The Foreign Self: Part XIV to XVI-B - Page 31

hey armana,
gr8 part 👏
cont. sooon

Hey Armana...

welcome back.. 👏

Loved the update... 👏 👏

Hope Jai teaches proper lesson to Pia.. for messing around with Bani..

Glad to see u back...Pia trying to impress J but ending up too gaudily dressed for the restaurant 😆
Poor Bani, doesn't even know that Pia told J that she used to love Pushkar...Pia is so yuckky....
👏 👏 👏

Excellent part.

Wow Jai really going to marry Bani. I hope things clear up between Bani & Jai. JAi gets to know about their past encounter.

Armana...well thank you for continuing with this. once again a good part. I somehow felt that Bani is completely not convinced and rather seems to be taken aback by what Jai announced. and Jai called Bani Mrs Walia in a spurt of a moment. I guess it will take some time for both of them to come to terms with what is happening with them presnt and past. Maybe its time that Jai comes to know that he was an important part of Bani's past as well something of which he is completely unaware of at this point of time.

Pia turned out to be exactly the same way as expected. Trying to create problems and saying the wrong things. Seems like Push seems to have reformed and has finally come to see Pia's true colors. nattu and Ran once again warmed to Bani easily. The final best part was of course when the waiter handed over the bill to Pia. a classic touch. looking forward to the next part.

good to see you back.

Swathi

Finally, finally, finally ...a looong awaited update to TFS. Welcome back Armana, missed you and your beautiful writing. 👏 👏 👏
Somali

nice part armana, please continue soon

swati

Heeeeeeeeeey,

Look who's back FINALLY 😊 😛 . Missed you and a wonderful part (though a short one for me) to make up for your absence.

Pia Oh!Pia . I seriously felt like strangling her neck.I have a request, fulfill our wishes and make Bani disown Pia if possible somewhere in the story.( When will Bani be leaving for Delhi?)

Thanks a lot dear for your beautiful update. 👏 This P** is really a pain in the *** 😡 😡 😡

Yes, patience is bitter but its fruit is indeed sweet. 😳

Am glad that you are continuing this FF. Merawala Jai is here right? 😳 😳 😳

Please update soon.

sangita,
yeh wala jai walia to sirf aapke amanat hai!
have no worries or fear!

and all of you, who've written in, thank you so much. really brightens my day to read your warm welcome and makes feel guilty that you've ha dto wait such a long while for tfs to continue.
regards,
Armana