FAN FICTION - BY SHAINA

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Hum Saath Saath Hain – by Shaina

INTRODUCTION:

The main charecterz r

1:Surween sharma,played by sweta tiwari

2:Mayank bajaj,pljayed by ronit roy

3:Anuj sexana,played by cezzane khan

Surween Sharma iz the eldest daughter of Ajay Sharma,Ajay sharma works in a form. she has 1 more sister who iz 4 years junior to her,and her name iz Maira sharma,maira iz a college girl and iz very intelligent and hard working like her elder sister.The both daughters r very dear to their parents,and r very loving.Surween sharma iz a young girl wid beauty and brainz,who iz just stepped in the practical life, hardly 3-4 yrs ago.And now she iz working inthe leading bank of the country as a assistant manager.

Mayank Bajaj iz the elder son of Ravi Bajaj ,He has 1 sis and 1 bro junior to him.His father is one of the famous buisness man of the country and alwayz wanted Mayank involved in his biusness like her junior bro....but Mayank was,nt intersted in buisness and he joined army to fulfill his childhood dream.He is a handsome major wid grey eyes and attractive personality and the most elegible guy in his army.

Anuj Sexana iz the one an only "sahabzada" of his parents moloy and mohihini Sexana.He iz the doctor in the leading hospitl of city.....Life Care Hospital

PART 2

Its January and the season iz too cold
Surween iz getting ready 4 her bank and she iz in hurry and her mom iz running b4 her and shouting surween kuch to kha le!!!! ab shaam ko wapas aye gi kuch to kuch to kha le.mom plz............bhook nahin hai!!!she rushed out in hurry.
Anuj was still sleeping in his bed and his dad cums and shakes him"Anuj..................utho ,wakeup!!! Luk @ the time.anuj"Then he wakesup and luk @ his dad "oh baba!!!gud morning..........." moloy"gud morning....wakeup son 12 bajne se pehle uth jao"
Anuj"O.K dad"
then wakes up and suddenly he gets tha shock (till then his father left tha room)Oh......mu god.............baba.......its 7:30 god doc.dan will kill me
And now,
In an Army area...........The Army general iz searching 4 Major Mayank Bajaj............suddenly there speards the voice of gun shooting..............now the general iz O.K and walks 2 wards the spot of shoting ,There was a handsomeman man standing wearing the army uniform and his face was on the opposite side The army general claps an says"weldone .........weldone!!!weldone major bajaj"
Major turned and He was Major Mayank Bajaj.
2 b contineud...........

PART 3

major turned and he iz Major Mayank Bajaj.Notices the general ther and give him a true major type slute by his style and says attentively"thank u sir,"general"major!!!I am very proud of u, u r such a brilliant guy wich iz totally unbeliveable!!! "Mayank replies"thank u sir, but u ,here any problem"(major and general r walking 2wards an army mess)general"No mayank,no problem !!! I was cum here 2 c ur style"Mayank"han........... ,sir wat r u talking...I can't understand"(general laughs)and says"Don't worry my boy.......actually there iz an important meeting of Army officers espacially the majors and generalls,frm all over the country"Mayank"but sir......y.......I mean any thing serious bcoz I hav'nt any information abt this so ......any emergency?"
(the both r now standing the army mess)general says
"Major attend the meeting every doubt will b clear,O.K"
Mayank:"yes sir I will b there in 10 minutes"
(Now,cum back 2 surveen and anuj)
Surveen is sitting in her cabin and iz working so involvly that she is unware abt her surroundings,just then her intercome rings and there iz a call frm another branch of the same bank surveen attends the call and call her secretry in......
secretary:mam!!! can I cum Inside
surveen "yes sheetal cum and plz takecare of my cabin and b alert if the call arrives 4 me, I am going to the banch 2 there iz some problem and I have 2 go"
Sheetal:"O.K mam I will takecare here of everything, u hve no need 2 worry abt here"Surween"Thankxxxxxx sheetal,and by"(she rushed out )
now cum 2 doc.Anuj SExana..............
(anuj is in hurry as doc.Dan will kill him )
Oh GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!plzzzzzz help me ,plz (and turnes 2 the board of meeting) And as he enterz the room he cees doc.Dan iz starring @ him,angrily
doc.Dan"have u ever noticed the time dr.Anuj"????????
y r u so much late?(Anuj was ...............)
Sir, there was a traffic jam and I stucked there.......
2 b countineud................

