FAN FICTION - BY SHAINA - Page 17

Ya Shaina do write a long romantic scene between them...
ill be witing for it...write it soon... 😃

where r u shai patiya.....come and write the next part...... cant wait.....

do write soon....mewil not cum 4sum days 😭 😉

PART 41

(In lst prt Anuj & Anurag rn away & pandit was fainted!!!)
CONTINUS..................
(Mayank enterz the temple & sits next to the pandit,Anuja & Surween sits next to him)
Anuja--"Mayank...Hu du u came here..I mean Aunty told us that u r out of the station wid some work * wat happend tou??? I mean these bandages.........................???"
(Mayank smiles & luks @ Pandit & Surween)
Mayank--"Relax yaar!!! I wil tel u everything ....but not here"
Anuja--"O.K"

(Mayank ces Surween is a little bit tensed)
Mayank--"Wat happend to u?"
(Surween luks @ him & taks him in an other corner....Pandit & Anuja r lukking them...& Anuja smiles)
Mayank--"Saru!!! Wat happend??? Y r u weeping??"
(Surween starts to cry morew loudly)
Mayank(to himself)--"Oh GOD! started again....crying baby"
(Mayank holds her & let her to sit there.....)
Mayank--"U sit here! I wil b bk in a moment"
(Surween agrees..........Mayank jgoes bk to Anuja & Pandit)
Mayank--"Pandit g.....its raining cats&dogs.....hu wil u go home"
Pandit--"I wil manage sir...Dont worry!"
Mayank--"Oh no Its my responsibility...to care my workerz"
(Anuja luks @ him surprisingly)
Anuja--"Ur worker................??!?!?"
(Mayank smiles again,....& asks her to b stay there keep quite)
Pandit--"No no sir!!! I hv to go now!!! Iam sure Mr.general Bakhshi wil b waiting 4 me in the Army headquaterz....Let me go plz"
Mayank--"Oh ya..........I was totalyy ..............anyways bye & thnx a lot 4 ur gr88 support! and take care..."
Pandit--"Oh mention not sir! It my pleasur to work wid u!!! & ya sir wil u come to HQs tomorrow"
Mayank--"Yes...Ofcourse"
Pndit--"Bye sir"
(Mayank nodeds O.K leave now)
Anuja--"Abe oe!!! tussi te wade smart ho"
Mayank--"Main nu pata hai.....dont b silly yaar"
Anuja--"Hmmmmmmmmmmm!!O.K lets go na!"
(Mayank laughs over her naughty deeds..)
Mayank--"No...U hv to go home alone now!"
Anuja--"Y............now u r here na!& in this bandaged condition u hv to take rest @ ur home "
Mayank--"I know...Actually I hv some pendingwork to compltele I wil b there in the evening 4 sure"
(Anuja cs Surween besides Mayank & smiles naugtily..... after sume time she says)
Anuja--"O.K I c ...Bye...I wil inquire everything @ home Mr.Mayank Bajaj"
(Mayank smiles & both shares a hug.............surween cs this &.................440 volts current around her)
Mayank--"Byre Take care"
Anuja--"Bye.........."

(Mayank turns aroud to Surween....& cs her amngry)
Mayank--"Wat happend???"
Surween--"Oh..Now I hv to told u tht wat happend???Hu was she???"
(Mayank is luking so confuse.....After a little while..He tries to du a drama)
Mayank--"Oh...............she!!! She is Anuja"
Surween--"Anuja....."
Mayank--"Anuja.....My best freind &....................."
Surween--"wat and???????????"
Mayank--"And pheoncy"
Surween--"Wat????????????????"
(Surween turns aside & hving BIG BIG TEARS in her eyes...............Mayank is enjoying her condition...&.smiles secrectly)
Mayank--"Hey Saru Wat happwend now??"
(Surween turns to him)
Surween--"Nothing.....I was thinking that its so late & I hv to leave now"
Mayank--"Oh..But itsreally raining hard"
Surween--"Its O.K 4 me"

(Surween starts to walk away.....................& Mayank is still enjoying her condition..........Mayank goes after her)

continus.......................

oh god shai.....why did u stop.... my god best part yet to come... write soon na.....

Yeahh!!! Write soon!!!!!!!!!!!! This is fun!

where is this shai girl... she very lazy these days....... cant wait angel.....

PART 42

(In lst prt Mayank was continusly teasing surween)
CONTINUS.................
(Mayank is walking after surween..& Surween is walking as faster as she can)
Mayank--"Saru............"
(Surween is still walking widout listing to him........................& the ran is much harder than b4 with the fast wind..............)
Mayank--"Arre saru!!! Yaar plzz stop na.....listen to me"
(over crosses her & stops her frm going away)
Surween--"Mayank plz let me go!!"
(Tries to goout frm another side......Just then Mayank holds her gently frm both the arms.....Surween is lukking @ his face with gr88 embarisment,surprise & shyness)
Mayank--"Wat happend to u suddenly han??......I was just kidding yaar! U know that I luv u too much & I know that U luv me with the same depth............"
Surween--"It was a joke?!?!""
(Mayank smiles & holds her fce........... remove her tearz with his hands...& kisses her forehead.............Surween is melting in his arms & both shares a gr888888888888 & cute hug......there is still raining outside)
the song is playng behind.....

