FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 11

Originally posted by: putturani

Hey nice part subzi. Yeh kya hai? No contact from you. I had an excuse, I was out of town and sick, what's yours? 👎🏼 Na, na aise nahi karthe hai. 😆 I am still in high school and scolding you already!

Censored stuff the last chapter was. 😳 😳 I was blushing! And I love the concept of Bani owning a small convience store in a small town. Sounds romantic somehow. Very different from the 7-11 and FoodWorld types. Bani has already melted a bit - although unknowingly! Waiting for the next part. Btw, Poo, I really enjoy your reviews for the different chappies.

Now the closest thing to romance is going to happen in my life. 😆 OUr yearly trip is coming up and I can see my classmates getting together. 😆 Nothing of that sort for me though. I will be too busy eating something and taking pictures!

-Rani

P.S. I am now off to read your firsdt two FFs again. 😊

hey rani, thanks dear, kahan thi aap. me too tied up with diwali, then motw and now some guests and ff ....... see how many excuses i have 😆

and what happened and how are u feeling now?

u can scold me yaar, no probs, main itni bhi budi nahin hoon.

dear, u haven't seen censored stuff yet ....... so save the blushing. and no bani does not own the store, it belongs to rashi, she has just gone to pick up something for her friends wedding.

enjoy ur yearly trip ....... eat well and take a lot of pics.

so did u read my first two FFs again ........... that good ah ..... cho chweet.

Originally posted by: putturani

We aren't gonna be happy? Haila! Yeh kya hone wala hai??? 😭 Happy endings please otherwise I am going to jump off Sabsj Airways with a parachute in hand a la DON. 😭 😆

hota hain baba, aise bhi hota hain ............ to win something u have to lose something.............. i can just as well imagine u on a parachute ..... hope u have enough insurance.

thank u for flying Sabsj airways. 😆

Originally posted by: Cordelia

😆

at least we can gurantee that sabs' FF is not going to be a poor copy of something else - a la DON!! 😆

nice Part 3 cheliji, as usual i'm blushing away thinking of your Jai!!! 😳 please continue soon - and try not to make us too unhappy with future developments pleeeease....? 😃

thanks gurumaya, yeh sab don ki kripa hain 😆 will update tomm.

jai to pakadna mushkil hi nahin namumkin hain .......... unless bani starts singing Yeh mera dil pyaar ka deewana (like helen did in don) 😆

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

A part very well written...👏👏👏

Poo u are so damn hilarious, I think from tomm i will post the update only after u add on ur review, i have been laughing like crazy ............. ur comments are so funny.

thank u so much my dear, u are making this ff writing a real pleasure.

this romance ki devi is soon gonna turn into a comedy ki devi if u keep going on at this rate 🤗 this is for you and ur efforts ......... mwwwwwahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

sabsj di..

thanks for a wonderful flight on sabsj airlines.. i am still on first class! 😆

oh soo jai likes to take it slow!! 😳

hahaha how blunt was bani.. hunnii even i am single!

😛

plz do continue di!!

hi sweety, am so glad u are enjoying ur flight with us, of course first class always ........ no doubt about it. suddenly captain jai has a lot of single ladies to tackle ........ poor guys god help him

Originally posted by: putturani

Haan voh to hai. I come back to this post so much just to see the wonderful banter going on between everyone here.

that is exactly what the difference is between Sabsj Airways and other airlines 😆

Originally posted by: sabsj

hey rani, thanks dear, kahan thi aap. me too tied up with diwali, then motw and now some guests and ff ....... see how many excuses i have 😆

OK, OK. I grudgingly admit that you have lots of excuses up your sleeve too! I might use some of them when my teacher asks why on earth I haven't done my HW!

and what happened and how are u feeling now?

Some infection. Still haven't gone to see the new baby as I don't want to pass on anything nasty to it. Feeling better but couldn't resist the chance to bunk school for one more day.😉

u can scold me yaar, no probs, main itni bhi budi nahin hoon.

Voh to main janthi hoon. Aap bilkul budi nahi hai. I hope my Hindi was alright.😳

dear, u haven't seen censored stuff yet ....... so save the blushing. and no bani does not own the store, it belongs to rashi, she has just gone to pick up something for her friends wedding.

Oh. Yes, I blush for little things. 😳 I am so innocent na?😳😳 But I am looking forward to the next part so maybe I am not that innocent after all.

enjoy ur yearly trip ....... eat well and take a lot of pics.

Yea I will. I wonder if mom will trust me with her digi cam this year. Keep your fingers crossed...

so did u read my first two FFs again ........... that good ah ..... cho chweet.

Originally posted by: sabsj

hota hain baba, aise bhi hota hain ............ to win something u have to lose something.............. i can just as well imagine u on a parachute ..... hope u have enough insurance.

thank u for flying Sabsj airways. 😆

😆 Jaanti hoon. But I am an idealist. I am sure it will get cured with age though! Somehow, I kind of expected it as things were going so well, so fast. Something bad was bound to happen. It is good in a way too as a relationship only becomes stronger if the partners go through difficult times. TOGETHER. Bani, please understand that.😆