Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28]

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat
Superb foxi. 👏 Ur both updates r too good.
Rishi's care for tanu 😳 wow touch to my heart.
Tanu's antics 😆 I am speechless yaar. Ur fabulous always.
Plz entertain us like dis.n update soon when u r free from ur work.😳😛

wo word dear...😳

Ya i also love this side of Rishi...❤️

Hahahahaha...yes she is so naughty...😉

Wo word for such a great compliment...😳

I will give update tomorrow...😳

Just working on it...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: gopsss
Awesome updates Foxi!!! Tanu lost in Rishi's thoughts n met with an accident... Rishi took her to hospital... Rishi's care for Tanu ❤️😳...
Tanu found her feelings for Rishi❤️...
That hospital scene..n car scene... I loved it!!! Rocking parts...
From now it will take a long time for ur next update...
Cant wait for next parts... Par intazar karna padta hai na...
Is ur blood group is A+😉!!!
If u get time please give us updates... We r always waiting for u... Love u❤️.

wo word cotton candy...😳

Sorry yr i also dont want to make u guys wait...

No no mine is AB+...😃

Will give update tomorrow...😳

Love u too...❤️

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: vinushi
Wow i m in dreamland haya ... amazing amazing both parts r amazing superb I m in love with this ff❤️. ...I can't say anything ...I don't know what to say...Rishi saves Tanu ...n hospital room scene is just superb😭...n Tanu saw Rishi she starrre Rishi😳she know that he used to save her ...she planned to reveal Rishi s truth...Rishi beat the goons ❤️...n that meri Tanu Ko baat kaise lagaya ...wooow👏...I can't wait nooo I won't wait can u pls update the next part sooon ❤️
I know tu bussy hai but pls jab bhi time mile to update kar de or Thora jaldi kar can't wait😳😭bahut wait karwayi hai tu😡...but love u 😳

hehehe i was also in a dreamland while writing these parts...😃

Wo word for such great compliments...😳

Sooo sorry for late yr...

But i will try to give updates soon...

Sorry once again will give next update tomorrow...😳

Love u too...❤️

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: cuteariya
Nice update
Continue plz

wo word dear...😳

Will update soon...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Divya333
Really super updates Haya... Loved them... Naughty Tanu.. .loved her ...wo word for late reply...waiting for update... Update soon

wo word titli...😳

Wo word for reading and loving this story...😳

Will give update tomorrow...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: arya1210
Awesome update foxi . Loved both the parts .Rishi tu phale se hi mood mai tha now tanu also ab maza aayega .Aag dono taraf sae lag gayi .Ab tanu apne antics sae rishi sae ilu bolwayegi waiting for next .Wo word for late comment

wo word butterfly...😳

Hahahaha...yaa now both are in mood...😉

Yes now we will see Tanu's romantic side...😉

Will update tomorrow...😳

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: vinushi
Kaha hai tu 😡... where is updates😭😡

sorry yr i will give update tomorrow...

Sorry once again...

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Haya Zehra Jafar

@HayaJafar313

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#108

[Part 10]

[A SORRY]

They reach the house...

Tanu holds Rishi's hand which is on gear...

T: i m sorry yr...

R: Tanu jao...

T: Rishi...

He stares at her...

R: Tanu...

She leaves with a puppy like face...

When she steps out of the car she starts limping...

He on seeing her like this also steps out of car and holds her hand...

Tanu looks at him...

But he didnt even gave any expression and is looking at front...

After continuous staring of Tanu at him...

R: Tanu tmhara ghar samne hai...

She comes in her senses with his voice...

And just said a little word...

T: sorry...

And starts looking at ground...

Rishi smiles a bit but controls his expressions...

They reach the house gate...

Tanu's mother comes and Rishi gives the hand of Tanu in her mother's hand...

She takes Tanu to her room...

Tanu's father comes...

R: ok uncle ab mn chlta hon...

V: arey Rishi beta itni jldi kya hai...come lets have some tea..u r also looking tired...

