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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Shaina...you idiot..why did u post ur FF parts at the HUB ...I never knew u were continuing...now I have to read 58 parts together...now u do one thing for me...either PM me all the pasrts together or post them in the HUB...I dont feeling liek going thru 38 pages

When did I?????????????😕..sorry If I did...Ok..I wil give...!!! through PM...tell me the part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sorry...that was a typo. 😆 .I meant to as why DIDN'T u post it at teh hub??? I have read just teh pasrt in my 1st post in this topic..uske baad ke mujhe Pm kar do please
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Sorry...that was a typo. 😆 .I meant to as why DIDN'T u post it at teh hub??? I have read just teh pasrt in my 1st post in this topic..uske baad ke mujhe Pm kar do please

OK sweet-heart!..I wil..😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

PART 62

(Mayank & Surween moves towards the parking....both are quite silent.....)

Mayank--"Saru...stand here I wil be back in just 2 seconds...."

Surween--"Ya"..

(Mayank goes....& cums back with his bike...Surween sits & both leaves....)

DURING A JOURNEY..

(Mayank & Surween are quite..atlast Mayank breaks the silent...)

Mayank--"Wat happend ..???"

Surween--"Nothing.."

Mayank--"Dont try to tell a lie...I know something is wrong...thats why you are too quite..."

Surween--"I told you na...everything is fine.."

Mayank--"Ok..may be..."

(They reaches to Surween's house...& Surween is walking towards her house...without saying Mayank .."bye"...Mayank is sure now that something is wrong..he calls her from the back ....but invain....Surween has gone in the house..Mayank waits there for some time...thinks abt Surween & leaves....)

(Mayank is stuck in a traffic jamm...then he gets a call from Aman....he recives it...& moves towards the party place...There he entrs & joins his freinds again....all asks him that ..where was he during last 1 hr....Mayank gives them false xcuses...& sits in a corner there..as he is a littlt bit upset....After a while Aman...& other freind joins him there...)

Aman--"Wat happend Mayank..?"

Mayank--"Nothing.."

Aman--:& where is....!!!"

Mayank--"Surween..!!!"

(Aman smiles...)

Aman--"Ya..Surween...I forgot her name...where is she..??"

(Aman sits nxt to him...)

Mayank--"At her home...its late at night...that why I have dropped her to her house..as I want to stay wid u for a long time.."

Aman--"thats good...infact..its really good that you have started to think abt ur freinds...Mama's boy..."

(Mayank's freinds laugh...& he is staring at Aman)

Aman--"...???wat happend now..??? Have I said anything wrong?"

(Mayank smiles....& all starts to enjoy a party...)

ITS 2:00pM @ NIGHT..

(Mayank & his freinds are sitting on a city pull alone...at too late....as the party is over...nearly 2 hrs b4...& all are laughing like mads..sharing there good moments...& then fixes the program of nxt day & all of them leaves...)

(Mayank is now back to his house...& he is feeling dowzy...cant stand on his feets properly...Mayank opens the door...& goes to his bed room...lies there on a bed...& sleeps in just seconds...His mom cums to his room after 1/2 an hour..as she saw his room's door opend...& guessed that he is back......cs him liying there like this....& puts a blanket over him & leaves.....)

IN A MORNING....ITS 10:00 AM.....

(Mayank is still sleeping...& evrybody has lefted for his job...his cell rings....& Anuja cums inside..cs that the cell is continusly ringing..but Mayank is lying there like a dead...she picks the cell & cs the no. of missed calls.its 11...switches it off..& goes back...)

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PART 63

(Mayank is back from party ...)

IN A MORNING....ITS 10:00 AM.....

(Mayank is still sleeping...& evrybody has lefted for his job...his cell rings....& Anuja cums inside..cs that the cell is continusly ringing..but Mayank is lying there like a dead...she picks the cell & cs the no. of missed calls.its 11...switches it off..& goes back...)

(Anuja cums downstairs...& sits on a couch....thinks abt Mayank for a moment & then picks a magzine to read....after sum time Mayank's mom reaches there..)

Mayank's mom--"Anuja.."

(Anuja luks at her...)

Anuja--"Yes Aunty.."

Mayank's mom--"Where is Mayank?"

Anuja--"He is still sleeping!"

(Mayank's mom is surprising...luks @ Mayank's room)

Mayank's mom--"Y..???..Mayank has'nt sleep ever too late..!!..OK..I am going to him..."

(Mayank's mom opens the door & enters there....luks at Mayank..& sits nxt to him....calls him)

Mayank's mom--"Mayank..!"

