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Posted: 19 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sabsj

Chapter 3

Bani gave Jai a dirty stare my dear this dirty look won't last long😉and reached the back counter in the store and called out to Raashi, who was pulling cans of tomato puree from a large box and placing them on the shelf. "Hello, Raashi. Everything arrive?"

Raashi glanced quickly at the man beside her, and looked back at Bani significantly. Finally, she nodded. "Half an hour ago. I'll bring a few out, if you'd like to see them."

"Please" said Bani. She was acutely aware that THE man was still watching her. "My friend is nervous and wanted me to check things out."

"No problem," Raashi said. "I'll be right back." She turned and disappeared into the back storeroom.

"Running errands on horseback?" Jai asked. "I don't see much of that in Mumbai. This is small town life, I guess."😆iske taunt mai bhi baat hai... issi liye to he's MINE😳

"I'm sure it's a different pace from what you're used to. We like to take things a bit more slowly around here." She crossed her arms over her chest. oho bani ka jawaab👏

"Please don't let me bore you, am sure you have much better things to do" said Bani curtly.yes my dear he has better things to do...but lets not get into that now...atleast not so soon...😉😆

"I don't think you could ever bore me," Jai said. "And anyway, I like to take it slow ……… very slow …….. S L O W."😆haila...ye mera heart attack karvayega...wo bho slow ...slow....very slow....

"Do you?" Bani asked, meeting his gaze with a slight smile. She was surprised when his eyes darkened into an intense black. Her heartbeat quickened. What was she doing, flirting with this total stranger?yes my dear...u're flirting with a complete stranger...but don't worry he has this affect on people..😳

"Or fast," Jai said. He stepped closer, lowering his voice and whispering into her ear. "Which do you prefer Bani, I could go either way?"Good lord... ye aaj mujhe maar hi dalega....

Everytime he called her name, Bani could feel her heart taking summersaults.just hearing her name se ye haal hai...kuch aur sunegi to kya hoga...😆

"I'm certainly not going to tell you," said Bani breathing heavily.

"You can show me then" suggested Jai😲. 😳

"Unlikely" replied Bani quickly.

"Why not Bani?" Jai asked. "It might be fun. Surely you could do with some fun around here" he continued with a warm smile on this face.

Bani met his eyes again. It would be fun, she thought. That was just what scared her. What if she enjoyed it too much……… and then what if the fun had to end …………. that is something she did not want to think about.i know sweety...good things should never come to an end... but don't worry the Romance ki devi herself is directing your story...she is very considerate... so u don't worry... and by the way...u're interested in fun...😉..aur maine socha ki tumhe kuch pata hi nahi...😆

When you smile at me
You take me to a world I never thought I'd see
Your eyes can touch my soul
And fill me with a hunger only you can feed.

Raashi emerged from the back room, carrying a tray. She laid it down on the counter. It was lined with corsages and boutonnieres. Jai looked down at the tray, then glanced at Bani, and back at the tray.

"Raashi arranged for these flowers to be delivered from Mumbai," Bani explained quickly. "They're for a wedding."

"I gathered," Jai said. "You're not getting married, are you?"nahi re... abhi tak aap mile nahi the..to shaadi kaise...

"No no absolutely not, don't worry, my friend is, I am very much single" blurted Bani and then almost wanted to kill herself for saying what she did.Dil ki baat zubaan par aa hi gayi... 😳

"Good, and what makes you think I would be worried" said Jai with that million dollar smile on his face.iss smile par hum hain fida....😳... but this dialouge is killing too....yaar Sabrina...kya ho raha hai yahan par... 😳

"By the way, not that you care, but I am single and available too. See even I have learnt to speak in your code language now" continued Jai.I care sweetheart i care....🤗...and i see u're a fast learner...😳..dil ki baat jaldi samajhte ho...

Bani blushed on hearing this, their eyes met once again, acknowledged all the signals being sent out and spoke to each other in a language only they could understand, each waiting for the other to break free. If only looks could kill, both would be long gone by now.😳😳😳

"What the eye does not admire, the heart does not desire." 👏

A part very well written...👏👏👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
sabsj di..

thanks for a wonderful flight on sabsj airlines.. i am still on first class! 😆


oh soo jai likes to take it slow!! 😳

hahaha how blunt was bani.. hunnii even i am single!

😛


plz do continue di!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Cordelia



😆

at least we can gurantee that sabs' FF is not going to be a poor copy of something else - a la DON!! 😆

nice Part 3 cheliji, as usual i'm blushing away thinking of your Jai!!! 😳 please continue soon - and try not to make us too unhappy with future developments pleeeease....? 😃

Haan voh to hai. I come back to this post so much just to see the wonderful banter going on between everyone here.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: purple_penguins

wow hun..

just read all the parts...amazing... haha.. both of them were flirting.. that was good... cant wait to read more!

*aviva*

thanks aviva, more will be posted tomm.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: kripa_angad=luv

i love ur title ......and i love ur ff too please continue soon :)

thanks dear, and i love ur siggy

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Posted: 19 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: $h@aq...

woowow !! Sabsj ji !! tht was a grr88 part !!
u r simplyy wonderful !!! aww ahheem ahhem !! i reckon they take thingss faster 😉 😉 !! cozz i cant wait at all !! looollzz 😆
wooww..!! they r such expert at flirtingg !! loollzz 😆 😳 😳 lovee readiing it though ! plzzz cont soon !! i just love the quotess u slelect !! u r simply underscribly faboulous at it !!!
thnksx hun ! - will be waiting eagerli for ur nxt part !
Shafaq !
👏

hi shafaq, am glad u liked the update. well if things progress that fast, the ff will be over and done with before u know ....... no mazaa then .... sabar ka phal mitha hota hain. i am happy to know that u like the quotes i select, it takes times ....... but the effort is really worth it. next part will be posted tomm. till then take it slow ok 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: stonex

very nice
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👏 👏 👏

thanks stonex

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Posted: 19 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: ovaltine

enjoyed it tremendously. I like the fact that FFs are different from the serial, adds a bit of flavour. Looking forward to the next part. good work. 👏

thanks dear, given the current state of KS, it would be suicide to even attempt anything on the same lines 😡 and plus if you go the same way, either we watch the serial or then read the ff, not much fun in doing both ........ so hut ke is the way to go.

next part tomm.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: lonely14

awwww why are you scared and stressed out??? 🤗🤗🤗man i am so gonna picture myself now, and i am going to crack up like crazy. lol. yaar the ice queen has already melted, she is just playing hard to get, bhav kha rahi hai. lol. lol yeah school. lmao!!!!!!!

🤗

Can't wait for the next part Shina

baby is scared and stressed out becoz of the big big goof up he did in dubai ........ so how was the picturing ......... drooled enough or not 😆 and don't crack up yet, a lot more to come ......... as for ice queen, u r right, bhav kha rahi hain ........ let's see for how long 😉 and what is happening with school 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: pooja.walia

Awsome part.... 👏
Review coming up in a while... 😃
Yaar ye JW is too fast... 😳 but me not complaining... 😳 😳 😳

Poo

oy poo, thanks dear, i think now a days i look forward to ur review as much as u guys look forward to the update 😃

i thought u liked fast guys 😆

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