FF: Kya.....yehi pyaar hai? part 14 updtd p20

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Kay

@Kay

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: swan20
Wow Devika made Kasturi the head of HR.........😲 😲.........how lucky is she.......
Yep Kasturi defo got more than she expected

😳.........i liked the way you showed that Devika saw something of herself in Kasturi.........Devika seems to be a very level headed but emotional kind of person.........a welcome change from what we are used to......😛
lol yep i always thought creatives made Devikas character way too cold hearted, so here i brought out her emotional sides...there will be more scenes of Devika showing her softer side
Hmmm Kasturi smelling the same fragrance.......😉........Kay you are heightening the sense of ''Mystery Man''.........if i was kasturi i would be dying to find out who it was........😆 😆 😆

lol i know exactly what you mean 😉 Kasturi will soon discover who the mystery fragrance belongs to 😉
Robbie in a designer suit & a killer smile.......no wonder the female employees get tongue tied when they see him.......😉........waiting for ROKA to meet now.

lol they cant help it and nor can Robbie 😆 RoKa will meet soon...hope you like it 😳

Originally posted by: jazz rocks
Lucky Kasturi.....HR of a company......wow!!!! Nice part👏

Kasturis luck will keep getting better......Thanks for liking this part 😃

Originally posted by: FunkyChick

Hey Kay great part I really liked it Kasturi got a Job as a HR head of the company lucky her

Thanks for liking this part......yep Kasturi is very lucky....unlike in the serial 😆

Devikas character was nice shes shown as an emotional person

I thought of making her soft on the inside in my FF

Robbie is shown good looking and hes so used to it that he dosnt care and just walks of

Robbie is always good looking isnt he? 😉

I cant wait for ROKA to meet now

They will meet soon

Update Soon

I will try and update as soon as i can

Love Mariam xx😛

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Kay

@Kay

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: LAHORIKURI
love this part....
really nice details......such a good flow...luck kas....

Thank you so much 😳
i hope u update the next aprt soonnn.

I will try and update as soon as i can

and if u have tyime plzz read my ff and do tell me how good it is.....

I will read your FF now.....il let you know what i think 😃

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

great kasturi is head of HR

yep a surprise for everyone 😆
HMM when will roka meet i m waiting 4 him

lol RoKa will meet very soon 😉
haaaha robs consequences r great yea sure girls gonna hav fits hahaaa

lol yep poor Robbie,,,,its not his fault hes so damn hot 😆
great work

Thank you
update more

sari

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

@BittuJi.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Hi Kay,

Just finished reading the characters...

I Love the Chawla's..and Sabharwal's. they remind me of when the show started...

Lol... u fulfilled Raunak's dream.... that's so nice of u... hopefully he wont need to be evil here then😆

and u fullfilled Shivani's dream,too... oh i just love u Kay! U fullfilled my dream..😆(my name is also shivani😆)

anyway... will go n read the nxt part..

bye

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

@BittuJi.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Hiya Kay,

Just finished reading Part 1-

awwee... the Tannu- Navneet- Kaushi scene was sooo sweet and cute! I LOVED it! =)

awwee... poor Kasturi... first day was soo bad... what will happen next.?

anyways... will quickly-quickly go on to the nxt part...

byyee

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meepha

@Meeph

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

'stood there in a dark grey Armani suit..'
he must b lookin dead hawt

loved dis part
gr8 goin

Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

@BittuJi.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Hi Kay,

Just finshed reading Part 2-

wow! Kasturi got a better job? That's great! =D

I kind of like Devu... she seems to be nice..

LOL.. kabir peon? It suits him🤣

OMG! The robbie of ure FF is so hawwt... I'm in love with him already =P

you know what.. I'm addicted to ure FF already.. it reminds me of those beautiful days of the show in the beginning =)

Plz update soon... and PM me when u do ...thx =)

-shanu

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Kay

@Kay

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: shanu333
Hi Kay,
Hey Shivani
Just finished reading the characters...

I Love the Chawla's..and Sabharwal's. they remind me of when the show started...
Yep thats when the show was at its best....the initial episodes were great so i thougt of setting my FF in those good old days
Lol... u fulfilled Raunak's dream.... that's so nice of u... hopefully he wont need to be evil here then😆
lol ype i kinda felt sorry for him in the show 😆
and u fullfilled Shivani's dream,too... oh i just love u Kay! U fullfilled my dream..😆(my name is also shivani😆)
lol 😆
anyway... will go n read the nxt part..

bye

Originally posted by: shanu333
Hiya Kay,

Just finished reading Part 1-

awwee... the Tannu- Navneet- Kaushi scene was sooo sweet and cute! I LOVED it! =)
awww im so jappy you loved it....i wanted to create a normal sweet everyday scene here 😳
awwee... poor Kasturi... first day was soo bad... what will happen next.?
alls well that ends well 😉
anyways... will quickly-quickly go on to the nxt part...

byyee

Originally posted by: muneefah
'stood there in a dark grey Armani suit..'
he must b lookin dead hawt
lol he sure is drop dead gorgeous 😳 all the girls dream about being wiht him...what will Kasturi think when she first sees him? 😛
loved dis part
gr8 goin
Thank you so much 😳

Originally posted by: shanu333
Hi Kay,

Just finshed reading Part 2-

wow! Kasturi got a better job? That's great! =D
yep she sure did
I kind of like Devu... she seems to be nice..
Thank you .....im glad everyone likes the Devika in my FF....makes a change from the serial
LOL.. kabir peon? It suits him🤣
omg your the only one that caught onto that 😆 i think everyone else missed it or forgot to mention it 😆 ye i thought il give the buddha a more deserving role in my FF 😆

OMG! The robbie of ure FF is so hawwt... I'm in love with him already =P

lol yep he is damn hot in my FF......😉

you know what.. I'm addicted to ure FF already.. it reminds me of those beautiful days of the show in the beginning =)

awwwww thank you so much for the kind words, ye the show was great when it started

Plz update soon... and PM me when u do ...thx =)
i will update as soon as i can, iv got guests coming this weekend so the next update will probably be on monday/tuesday......il try and see if i can post something before then....il let you know when i do 😃
-shanu

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annu

@annu08

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

hmmm nice part so kasturi got the job great kasturi ko job easily mil jata hai serial mein bhi or ff mein bhi but it is important kasturi ot meet her love

and roobie ko gussa kyon ata hai i think because he has not met his love jo uske anger ko shaanth karein

devika seems nice lady

very nice part and update soon

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robina

@nrasheed

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

hiya Kay, i have to tell you i throughly enjoy reading Kya yehi pyaar hai..(its stupendous kiddo.) i luv your writing technique, its very natural and very easy to imagine in my head as i read. and i luved how you continued with the sense of smell...great job... devika's character has me totally in luv with her, i luv how she took a chance with kasturi, cause your right sometimes opportunity only knocks once and you have to be bold enough to take it and run with it.. and yes though kasturi is younge i honestly believe that some people are just do have the golden touch...and are born to be leaders..its not something that can be taught or learned in school or uni. thats the difference btw a good leader and a great leader...(or so i think) devika's an amazing mother and boss (i cant wait to see what you do with her character.)👏👏👏 but you've portrayed her with such clarity that i cant help but smile and feel for her and i wonder what problems she has with Puru...i'll be waiting to find out in more detail.. I luved robbie's dress code keep it that way...totally suits him...😉 over all your doing a bang up job kay...your amazing waiting for the next part...waiting for roka to meet... take care

luv diii