Mayank's mom--"Mayank.."

(Mayank is giving no responce..then his mom shakes him a little bit..then he wakes up...)

Mayank's mom--"Thnx to God.."

(Mayank luks at her..& smiles....)

Mayank--"Wat happend Mama.?"

Mayank's mom--"Wat happend to you Mayank..?? U have'nt slept ti;; too late ever..I was frightend"

Mayank--"Nothing mama..actually I came too late at night thats y!.."

(Mayank's mom interfares..& slodes him as she is in great anger)

Mayank's mom--"I know...but ...anyways...u are too careless abt your self...I dont know that whats your problem...Army men are too much responsible but you..."

Mayank--"Mama.plz"

Mayank's mom--"Wat 'plz'"

(Mayank's mom & Mayank are arguying just then Anuja enterz the room..)

Anuja--"May I interfare between you two guys..."

(Both luk at her..)

Mayank--"ya"

(Anuja cums & tells Mayank that there is a call for him)

Anuja--"Mayank ji...there is a call for you...!"

(Mayank goes down stairs...& attends the call)

(Mayank is downstairs..& Anuja sits with Mayank's mom)

Anuja--"Aunty wat happend?"

Mayank's mom--"Anuja.this boy is a headache for me...Hu can he so careless about himself..??God!!!"

Anuja--"Aunty relax..you know na..Mayank is like this always.."

Mayank's mom--"ya but.."

Anuja--"Dont worry."

(Til then Mayank comes back....Anuja points his mother to remain quite...& Mayank's mom leaves..)

Anuja--"Have you attend the call?"

Mayank--"Ya.."

(Anuja teases him)

Anuja--"It seems to b very important call"

Mayank--"How.."

Anuja--"Its very simple..same number..11 missed calls..."

Mayank--"11 missed calls .."

Anuja--"Ya..ya,,11 missed calls.."

(Mayank checks his cell quickly & cs the number..its same..Mayank is blusshingg...)

Anuja--"It seems that you have grown up ...I was thining that Aunty is really tensed abt you..now she wil be tension free..!!"

(Mayank turns & luks at her..& smiles)

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PART 64

(Mayank feels embrassed!!)

Mayank--"Shut up..."

Anuja--"Oh..oh ho..wooo"

Mayank--"What..???"

(Anuja laughs...)

Anuja--"OK..yaar! Dont b confused...I was just conforming the news...to tell aunty na..."

Mayank--"Wht..Anuja r u in ur sense..???"

Anuja--"Now..its sure!!..thnx Major...Auntyyyyyyyy"

(Anuja calls Maynk's Mom..& Mayank tries to make her quite)

Anuja--"Aunty!!!"

Mayank--"Anuja..idot..!!!...stop ur "live coverage" facility..I wil kil u"

(Til then Mayank's mom reaches back..)

Mayank's mom--"What has happend now..??"

Mayank--"Nothing."

Anuja--"annnnnnnnm..."

Mayank's mom--"Mayank..leave her!!!"

(Mayank just leaves her & Anuja tries to unvail the ecret)

Anuja--"Aunty..Mayank...luves......"

Mayank--"Mama...lie.....Surween"

(Just Mayank unvails the truth himself..& Anuja whisles happily...&Mayank's Mom is looking at them....)

Anuja--"U have done it Majorrrrrrrr..!!! Yahoooooooooooo!!"

Mayank's mom--"Anuja..go down stairs.."

Anuja--"Ok.."

(Goes to Mayank..& whispers in his ear)

Anuja--"All the best Mayank!"

(Mayank stares her..& Anuja leaves)

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PART 65

(Anuja goes outside tha room and stand there to listen that wats going on..)

Mayank's mom--"Who is Surween.. Mayank?"

Mayank--Mom..!.........(Tells her abt Surween)

Mayank's mom--"OH!!...Then why dont you tell me earlier?..My boy...now I can say that My son has gown up....!!"

Mayank--"Mama........."

(And Mayank hugs his mom...)

(Anuja luks inside the room)

Anuja--"Aunty..can I cum in now?"

(Mayank & his mom luks at her & both laughs...)

Mayank's mom--"Ya now u can..!"

(Anuja cums inside and sits on the couch near them...)

Maynk's mom--"Mayank..when will you take Surween here..I want to meet her and to announce your marrige ..."

Mayank--"Mama...I luv you!"

Anuja--"Oh...now you guys forget me totally...Its me ..who made this monkey to tell you abt Surween....And no body is asking me...!!"

(mauj karo)😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks Shina For this Gr8 story

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