PART 4

Anuj was scolded by Dr.Dan)sir I was stucced in the traffic jam........and u............r countineusly scolding me...........not fair!!!
Dr.Dan:"O.K Anuj...........plz sitdown and next time b careful,O.K?"Anuj:"yes sir.........."(and sits on his place next 2 his best friend Dr.Raj Malhotra,and iz still thanking GOD 4 his help)
(back 2 Surween and Major Mayank)
(Surween reaches @ the branch and enters inside hurrily,then goes straight 2 the managers cabin 2 find out wats the problem)
(Surween knocks the door and enters the room)
Surween:"Sir............wat happened???...........any problem......u called me so urgently"
Manager:"Surween................sitdown and relax,nothing so serious............(stands up and starts walking in his cabin.........he is very tensend)
Surween:"Sir! Iam sure there iz some thing very serious,plz tell me......can I help u"
(Manager turns and give her a sad luk)
"Surveen Tell me hu iz the cashier in ur branch,?"
Surveen:"Sir! Mr. Mittal Iz the cashier there ..any thing seroius?"
"surveen, I have a complain 4m a coustumer,that he had gone that 4 his payment but he was telled that there iz no pay................even 1 single penny in his account and the account iz closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Syrween shockess )"Wat......... ,Sir I mean hu can it possible???"If the man opens the acount there and iz still receiving his pay 4rm there then hu can it possible???".....
(surween stands up in worry and then)

(Surween luk @ her senior manager and )says:"Sir! can u plz call that man here I want 2 talk 2 him?
Manager:"o.k surween!"
(now here in the Army mess)
(major bajaj is going 2 the board of meeting as he enters the room......... he cees majors and generalz there wid many senior kornels!!!)
(Major slutes them all @ once)
"Sir,"(All gives him a luk and noded their heads in acceptance of his solute!!!)
(Major goes and sit on his seat)
(then 1 of the major gives him a luk and passes a file 2 wards him)
Major Mayank Bajaj takes the file and reads it ,(all the army memberz r looking @ him wid some expititions and hopes)

PART 5

Major Mayank Bajaj iz reading the file carefully and sfter some time He luks at everyone,general askes him "Major have u readed the whole file?"major maynk replies"Yes, sir I have read it totally,............but sir wat can I du 4 u in this case as it is a local city case and has to b solved by L.Police or C.B.I "
General noded his head that he ageers and say"Major!!ya I know that this case has 2 b solved by L.P orC.B.I but none of them can still solve it and now the issue bcums a serious matter,and on the bhalf of all army I request u 2 solve this case as u had solved all the cases b4"
(Major thinks of something 4 a while)and then says"Sir,U have 2 ordered me,not to request............I will try my best 2 solve this case but I will alwayz need ur support sir!!!"(all memberz smile and general luks @ him then says)"Major, I was very sure that u will accept thia chalange ,go.........get ready anf remember that u r going there as a common citizen,not as an army officer!!!Understood?"'yes sir,I know hou to solve this matter. (and gives them a sulute and turnes 2 door.general askes him to stop)
Major Mayank stops and turns 2 the general and luks at him.............
general wishes him all the best and says that my support and blessings r always wid u...........not only mines.......but the support and blessings of the whole army iz alwyz wid u major..........all the best.!!!
Thanxxxxxxx Sir,(and goes out of the room)
(cum back 2 Anuj and surween)
(Anuj and his b.friend Dr.Raj Malhotra r cuming out of the board of meeting and Dr.Anuj is upset a little bit ,Raj says )Wat happens yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!! u kno naa Dr.DAN alwayz bhaves like this ...........y r u so upset?
(Anuj stops and says)I am not upset bcoz he insulted me infront of all ,Iam upset bcoze I have'nt eat any thing since morning............)Raj gets a shock(wat.....u mean u were not stucked in the traffic jam )
"No,not at all I had wakedup late in the morning, and just rushed out of house 2 cum here"(innicently)
(raj smiled and says u will never change.........cum let's go to the canteen,then they rushed 2wards the H.canteen,There they orderd 4 a tea and some sanwiches,after a while they hears an annoucement of an emergency case and Anuj run 2wards the emergency ward)
(cum back 2 surwen)
(surween iz very woried abt tha situation and suddenly gets a shock!!!!!!!!)
"U..................wat r u doing here?,sir ..........."
(manager luks @ her and say )"he's the guy,who has a problem ?"
"Sir,he is fraud............he was trying 2 cash others checks by doing theur false signatures,..........sir he iz a fraud"
WILL MANAGER AGREE WID SURVEEN?2 FINDOUT WAIT AND DON'T 4GET 2 READ NEXT EPISODE
2 b countined..............