R: nhi nhi uncle phr kabhi...mama wait kr rhi hongi...mn chlta hon...

V: theek hai beta lkn dobara zaroor ana...

R: ji zaroor...

Rishi leaves the house...

*Tanu's room*

She starts spining...

T: Oh my God!! Oh my God!!! Oh my God!!! He is sooo cute...how caring he is...I LOVE U RISHI I LOVE U...what i love him??? No...yes...no...or yes...no...not no only YESSS...

She fall on bed and her injuries hurts...

T: ouccchhh!!!! Ufff Tanu u have gone mad...

She thinks for a while...

T: wait i m hurt...ouuuccchhh!!! I should call Rishi naaa...

And she starts laughing...

T: ufff my mind...soon Rishi will kill me...

She calls him...

R: hello...

T: Rishi i m hurt...

She said with approx crying voice...

R: kya hua tmhe...

T: wo mn bed pe gir gai or mere wounds mn pain hai ab...plzzz come naaa...

R: ok wait i m cmng...

He picks up the keys in haste...

And runs to his car...

Rishi reach Tanu's house...

R: aunty where is Tanu??? Is she ok???

S: hmmm...she is ok...she is in her room...u go and meet her...

R: thank u aunty...

Rishi comes running to her room...

He even didnt knocked at door and opens it...

Tanu is sitting on bed...

Rishi comes and make her stand up...

He holds her face...

R: Tanu are u ok?? Kya hua tmhe??? Lgi to nhi ziada zor se???

T: relax Rishi relax...itni bhi nhi lgi...

R: kya mtlb???

T: mtlb mn bed pr giri or mjhe lgi us time dard ho rha tha...

She slides her hands in his neck...

T: tm agae ho na...ab sab theek hai...i m sorry...

Rishi is hell shocked and is just looking at her face with disbelieve...

T: Rishiii...

R: han...

T: i m sorry...

R: ok...

T: tm ne abhi bhi sahi se nhi bola...tm abhi bhi ghussa ho mjhse...

She made a crying face...

R: nhi yr nhi hon mn ghussa...

He hugs her tightly...

Tanu felt like her world became complete...

Tanu hugs him back...

They remain in this position for some time...

Rishi breaks the hug...

R: ok now i m leaving...tmhari wajah se sab chzn desk pr phela kr aya hon...apna khyl rkhna...or kuch bhi ho mjhe call kr dna...mn ajaonga...

Tanu nods...

R: take care and get well soon...

Rishi leaves...

*night*

*Tanu's room*

She is standing on window and looking at the moon...

T: yr Tanu tu bhi pgl hai...Rishi ko btaya q nhi k u love him...pata nhi kya hogya tha mjhe Rishi ko dekh kr...first time mn usko kuch bolna chah rhi thi or bol nhi payi...is this love???

She moves away from the window...she is walking towards bed...just then she limps a little...

She remembers the time when she steped out of car and was limping...and he... her hero her Rishi comes and holds her hand...

She reaches the bed...

And goes in the dreams of Rishi...

*Rishi's room*

He is combing his hairs and is standing in front of mirror...

R: is she really in love with me??? Kya jese wo meri duniya hai ab mn bhi uski duniya hon??? Ufff this confusion...

He remembers the way by which she said sorry to him...

suddenly he said..

R: cutieee pieee...

He also goes to sleep...

In his cuite pie's dreams...

Precap: the revealation of unknown person...

Hope u guys like it...sorry for late...

And i will try to give next one soon...in one to two days...

Enjoy reading...😳

And sorry once again...

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Gopika

@gopsss

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#109

Awesome update Foxi!!! I was badly missing u n ur updates...
TanShilious update...😳...
Tanu started feeling for Rishi... She enjoying his care😳...
She calls Rishi n he comes in hurry😳...
Rishi doubts whether Tanu also is in love with him...😳...
TanShi dreams about each other... Rishi n his cutie pie😳...
Precap:Revealing unknown girl...
I cant wait anymore for next part Foxi... Update soon dear... Love u...