The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 3

Armana...I am almost certain that Jai is falling if not already fallen...and thanks to Nach and Ran...he may even realize...

I think we need to bring in some jealousy...and then the effects will play out...

Cant wait for the next update...this one awesome...

Rivs

Finally caught up Armana!😛

Wow, you have been busy!!

'Jannat' sounds heavenly!!😳........Couldn't think of a better place for Bani to spend time with Jai........your descriptions as usual were amazingly prices and immediately brought the image straight into my head!!👏👏👏

Absaloutely love you for making Pushky and Pia work under Jai......I'm sure they've both been thrown into a spiral of thoughts regarding Bani's sudden arrival!😃

Nattu and Ranveer sound absaloutely adorable!!😆........

Their first sight of Bani was very powerful, and I adore JB's relationship!!😳

As usual, greedily waiting for more!!😉

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

Hi Armana,

It's wonderful and left me again speechless as always. Believe me, I am now looking for proper words to complement this piece of your work. I think I don't do any justice if I can't use right word to describe it so decided to refrain from doing that. Anyways, it's amazing, fabulous..............etc.......

Please continue soon. 😊😃😆

BTW, when is Jai going to realizie that Bani is his angel? Will he or not?

👏

Thank you k😊
as for your question:
"patience is a virtue,
possess it if you can.
Seldom in lady,
never in a man!"
In other words, you are just going to have to read on.........

Armana

Originally posted by: nikita28

Hi Armana,

That was a great part. I really enjoyed reading the hesitation that Bani had in sleeping in Jai's room and I loved his explanation.

They have really moulded into such a sweet couple, like they have been together for such a long time.

Can't wait to read the next part, I wonder what will be Jai's reaction when he finds out about Pia being Bani's sister? WIll he find out that she is his angel??

Nikita

Originally posted by: Rohit.Khanna

I have started to read your FF only recently.

Its a well-written, captivating piece of prose. 😊👏

I love how your FF has more silence than dialogs.
Sometimes silence speaks more than words.

One thing I am not too happy about : Bani and Jai's relationship.

Why aren't they very open with each other?😕 I sometimes feel that there is lack of communication between them (by that I do not necessarily mean speech; as I had referred to they speak much more through their eyes) and misunderstandings abound.

Also one more thing : What name can be given to JB's relationship?😕 That of lovers, who are not yet/not yet willing (hope not though! 😕) (I am not too sure about 'willing' part) to get married? Or that of two souls who have become one(😳) and so do not find the need to get married? 😕

Also, doesn't Massi stay with them?😕 Forgive me for asking this if you have answered this before. 😳

I can fully understand Bani's initial uncomfortable reaction towards staying in Jai's bedroom' 😛. Hopefully she'll settle down soon! 😆😉

Sorry if I've ranted too much. 😳

Rohit

PS : Please continue soon!😃

Originally posted by: divan

Wonderful part Armana, loved the dialogues, Jai's unspoken messages to Ranveer/Nachiket. I have been to Mumbai just as a tourist(never lived in any residential area) but nothing that you've wrote so far is out of place. 😊

Originally posted by: bugs_bunny

Hey,

Another amazing update.. you really have a way with words! So Jai doesnot want to marry?? (that's what he thinks, i know, i know! but hey, he isn't a duffer for nothing!)Will bani be able to change his mind? 😛

Can't wait till Bni and pia meet.

eagerly awaiting the next part

Tanu