing eyeing girls half your age???🤣🤣🤣 ohhh i laughed till my insides hurt...man i wish to god robbie in the serial had said that to kabir.....

lol yep you read it right. i have to vent my anger out on him in my ff....im glad everyone found it funny 😆 me too wish Robbie said somehting like that in the serial 😆

your rock kay..this fan fic just keeps getting more interesting, i'm totally involved so please doooo update soon....

awwww thank you sooo much diiii, im glad its turning out to be interesting 😳

i will update soon

diii

ps. diii i have read your both updates.....i will get back to you soon obviously i loved them....il give you a detailed post later, its xmas holidays and parties every where,iv had such a mad week im sure you know how it is......catch you later 😃

Originally posted by: AH01

Hey Kay

Hey Aaliyah (nice name)

I have just started reading ur FF and really like it 👍🏼

Thank you so much

you have a great writing style

im really happy you like the way i write 😳

Robbie shouting at Kabir made me laugh 😆

lol yep i just had to write that part 😆

Aww so sweet Kas likes Robbie and even he seems to be feeling something.

yep Kasturi is feeling attracted to him.....Robbie will later on 😉

cant wait for the next part

Update soon please! 😃

i will update as soon as i can 😃

Aaliyah