The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B

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sun29

@sun29

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

well armana a wonderful part again ,their silent acceptance of each other ..the room they have for each other in this relationship was beautifully expressed..plus ur explanation of the whole setting was comendable.....the name jannat ,the story abt the mansion.....the equation between jai and the boys.....everything was aptly conveyed 👏 👏 ...so we have a twin storm named roshni and pia brewing up 😉

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aashnaa5

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

That was such a pleasant surprise this beautiful spring morning. I was looking forward to this update from u. JW needn't have to justify his relationship to the world, it doesn't seem to matter. but what about Masi?. Once she returns, the equations are definitely going to change. Bani has definitely stirred some emotions in him. Atleast, both Bani & marriage are somewhere in his mind together.
That'll do for now.

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Sujata

@Garf

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

Hey Armana,

Perfect weekend treat...Fabulous, Oustanding, Amazing...I could come up with only these three adjectives right now... 😊 I love the whole story behind the house and I love the way you have potrayed the communication between them....and bani of course feels completely at home and I am so happy Jai has started to wonder about marriage...ummm really ur fanfic is just sooo delicious our appetite for it never satiates... 😊

Garf

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simz99

@simz99

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Posted: 18 years ago

#14

Armanaaaaaa...... 😍 what a wonderful wonderful part!!!
I love the way how each part meets and exceeds the expectations that I set upon it....you truly have a great talent and when your first book is published, I will wanna pre-order a copy please 😉 😆 😆
I was wondering about who had planted those vines...and the history behind the house, so thank you for explaining that! Can't wait for the next part now....don't want this to ever end 👏

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Pooja

@pooja.walia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

Armana,
Fantastic part 👏 👏 👏 (doesn't this sound too repetitive )

The ease in their relationship is portrayed with so much elegance...
More than Bani's comfort I'm in awe of JW's comfort of having her in his house ...in his life...
Bani has accpeted everything without any questions... and I loved the fact that JW is not so comfortable with it...

Please update soon

Poo

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big fan

@big fan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

as usual im sure dat my ramblings wil not do any justice to the excellent piece of work dat u hav written
so im goin to keep it short 👏 👏 fantabulous
PS -pls update soon 😳

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Abhita

@abhita

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME ARMANA....

👏

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Sangita

@sangitadas

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

Armana

Just read the last two parts. Its heavenly, especially the way the relationship is being developed between the two.

Nice to see the more humane side of Jai.

GOod work, excellent must say. KEEP IT UP 👍🏼

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

Armana,

let me just say that I am a big fan of your writing, truly...

I just love the enigma, the romance, the easy affection, the simplicity a pleasure to read.

I love the development of characters, each of them built up carefully and methodically..the scenes are also depicted with so much care, it shows that you care a lot about writing.

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pooja1_76

@pooja1_76

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Posted: 18 years ago

#20

tell you the truth ..............
you amez me every time with extra ordinary and exceeding my expecation parts.
from the first part to the fourteenth this is going as a book to me.
As you know i tresure this in my hard drive (as well as in my heart)
this is the best realtionship ..............
No expectations from each other
you are willing to give everything and not expecting anything in return is call love

Explanation of Sharing his Room was outstanding........
also about the intimacy (which is everyting and not everything) in relationship
I truly like this no strings attached relationship

and yes the once again this will be repeated over and over again Please continue soon.

pooja

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