PART 6

Surween iz getting furious @ that man and she is trying continusly 2 manao her manger at wat she saying iz true.but tha manager iz not beliving her and continusly asking 4 a proof!!!now surween is getting and rushedout 2 find a proof against the man in anger
(cum back 2 Anuj and Major Mayank)
(Anuj and Raj r running 2wards tha E.W)
there was a serious accident case and yha nurse iz continusly asking the relatives of tha boy 2 write a F.I.R................On this Anuj gets furios at her and says 2 admite tha boy as police can b late and it iz possible that till that time the boy dies...........
They admitted tha boy and Anuj and Raj goes 2 tha O.T
(bck 2 Major Mayank Bajaj)
(mayank iz packing his bagz and iz getting ready 4 his new mission, and goes away on his new mission as a citizen.)
(now the major in Dehli @ his house door,he rings tha bell and iz waiting 4 the opening of the door)
His mom opens the door and gets surprizeon seening him)
Mayank....................
(mayank smiles and gives her a sonny hug)
maa............
(all the family memberz r happy 2 c him ,so suddenly but r more surprized)
(mayank enters his housr and hugs everyone)
Mom:"go mayank............get freshed and cum down 4 dinner"
mayank"o.k mom"
continus.................

PART 7

mayank cums 4 a dinner and sits next 2 his mom, his bro-sis r seems 2 b jalos as their mom iz giving more attention 2 their big-b)
Mayank cees this and laughs on their current situation,his mom and dad asks wat happens?
Mayank:"Mom these 2 r now getting jalous!!!!!!! (his bro-sis gets confused and smiles)
dad:"Mayank, this is really very gud 2 c u here,son Iam so happy"
mom:"I was missing u a lot son ,"
(mayank luks @ his mom-dad and smiles,then his mom is putting more food in his plate)
mayank says"mom......its enough 4 me, I can't eat more thn I have"
(his mom gives him a angry luk and says) Oh!I c now I understands that y r u getting so weak,u had'nt take the gud diet....!!!"
(mayank luks @ his family members hu r smiling a lot and says 2 his mom)
Mom:"I am a mojor now!!!and have 2 take care of my health,so don't worry.plz"
(after the dinner iz over, all the mems. r chatting and enjoying the tea,then they all sleeps)
(cum back 2 Surween & Anuj)
Surwen iz siting worried in her room and iz not taking interrest in anything, her mom,sis nd dad r worried )
then she tells them all happened in the bank
her mom says" don't worry beta........everything will b fine go and sleep..v will talk abt this in the morning"
"O.K mom"............surween replies

(cum back 2 Anul's house)
Anuj's mom iz still sitting on the dining table and iz waiting 4 her son...........she luks @ the clok it iz 3:00 a.m,)
Early in the morning.the door bell rings and his mom rans 2wards the door............there anuj iz standing
Where were u last night......?wat happened?et.c..........????????????????
Anuj says"mom relax.................and tell her all abt the accident case and his mom gets normal"I am proud of u son"
2 b ountinud...................

