FAN FICTION - BY SHAINA - Page 19

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Posted: 19 years ago
thnx sweatheart!...I wil update it soon! 😃
NasH20 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW nice shaina 👏 👏 👏 ...keep it coming yaar 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago

part 47

@ MAYANK'S HOUSE......

(Anuja & Mayank's mom r chatting.....)
Mayank's mom--"Anuja du u know when wil Mayank come bake...?!..I am missing my son a lot!Its a long period pased after he called me"
Anuja--"Aunty plz...He said he wil b bk in the evening.."
Mayank's mom--"Ohmy son wil b @ home.....Oh GOD...."
Anuja--"Ya"
(The mayank's mom leaves & anuja is thinking of something)

BK TO MAYANK & SURWEEN...
ITS 9:30 PM...
(Surween & Mayank r on jorney......they r doing a chatting & laughing.......Surween has tightly holded Mayank frm the bak.....Suddenly it starts raining cats & dogs.....)
Surween--"Oh...no...not again!:
Mayank--"Shit...Saru dont b upset & nervous.......v wil handle this situation....."
Surween--"Ya...lets hope so..."
(Mayank decreses the speed of bike....& after nearly 15-20 mins.. He stops a bike near a shelter.......)
Mayank--"Go inside....."
Surween--"Ya"
(Surween gets off the bke & runs towards the shelter......Mayank parks the bike inside the same shelter but on opposite side....The area is toooooooo horrible even there is no single man.....Mayank enterz the shelter...)
Surween--"Oh..god! I hope that the rain stops as soon as it can"
(Mayank luks @ her.......Surween luks him too & smiles pitly........Mayank luks here & there....& then goes a few steps forward)
Surween--"Maynk...whwer r u.....Mayank..."
(Still no reply,....................Surween is getting fear....n is going steps to a side which Mayank goes......"
Surween--"maya..nk.....where r u?"
(Starts to cry...................Suddenly some one holds her frm a bk.....Surween turns and cs him standing there...she hugs him ...)
Mayank--"Saru...wat happend"
Surween--"Where were u?...I was feeling my self alone her in such a horrible time...."
(Mayank holds her...........& takes her..make her to sit on a bench..........Surween is not leving him as she is very nervous.....)
Mayank--"Saru..relax..I was her to search a plzce...v can pass a time till the rain stops..Relx"
(Both r sittng on a bench & r waiting to rain stops..

(after a while the rain stops a little....Both gets up & walks towards the bike.....Mayank strts it.....again.,..again...again...No way!!!/...Ah,,,,Hu to go...Bike is unchured..cant start!)

continus,,,

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow...shai patiya...... going gr8 yaar......
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Posted: 19 years ago
Good job shaina 👏 👏 👏
Dont forget to continue it soon...will be waiting... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago


PART 48
(Mayank & Surween r stiks again in a rain...rain stops but the bike is punchure.....)
Mayank--"Now tel me! wat to du"
Surween--"lets play hide n seek"
Mayank--"Arre stop talking bogisly..Im serious"
(Surween laughs heartly by csing Myank's state)
Mayank--"Cum lets go"
Surween--"Ya..but hu?"
Mayank--"God has given us feet"
Surween--"No............"
(Now Mayank laughs...& holds her hand & pushes her towards him......Both leavs)

AFTER 1 HOUR....
(Surween starts to shout.....)
Surween--"Mayank..Iam tired!..cant walk any more"
Mayank--"Saru..plz just few steps more! Then v wil reach to a city"
Surween--"No I cant walk any more"
(Mayank stops & turns to her...Holds her face lovingly )
Mayank--"Saru!Plz 4 me"
surween--"no..I wil not...& Iam feeling a cold too"
(Surween sits on a road & Mayank is very tensed & feeling pity for her..he luks here & there & then picks Surween in his arms& stars to walk)
Surween--"Mayank..."
Mayank--"Sssh! keep quite!..v hv to leave this area as soon as possible"
(Surween holds him more tightly! & is quite)
AFTER A HOUR THEY R NEAR A CITY

(Mayank puts Surween down )

Mayank--"Shuh........"

Surween--"Aww! chweetu! is tired now"

Mayank--"No..No y?..Iam not a human na!"

Surween--"Awwww!~ baby is very angry!!"

Mayank--"Achi"

Surween--"Awww! U hv getted a cold!..LOL!..cum lets go a few steps forqard!

continus..

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: witchkzk

HOW BUGGING???.... 🥱 🥱

Wat?😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
SWEETHEART ITS FABTSTIC 👏 SORY MEIN RASTE MEIN KHO GAYE THI 😉 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
STORY DEKHKLAR JAAN WAPAS AYEEEE 😳 KEEP IT UP MAN 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Rocking stuff shai! Waiting for your next part:)

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