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Posted: 19 years ago
wow jaan its fabulous i love it 👏
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PRT 37


(Surween came to Mayank)
CONTINUS............
(Anuj is taking a round in hospital & continusly thinking abt Mayank & Anuja............Just then his freind joins him & Anuj is unawre abt his presence)
Anuj's freind--"Anuj..............."
(Anuj is not repling.His freind shake him like a mango shake)
Anuj--"Wats ur problem??? Tell me y u ppl dont leave me alone.............???Han!!!"
(Is badly shouting.............his freind.is just confused & feeling a little bit shame as many ppl r present around them)
(Anuj cs his face xpressions andsays sorry.................)
Anuj--"Yaar Iam sorry! Iam tensed......................."
(Anuj;s freind luks @ him wid anger & leaves frm there)
Anuj (To himself)--"Just bcoz of this Mayank I am losing my all dear relations!!! I hv to handle him right now......................But wat can I du???".................................(ThinkIng & is walking cotinusly suddenly stops...........& smiles WICKEDLY)

BACK TO SURWEEN.........................
(Surween & her freind r sitting there in Surween's cabin...............both r taking tea.............and her friend is cotinusly chatting wid her.....................but no responce !!!!...................She luks @ Surween.....hu is LOST in someother world!!! and cotinusly mixing the tea wid a spoon.......................Her freind smiles and take her 1 finger to dip in HOTTT tea.............)
(After the fingr dipped)
Surween--"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! OUch!!!!"................"R u mad!!!"
Freind--"No Iam not................but so u!!!"
(Surween gets nervous)
Surween--"Wat r trying to say???????????????han!!!"
Freind--"U know it much better than me!!! Wats going on??? U r engaged to someone else!!"
(Surween feels sad............)
Surween--"Ya I know! That Iam engaged to a person hu is totaly SICK!!!& it is the BITTEREST truth of my life!"
Freind--"But u hv to b loyal to him!!!"
Surween--"Y???..................Iam engaged to him..............Not married! & I think tht I hv to brok this FAKE relation as soon as possible!!!"
Freind--"Wat???..............But Y??"
Surween--"Becauze I luv someone else"
Freind--"I know he is non other than Mayank...................Right???"
Surween--"Ya & when u know that then y r asking me foolish qs"
Freind--"But"
Surween--" I DONt want 2 listen anythin abt our relation!!!,,,,,Iam going to meet him"

continus..............................

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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW!!! Let's see what Anuja and Mayank can do, I hope Anuj does not do something nasty!!!!

Gr8 going Shai!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thnx sukhi! I also want 2 know that! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago


PRT 38
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(In lst prt Anuj thought to du something nasty wid Mayank & Surween hv left to c Mayank)
CONTINUS........
(Surween is walking toward the Entrenc suddenly somebody holds her arm roughly.......she turns.....& is shockes)
Surween--"Leave my hand...Hu dare u to hold it???"
Person--"Its my right......."
Surween--"Anurag...Its enough & discustig Leave my hand"
Anurag--"Sorry Saru"
Surween--"Anurag Leave me I hv to go somwhere"
Anurag--"I know where u want to go...."
(Surween luks him...........)
Anurag--"U wil surly go to meet ur Mayank but after OUR marrige"
(Surween is shocked)
Surween--"Marrige............???"
(Anurag smiles WICKDLY)
Anurag--"Ya sweatheart OUR marrige.................Its natural v r engaged to eachother..Then v hv to marry wid oneanother"
(Surween trie a lot to make herself free but invain.............Anurag takes her & pusshes her in car & leaves frm there)

(Surween's freind calls somebody & tells the whole situation..........................)

IN THE CAR.............
(Surween is continusly trying to make herself free................but Anurag is doing Nasty deeds...................nearly abt 2 hrs....they stops the car @ someplace.................Anurag picks Surween in his arms & Surween starts to beat him)
Surween--"Leave me..................."
(Anurag takes her in TEMPLE above.............& puts her there...........)
(Surween is lukking @ him angrily.

Anurag is lukking here & there after a little while a car cums & stops there.................Surween Luks @ the person & is shocks.............

(Anurag goes towards him & shakes his hand......That man asks som task To Anurag & Anurag steps towards the car)

(Surween is getting a huge shock after knows abt the GIVEN TASK!!!!!!!!!)
Anurag (2 the man)--"Here she is"
(The man turns........................Its Anuj.............)
(Anuj luks @ the girl wid him hu is continusly staring him angrily)
Anuj--"Weldon Anurag.....Now Mayank wil cum to know that He did a big mistake by take a enimity wid me!

cotinus........


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Posted: 19 years ago
WOWOW a big fight scene is gonna happen 😆 i want Mayank to reasch in time to save surween. 😳
Gr888 going Shaina keep it up yaar 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

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Part 39


(Anurag & Anuj kidnapped Surween....................)
Anuj(To the girl)--"Now U..............!!! "
(Girl is starring him angirily.................Anuj is lukking @ her)
Anuj--"Now u r mine..............only mine"
(Anurag interfares & points 2wards Surween)
Anurag--"And she is mine.............."
(Anuj turns towards him & both laughsWICKDLY & HORIBLY)

(Anuj calles someone.....)
Anuj--"Ya....when wil u cum....V hv no more time!!!"
(Frm otherside) --"Ya Iam cumming...............plz wait some more time"
Anuj--"O.K v r waiting.............."
(To Anurag)--"He is cumming"
(Both the girls r lukking @ each other.....& r getting more nervous and is getting fear intheir hearts)

(After a little while.........somebody is cumming towards the temple)
Anurag(to Anuj)--"He is here.............."
(Anuj & both the girls luks towards the person............................A pandit is standing there)
(Both Surween & Anuja r shocked............................)
Anuj(To the pandit)--"Thanx to god that u r here...................Start the marrige ceremony"
Pandit--"Y not where r the girls???"
Anuj--"Here...............both the girls & both the boys r present u just without wasting a time start ur work"
Pandit--"O.K................."
(Anuja & Surween r getting scared & hving tears in boths eyes............................)

(Anuj takes Anurag in the other corner of the temples & says somthing)
(Anuja luks @ the stairs & smiles ,...................the wind is blowing & suddenly it is raining cats&dogs)
(Anurag turns towards Surween).
(Anurag opens the ropes & touches her......Surween stands up & runs back to the pillar back to her)
Anurag--"Dear Surween!..Y r u running frm me.............Iam ur fiancee & after a mean while I wil b ur Hubby"
(Somebody frmthe bak)
--"It can't b happen ever"
(All luks a side & r shocked...............)
(Face is shown)
(Mayank is there.................lukking towards Surween & Anuja..............)
(Surween runs towards him & hugs him)

continus........................

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Posted: 19 years ago
Ohhhhh wowow...the Hero is here...abh maza aye ga...
hehehehehe...Anuj n Anurag ki pittai hogi...lolzzz 😉
Good going Shaina 👏 👏 , continue it...
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Posted: 19 years ago
N dont cry yaar...you'r fanfic is awesome...everyone loves it...they sure will read it... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG!

Awesome stuff yaar Shai!! So sorry for the late reply! Please continue yaar:)

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