PART 8

Its 7:00 a.m..............
anuj is still sleeping bcoz he is very tired
(back 2 Surween)
Surween iz worried and her mom is asking her"surween y r u not getting ready?"wat happened"
" MomI am not going anywhere now,I will go 2 yhe police station 4 a complain,against that man"
(her mom gets a shock...... )
"wat r u saying.............."mom plzzzzzz"
"O.K............du wat u want 2 du..........."
( Surween takes a breakfast nd gets ready4 leaving)
(ther in bajaj house,mayank is geting ready 4 his mission,there his mom knocks the door.....
Mayank replies"cum in............."
(His mom is getting surprized,where is he going)
"Mayank,where r u going......."
"Oh.mom,I am going 2 the Army mess,there I have 2 entre mu attendence"
"O.K...........but don't 4get 2 take ur breakfast son,We r all waiting 4 u on the the table"
"O,K"(then he go downstairs and after taking a breakfast,he is readt 2 leave just then his father interrupts.............mayank,"
"yes,papa............."
"mayank u have 2 cum 2 my office 2day.............but u r going somewhere else..........."
(Myanak walks 2wardshis father and replies)"papa.....I have sum work 2 finish there after that I will definetaly cums 2 ur office"
(now his father iz happy and sys "promise...........???"
Son's promise dad............"
(then he rushed out of the house and goes 2 the A.M)
(Here in the A.M,Mayank parks his bike and enters the controller's room)
(there the general is waiting 4 him)
"Sir, may I cum in.........???"
(general surpizes 2 c him as he don't know that he iz tha reqiured man)!!!!!!!!!!!!
"U............yes,cum ,In."
"Sir, my name iz MAJOR MAYANK BAJAJ"
"Oh...........major............welcum,plz take a seat..."
"thank u sir,I was unable 2 recognise u as u r complely giving an impression of a common citizen" (major):)] )
"her iz ur file youg man and if u wnt sum more information,contacts me"
continus................

PART 9

(Mayank is reading the file,and after a while he luks @ general )"Sir............!!!"
"Yes major........have u readed all the case?"
"Yes sir,I have done it....."
"Major u have 2 join the C.B.I 4 the solution of the case,and u can get help by their senior officerz too,"
"O.K Sir,...........can I leave now sir?"
"Yes major u can go now.............and all the best major............b carefull"
"Thank u Sir and don't worry, I will b very carefull"
(then Mayank goes to the parking plot and gets his bike out of there and rushes out towards the C.B.I main branch)...................
(back 2 Anuj)
(Anuj wakes up and getting ready 4 his breakfast,He takes it just then the phon rings)"Hello............ya...wat..............Is he O.K?..........I am cumming,"
"hu's there son"............(mom asks him)
"ma, there was a call 4rm the hospital the patient iz getting critical state..................."I am going....
(then rushes 4 leaving)
(back to Surween)
(Surween is sitting in a police station since last 3 hours but in vain)
(she is getting horible)
(then she getsup and run 2wards the outdoor of the P.S
She iz in gr8 anger and is hitted by a bike and fell down on the street,now she iz trying 2 getting up there a man is comming 2wards her 4 her help...........the bike honour!!!!!!!!!!!!She refuses his offer and gets up by her on after she getts up she starts 2 scolding the man)" R u blind................can't c........idots....... "
(the face of the mn iz still not shown)"Wat r u staring??????????? hah...............hu r u?"
(face iz shown)He iz .......................?
Continus.........................

PART 10

he iz Mayank....... (hu iz too confuzed and can'nt understand wat's happening)
"R u O.K......?"(surween iz still staring @ him)
"Wat O.K...?balh.blah............blah"(Mayank cee that surween can't walking properly)"Mam...........u r not O.K cum I will take u to the hospital..........plz cum"
"No,thanxxxxxxxxx,wat u have already done is enough 4 me!!!!!!I can'nt take any risk "
"Mam......Iam so sorry,but plz belive me I hane'nt done it.............." "wat........if u have not done it....hu did it....u................ (all yhe people r lukind @ them,mayank iz now getting irritated and angry @ her)"O.K fine,I have done it with my will, and plz now can I take u to the hospital?"
(Then surween sits besides him on the bike and both of them a going to the hospital)...............
(back to anuj)
(Anuj arrives @ the hospital and goes straight to the I.C.U)"Wat happened .Is he O.K?"
(raj replies,)"Yaa relax he is O.K now"
"thank god..........."(And iz sitting on his chair,in his own cabin)

