Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28] - Page 12

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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update with full of tanshilious part😳
tanu ki cuteness rishi ki caring nature
and tanu ki who pyaar ki ehsas
aapne to kamal kar diya👏
intezar thori lambi thi 😉
per is update ne dil khus kar
dia😃

wo word for pm...waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: gopsss

Awesome update Foxi!!! I was badly missing u n ur updates...
TanShilious update... 😳...
Tanu started feeling for Rishi... She enjoying his care😳...
She calls Rishi n he comes in hurry😳...
Rishi doubts whether Tanu also is in love with him...😳...
TanShi dreams about each other... Rishi n his cutie pie😳...
Precap:Revealing unknown girl...
I cant wait anymore for next part Foxi... Update soon dear... Love u...

wo word cotton candy...😳
She is enjoying too much...😉
Will try to update soon...
Love u too..❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Nice update foxi..every part is beautiful..n best part is tanu also feels for rishi n her antics...well done yaar. 👏...

And ur precap is exciting...update soon can't wait...

wo word lemon...😳
Awww such a great compliment dear...❤️
Will update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

Beautiful update with full of tanshilious part 😳

tanu ki cuteness rishi ki caring nature
and tanu ki who pyaar ki ehsas
aapne to kamal kar diya👏
intezar thori lambi thi 😉
per is update ne dil khus kar
dia😃

wo word for pm...waiting for nxt update

wo word moni...😳
Its a big compliment dear...i m glad that u r loving this story...😳
Sorry dear...ab koshish krongi k wait zyada na krwaon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Part 11]
[WHO IS THE CULPRIT]


*morning*

*A Godown*

The darkness and evilness is spreaded all over in the godown...
The area where is darkness in the day as well...
Some evil people with their evil intentions are present there...
Planing something disasterous...
Which will destroy many lifes...
Which will destroy many innocent souls...
There a person came wearing a hoody...
Holding a gun that person fires in the air...
And said...

"How can u miss her??? "

All the other people present their scared to death from that person...
The goons brought a guy with them...

"Why she is still alive??? Tell me..."

That person shouted at the top of his/her voice...
The guy which was brought pleaded and begged his life...

"Please boss forgive me...i tried my level best to kill her but Rishi came and saved her...boss i wasnt at fault...please forgive me...i promise i will kill her this time..."

That person said with a stiff sound...

"First time or never.."

That person rose his/her gun and shoots...
With the sound of fire the silence took place there...
Floor became coloured with the blood...
That guy fell down holding his chest...
That person removes the hoody...

And that person is...
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None other then Tanu's best friend Priya...

P: i wont let her...she stole my love...she stole Rishi from me...
He was mine...he is mine...and he will always be mine...
I wont let u live Tanu...you dont deserve a life...

She said with the evilness loaded in her voice...

P: i want her dead...at any cost...ramesh u will kill her now...and in first shot...i want her dead body in front of my eyes...
R: yes boss...

She turned her face towards Tanu's pic and shooted on it...

P: dead...

She gave an evil smile...

*Uni*

Tanu and all his gang including priya came to uni...
Tanu gathered them all...

T: guys guys guys...i have a news for u...
A: wait i can guess its a good news...
T: yaaa...
A: oh wow tell tell...
T: i...love...Rishi...

Everyone is shocked on listening this...
Ahana cant believe on her ears...

A: are u kidding??? Say u r joking...
T: no yr i m not joking...i seriously love him...
A: seriously???
T: yesss...
A: if it is true...then...party to banti hai...

They all hugged Tanu tightly...priya came at last...
They jumped up together in a hugging position...
Tanu broke the hug...

T: and guess what???
D: what???
T: i think so Rishi love me tooo...

They all together: awww...

T: wait for a while...its not confirmed...i think sooo...
V: i m damn sure he loves u...

Priya lost in her thoughts... unknowingly said...

P: i saw the love in his eyes...
T: seriously???

She hugged priya tightly...
Priya came to her senses and hugged her back...
But just for formality...

D: chal beta Tanu ab treat de...
T: sure sure why not...chalo canteen...
P: tm log jao mn washroom se aati hon...
T: ok...

They leave for canteen...priya goes to washroom...

*washroom*

P: u arent sure but i m sure...he loves u...he loves u but u will pay for it...
This love will be very costly for u...

Her eyes are red and filled with anger and tears...

*Rishi's gang*

Rishi comes...jumps on Abhay and Manpreet...and hugs them...
With all his teeth out...

Ab: hang on for a minute...kya hua romeo??? Itna khush q hai???
R: she loves me...she loves me...she loves me...

