FF:AT FIRST GLANCE- The End on pg 88 - Page 9

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Posted: 19 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sweetu144

😲 a few hours more...oh my.
Time pass kesai karoon?? 😆 😆
Chalo...i hope you gave your fingers the rest....garam pani se kutch farak parah....it should do...that's what i do, when it happens to me 😆 😆 .
Am waiting impatiently 😉 ...magar its ok take your time... 😛 will be patient...
Luv ya
Sweetu 😳

flight is on time my dear, just as promised ........... 😃 thank u for your patience

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Posted: 19 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Tazmanian_Devil

wowzer! you know all about my directness but what abut this jai! straight to it isn't he. pheli mulakaat and he is already helping bani were her necklace, agli mulaakat me pata nahin kya hoga. actualy jo hoga manzoore sabs hoga right!!

only two apraisals bani if i were you i woud probably be staring constantly i actually feel proud of bani she actually got herself together enough to be able to answer jai. i would have probably lost all higher functions infront of such a studmuffin!! 😆 plz continue soon

Luv Taz

hey taz, how could i ignore ur subtle hints ........ and this jai, he is bindaas, he knows what he wants and he goes after it ...... but ice queen is not melting, so he has got to turn up the heat now.

bani bechari does not know what hit her, nor can she make up her mind about what she wants ......... u keep staring at him while i try to figure out where and what next 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sabsj

shina dear, what would i do without ur inspiration ....... nothing. ur inspiration brings out the romantic side in me, else all i do now a days is look scared and stressed out 😆

sorry not for a minute, let's pretend it is u only instead of Bani, only diff is we will use her name, or else other passengers on board will get jealous 😉😆

ice queen is too frozen at the moment, lagta hain ur baby will have to turn on the heat 😆

thanks for the advance quota ...... keep it coming 😃 and like white rainbow said ........ go to school 😆

awwww why are you scared and stressed out??? 🤗🤗🤗

man i am so gonna picture myself now, and i am going to crack up like crazy. lol.

yaar the ice queen has already melted, she is just playing hard to get, bhav kha rahi hai. lol.

lol yeah school. lmao!!!!!!!

🤗

Can't wait for the next part

Shina

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Posted: 19 years ago
#84
Awsome part.... 👏
Review coming up in a while... 😃
Yaar ye JW is too fast... 😳 but me not complaining... 😳 😳 😳

Poo
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Posted: 19 years ago
#85
Hey nice part subzi. Yeh kya hai? No contact from you. I had an excuse, I was out of town and sick, what's yours? 👎🏼 Na, na aise nahi karthe hai. 😆 I am still in high school and scolding you already!

Censored stuff the last chapter was. 😳 😳 I was blushing! And I love the concept of Bani owning a small convience store in a small town. Sounds romantic somehow. Very different from the 7-11 and FoodWorld types. Bani has already melted a bit - although unknowingly! Waiting for the next part.

Btw, Poo, I really enjoy your reviews for the different chappies.

Now the closest thing to romance is going to happen in my life. 😆 OUr yearly trip is coming up and I can see my classmates getting together. 😆 Nothing of that sort for me though. I will be too busy eating something and taking pictures!

-Rani

P.S. I am now off to read your firsdt two FFs again. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: jigna_07

👏
dude awesome sabsj!!!!
read ALL THE PARTS!
right now!!!!!!!
Bani nice way of letting him know you are SINGLE!
don't worry i do it ALL the time!!!!
'chalta hai sab kucch!!!!
sabsj soooooo happy that you started another fanfic!!!! 😃
continue soon!

thanks jigna ........ welcome aboard. so u let guys know u r single too 😆 way to go girl, am proud of u.

am glad to write again for u guys too ........ keep reading and enjoying.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: lonely14

Saby my baby, another wonderful update!!!! 👏👏👏 hahahh taking things slow??? they betta not. lol. 😆 what i am only saying it for them, nothing for me absolutely nothing 😳 What big flirts. Love their flirting though. hehehhe Jai baby i'll answer your question you asked bani, she want things to go really really really FAST!!!!!!! 😳

What a place to end, wanting us to want more, yaar you have to update soon, otherwise i am gonna die of the wait. 😛 "I'll flirt till you agree, and will never set you free" 😉 Shina

thanks sweety, slow and steady wins the race right 😆 what else can u expect from bani amma. flirting she does not mind, lekin nakhre toh dekho ........ ok dear, jai gets the message ........... fast it is then 😉

sorry about ending it where i did, i really did not feel upto writing today, but i wanted the flight to be on time, so i wrote whatever i could. i will update tomm, though let me tell u, u might not be too happy with what is gonna come up next 😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: inavars

hun, that was AMAZING!!! looks like you're going to make 😳blushing😳 my full time job😆 that was such an awesome part!!!!

thanks navs, i loved ur little comments in bet, they were so cute and refreshing. blushing ........... well dear not for too long, the twist is just round the corner.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#89
We aren't gonna be happy? Haila! Yeh kya hone wala hai??? 😭 Happy endings please otherwise I am going to jump off Sabsj Airways with a parachute in hand a la DON. 😭 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: putturani

We aren't gonna be happy? Haila! Yeh kya hone wala hai??? 😭 Happy endings please otherwise I am going to jump off Sabsj Airways with a parachute in hand a la DON. 😭 😆



😆

at least we can gurantee that sabs' FF is not going to be a poor copy of something else - a la DON!! 😆

nice Part 3 cheliji, as usual i'm blushing away thinking of your Jai!!! 😳 please continue soon - and try not to make us too unhappy with future developments pleeeease....? 😃

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