(Just then Mayank and Surween arrivers there and knows the door of anuj's cabin).............
"Yes cum in,they enterz and Mayank tells anuj that this lady is hitted by ny bike...........plz chek her"

Anuj check Surween, and says "there iz nothing serious.but she has to take a little rest with these medicinez"
(then Mayank and Surween cums out of the room and till then Surween iz cooled............and iz trying to talk to Mayank)
"Luk......."(Mayank turns and askes her his name after realizing that she iz talking to him)
"Mayank..........."
"O.K..............I am sorry.I has behaved very badly.............." "Its O.K"(now they r outside the hospital)
"U............plz wait here.........I will b back after purchazing these medicines and with my bike"(Surween nodded )"O.K.............but I can purchase the medicines..........." "but the fault was mine"
(Surween impressed)
(Mayank cums back ,but Surween askes him togive the medicines to him and)"Now,Iam O.K Mr.Mayank........I can go home by my own"
"no no peoblem I can drop u 2 ur house" (Surween gets angry )"No thanxxxxxxx.I can manage."

(then Surween takes the medicines 4rm him and starts to walk...........but iz going 2 fell down again..........)
(Mayank holdes her by the arm,and on this sudden happening Surween is just )
"I had tell u that I can drop u to ur house........plz cum,Both of them seated and rushes 2wards the surween's house)
continus...................

PART 11

(Both Mayank and Surween r now @ Surween's house)
"Here u r mam.............."(Mayank says 2 Surween)
(surween getsdown uf the bike and c Mayank)"Plz cum inside na,............."
"No,thanxxxxxxxxxx"
"U r angry wid me na,plz cum in"
(Mayank gets surprised and smiles)"No, mam actually I have a lots of work pending............which I have 2 finish.............so I am sorry,I can't cum inside"
"O.K bye.............and thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 ur gr888 help"
"No mention not,bye"(Then Mayank rushes awayand Surween is still lukking @ him)"He iz a nice guy"............
Then enterz the house,hermom gets worried and starts 2 asking her lots of Qs."Wats this.......wat happened?"
"Mom relax "(then told her all the ADVENTURE)
(her mom gets cool and thanking 2 the God )"Its O.K,thanxxxxxxxx 2 the God that the boy was nice"

(Here Mayank iz standing on the signal and the time iz 2:00 p.m..............Just then his cell rings and........)"Yes,inspector mahesh......tell me............(signal opens and Mayank Drives his bike with attending 2 the cell)O.K ..............ya,....no.........na............ya,Iam on my way 2 ur office and I will b there in just 15-20 mims.............ya bye"
(After a while Mayank iz outside the C.B.I headquaterz)
(He enterz then the guard checks his ID card,and allow him 2 go inside,Mayank goes staright 2 Mahesh's office nd he knoks the door)

"Ya,cum inside................."
"Hi Mahesh hu r u?"
(Mahesh luks @ him and)"Arre Sir,cum,um have a seat......"(Mayank sits and starts 2 talk on the particular issue)

(its time 3:00 4rm 2:00)
(After an hour they both stands up and shakes their hands,then Mayank takes sum files and rushes out of the C.B.I office,takes his bike and now he iz going 2 fulfil a son's promise)

(Here He is outside the BAJAJ-EMPIRES)
(Inside his father iz talking 2 his B.freind,Mr.Yashwardan Mittal)"I am so happy Yash,I have seen my son after 6 yrs,................han.........6 long yrs...........OMG,and 2day he iz cumming here 2 his own empire the BAJAJ-EMPIRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(Mayank's younger bro- interrupts)
"But dad................r u sure that bhayya will cum......I mean........he is ................"
"He will cum, he has promised me"
(Just then the intercom rings and PA tells Mayank's dad that Mayank iz here 2 c him)
"Send him inside....plz"
continus.................