DIL MERA POOCH RAHA HAI TUM SE......
KIYA PYAAR KAROGE...............MUJH SE...........................
YE JO PAL JEEVEN MEIN AYA HAI
HUM KO MILAYA PHIR EK BAAR
TRE HI SAPNE HAIN ANKON MEIN....HAN IN ANKON MEIN O MERE YAR!
PHIR SE DIWANA DIL YE POCHEE.............
KIYA PYAAR KAROGE MUJH SE.....................
( there the moments r remebring they hv spent together)

AFTER A LITTLE WHILE..........................
(Surweren & Mayank leave each other & lukking in anothers eyes luvingly..............just then Surween embareses again & turns a side..............Mayank luks her...................Make her to stand face-by-face ..........................!!! ..................Cs again that she is weeping)
Mayank--"Hey wat happend now???"
(Surwen removes her tears ........& luks towards him)
Surween--"Nothing.............................just.......... .....tearz of happiness"
Mayank--"Oh..I c these r the tears of happines......................hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!But there is no diffrence b/w tears of happiness & tears of sadness"
(Surwee luks @ him again and Mayank starts to ran away..................Surween is behind him)

(Now they r outside the temple & being wet in rain..................Just then Surween holds Mayank & takes him under the roof)
Mayank--"wat yaar!! Its soo romantic & guddy guddy weatger outside"
(Surween is drying his face & hair with her dupatta)
Surween--"I know..................But in the fainted contition its not gud 4 u to enjoy this rain...."
(Mayank luks @ her & smiles luvingly)
Mayank--"I know this fact but thereis another fact .....of which I m totally aware of..................."
( He standsup & start to walk under the shelter......Surween is cpontinusly lukking @ him...goes behind him)
Surween--"Oh really!!!........tell me!!!"
(Surween turns him................Mayank turns & holds her gain...)
Mayank--"Madam the fact is that til the time u r wid me...............nothing wil happen to me"
(Surween smiles.............................)
Surween--"No Mayank.I want that nothing should happen to u ever!!! either I would wid u or not!!"
Mayank--"Same here Saru .............I also wish the same 4 u!! But I know that our luv is soo deep & v wil b together tilthe last breath of our lives"
Surween--"I wish............................so"
(Mayank & Surwen shres a big & cute hug again...............................and r losted in eachothers arms)

continus,.............................

Hey sorry guys 4 a late post! net was not working properly!!!😭

Anyways..I f hate the lyrics plz tel me..its my own bongi-creation...mixed uo wid the real one!😆

PART 43
(In lst prt Mayank & Surween confessed their luv 4 each other)
CONTINUS................
(Mayank & Surween r totaly losted in oneanothers arms..........then they r just toleave oneanother....there is a gr8888 horrible voice of thunder sounds......................................Surween hugs Mayank again & holds him as tightly as she can!........................)

AFTER SOME TIME.....
(They separetes & Mayank cs that Surween is shivring )
Mayank--"WOW....! u r geting a rain effect!"
Surween--"Its vry cold....................aaa mama!!!"
(Mayank smiles.....)
Mayank--"No not mama mama....u hv to say......GOD GOD"
Surween--"Y...."
Mayank--"Arre Hes the one hu can stop this rain sweetie"
(Surween starts to sneezing on the face of Mayank as..They r standing too much closly )
Mayank--"Oh no..................Thuuuuuuuuuuu!!! ewwwwwwww"
Surween--"Oh Iam...................Achi.......................Sorry!!!"
(Mayank smiles on her conditiuon........Takes off his black lether jecket & puts it on Surween's body...Surween is lukking @ his face)
Surween--"Mayank...wat r u doing??? Arre u wil b effected by this cold weather.....& already u r not totaly healthy"
Mayank--"Stop talking bogusly!!!"
(Mayank luks here & there...........................)
Surween--"Wat r u lukking 4??"
Mayank--"Hmmmmmmmmmmmm"
Surween--"Wat r u lukkig sir?"
(Mayank smiles & holds her frm the back......)
Surween--"Wat r u doing??".....(Getting embarrse)
Mayank--"Iam kidnpping u sweetheart"
(Both laughs...)
Mayank--"Luk there is a hut like thing.."
(Surween luks there....Hits his head naughtily......)
Surween--"Its not a hut like thing its a hut"
Mayank--"Lets go there!!!.....Bcoz if v wil stay here for some moments futher than its very difficult to say any gud thing abt us"
Surween--"Ya ....I know"
(Both leaves........)

IN THE PATH...........
(Surween & Maynk r walking.....on the mountanious velley & ,....................Surween falls again on Mayank)
Surween---"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..Ouchj oh Maya......k"
Mayank--"LOLZ......u hv to fall on me evry time"
Surween--"Yes...."
(Both laughs again.....& Mayank tries to get up....as both r fully painted by the muddy water..Surween laughs heartly on his this condition....................)
Mayank--"Wat heheheheehe"
Surween--"Luk @ ur self"
Mayank--"Oh ..I know Iam totaly decorated in the muddy water But wat abt u mam..U dont want to get up"
Surween--"Iam trying to du so...."...........................(But in vain.......She luks @ Mayank hu is lukking @ her too...)
Mayank--"Hurry up"
(Surween gives her hand to him tpo holds it...as she can b able to standup....................Mayank holds her hand...& puls her towards him)
Surween--"thanxxx"
Mayank--"Its my pleasure"
(Both starts to walk again)


CONTINUS.................................................... ..........