He again hugs them...

M: bro seriously???
R: yes...yes...yes...
M: its a big news...congrats dude...
Ab: where is my treat...
M: ufff is ko har waqt khane ki pari rehti hai...wse treat to banti hai...
R: q nhi q nhi...aj chlte hn kahin bahar phr...
M: bhabhi ko bhi le chln???

He said winking...

R: maregi wo tjhe bhi or mjhe bhi...
M: q bhabhi ko privacy chahiye...

He said giving a high five to Abhay...

R: hehehe...not so funny...usne abhi tk comfess nhi kiya...or mn usko date ka bolon...pitna hai kya???
M: oh to ye bol na...
Ab: oh wowww...
R: is mn wow ki kya bt hai???
Ab: wow ki ye bt hai k do do treats milngi...ek to abhi...or el jb bhabhi confess kr lngi...

He said with full excitement...
Rishi and Manpreet hits their forehead with their hands...

ManShi: ufff...

Abhay laughs out loud...

Ab: han to sahi bt hai na...
R: ya ya...ab chl tu...

*uni's off*

Rishi with his friends goes out for some hala gula...
They enjoyed their day very well...
Manpreet and Abhay gave some pegs to Rishi...
And Rishi in excitement drinks them...
They leaves for house in the drunken state...
After dropping Manpreet and Abhay at their respected houses...
Rishi leaves for his house...
On his way he saw Tanu walking along the road from the side of jungle...
He stops the car and comes out...
Tanu didnt saw him...
He is coming towards her with a big smile plastered on his face...
When he was lil bit away from her he saw a man pointing a gun at her...
The man placed his hand on the trigger...
Here is hand starts moving and there Rishi came runing and pulls Tanu towards himself just then the man pulls a trigger and the bullet passes from the side of her neck...but misses her...
Rishi pulls her to the tree...
She collapses with the tree...her eyes are closed and ears are not working due to a sudden trauma...
They are mere inches away from each other...
Tanu standing still with the tree...
And Rishi placing his hands on the tree looking at her scared face...
Her eyes are tightly closed...
Fear is visible on her face...
She opens her eyes on feeling a calm atmosphere and saw Rishi standing in front of her...so close to her...
His hand on tree blocking her way from both sides and eyes stuck on her...
A sudden calmness spread over her face...
She hugged him tightly banishing that mere distance between them...
Rishi shocked on her reaction and the situation and also in a drunken state didnt understood anything and remain in his position just like that...

Precap: Rishi in drunken state...chapter full of fun and romance...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit like...
Enjoy reading...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Very well hayu...u rocked it yaar...Rishi n tanu loves to each other... waiting for their confession. N their romantic hug wow.😳 every part is beautiful.. waiting for next😛
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Very well hayu...u rocked it yaar...Rishi n tanu loves to each other... waiting for their confession. N their romantic hug wow.😳 every part is beautiful.. waiting for next😛

wo word lemon...😳
Soon they will confess their love...😃
Will try to update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome n Rocking update Foxi!!! OMG Tanu's bestie Priya is her enemy... Oh she loves Rishi...
She trying to kill Tanu... How cruel is she... Tanu revealed her love for Rishi to her buddies... Except Priya all others r happy😳...
AbhMan became happy hearing Tanu's love for Rishi... They r waiting for Tanu's clear confession... ManAbhShi moments😆❤️😉...
Priya's goon trying to kill Tanu...
Rishi sees him n rescues Tanu...😳...
Tanu gets scared n she hugs Rishi...
Precap:Drunken Rishi n full of fun n romance...😳😛😉...
Can't wait anymore for next part... Excitement at d peak level...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: gopsss

Awesome n Rocking update Foxi!!! OMG Tanu's bestie Priya is her enemy... Oh she loves Rishi...
She trying to kill Tanu... How cruel is she... Tanu revealed her love for Rishi to her buddies... Except Priya all others r happy 😳...
AbhMan became happy hearing Tanu's love for Rishi... They r waiting for Tanu's clear confession... ManAbhShi moments😆❤️😉...
Priya's goon trying to kill Tanu...
Rishi sees him n rescues Tanu...😳...
Tanu gets scared n she hugs Rishi...
Precap:Drunken Rishi n full of fun n romance...😳😛😉...
Can't wait anymore for next part... Excitement at d peak level...

wo word gilehri...😳
Heheheehe...i also like the trio of ManAbhShi...😃
Ya next update will be fun...😉
Will update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Loved the update Haya... Hope they are aware of Priya's intentions...no problem because priya is making them to come closer...waiting for next update...waiting for Tanshi's romance too

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