PART 12

(Mayank enterz his dad's office)"Papa"!!
(His father iz very happy 2 c here)"Oh,Mayank...mt son,so u have fulfil ur promise.......han"(Mayank smile)
(then Mayank's dad intoduces him 2 his B.freind)
"Hi,son hur u going?" "Fine uncle...."
(after a while Mr.Yashwardan Mittal says his freind a gud bye and leaves)

(After he leaves, Mayank's dad starts to discuss with Mayank)
"Son.....u know that I alwayz want u here.....wid me....but u were willing to join an army,I had'nt interfare.......di'nt say any thing and did'nt show any resistance 2wards ur dream, I thiugt u will b back to me after sum time passes............but it does'nt happened .............Mayank my son,now I want u here!!!! in my place.......bcoz I cn't handle this empire now!!!!!!!!!!!This iz ur empire my son and as u r my elder son so u have to join it............."
(Mayank was shocked...............)
"But Papa............hu can I du this........I mean..ME............here"!!!!!!!!!!!
"Y not son,y u can't.............U r intelligent,young,educted........and have all the things which r necessary to b a gud owner.......y can't u"
(Mayank is shell-shocked,and unable 2 ask his father anything)
(His father notices this and say)
"Mayank u have to u this and I am giving u time till morning that makes u easy to take ur desicion......"
(Mayank leaves)

@ home 9:00 p.m............
(mayank enterz and all are worried abt him)
"Where were u?"(his mom asks)
"Mom,i was not feeling well so I was going to my friend's house"
"Oh............but u can atent my call na"
"Han.............ur call," (luks @ the cell)
"Oh.............battery is dead"
"Any wayz take diner b4 u sleeps"
"No,mom...........I am not hungry" (and leaves,his father luks @ him )

Next morning.............
(maYank iz getting ready 4 his MISSION,and comming down 4rm the stairs when he is stops by his dad)
"now,tell me wats ur dicision"???????????
(manynk luks @ him)
"Dad....................
"wat dad..........tell me son"
"dad...........Iam.........."
2 b countinus..............

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these fanfics are really gud u should carry on
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we hv to wait till 18th may... for the next episode..... our script writer is busy with exams...........
and manasi u r doing a gr8 job yaar.... see how easy to read these stories now..
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👍🏼 ooo... simply sup, sup n sup!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Shaina continue it soon yaar...even ur papers are finished now....
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Shaina continue it soon yaar...even ur papers are finished now....
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Shaina continue it soon yaar...even ur papers are finished now....
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Shaina continue it soon yaar...even ur papers are finished now....
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Here is Part 14
(In last part Mayank's dad was putting pressure on him to join the BAJAJ-EMpires...)
Mayank's dad:"Wat did u dicide?"
(Mayank iz still not answering.......)"Mayank,Iam talking to u......R u listing....???".....
(all the family members are worried)
(Mayank's mam interrupts)
"Wats going on.....?will u plz tell me wat iz happening in my house???,Mayank wat is the problem son,tell me"
Mayank"Nothing maa,dad wants me to join the buisness instead of army.............."
(Mayank's mom is shocked and turned to her hubby)
"Wat...........again,u have no more topices and reasons to give him a tension,last time,just like last time...u r doing the same ,same thing,if he does'nt wants to join the buisness then y r u trying to convince hiom.?"
(Mayank's dad gets angry and mad @ his wife)
"will u plz remain keep qiet? 😡 😡 😡
always........always u stands wid him,and against me,i think I am not wrong bcoze I luv my son very much and dont want to lose him...........wats in army???,tell me .............he(pointing towards Mayank),he who iz so willing to remain in army.........one day, will dye only becose of these army missions,only army and army missions,nothing more has left in his life...........always he used to says..........army,army and army!!! 😡
(Mayank is sad)"dad"
Mayank's dad luks him angrily"Shut up,Iam not ur dad till u leave that army" 😡
"But dad............."
(Mayank's dad leaves and Mayank is really very sad,@ his dad's bhavior,and luks @ his mom sadly)
(Mayank's mom luks him )"And Mayank u,don't think that Iam totally wid u...........ur father is not wrong too,now its time to take ur disicion son,ur father,ur family or ur army)
Mayank iz shocked............... 😕
to be continud.............

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Woah there Shai! Continue it soon!!!:)

way to go!

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