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Posted: 6 years ago
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[Part 9]
[TRUTH REVEALATION]

Tanu's parents comes in only to see their daughter's glowing face..
They are very happy after seeing their daughter...
Sharda come near her...

S: dekha is liye hi bolti thi k kbhi khud pe dehaan de diya kro...
Hr waqt ulti seedhi hrkton pe dehaan jata hai..
Kbhi apna khyl nhi rkhti...
Kis ne kaha tha road pr chalo...car hai na us mn nhi a skti thi???
Hr waqt carelessness dikhani hoti hai...
Kisi din boht pitogi mjhse...
T: mama bsss...abhi bhi dantogi...bachi ki jaan logi kya???
S: chup kr...agr ab jaan lene dene ki baat ki na to ek zor se lagaon gi mn...

Tanu smiles at her mother's antics...

T: mamaaa...

She hugs her mother tightly...
She hugs her back...
Veerender also joins the family hug...
Tanu breaks the hug...

T: mama ghar chln...
S: han bs Rishi discharge paper le jr ajae to phr chlte hn...
V: bara pyara bcha hai...kisi kaam ko hath nhi lgane diya usne mjhe..
Discharge papers bhi khud la kr de rha hai...wo nhi hota to pta nhi hmra kya hota...
S: sach mn boht hosla diya hai usne hme...
V: khr chalo Tanu utho...ghr chln...Rishi bs discharge papers lata hi hoga..
T: nhiii...
S: kya mtlb abhi to bol rhi thi ghr jana hai...or ab nhi...
T: mtlb jana hai ghr...pr...wo...ap k sath...ap k sath nhi jana...Ri...Rishi k sath jana hai...

Sharda gives naughty smile...

S: dekhlo beti bigarti jarhi hai..
T: ji nhi wo mera friend hai...or friend k sath jane mn koi burai hai???
S: nhi...

Sharda and Veerender laughs out loud...
Rishi comes in...

R: uncle discharge papers...

He gives him papers...

R: ab mn chlta hon...
V: wo beta...sorry pr ek akhri kaam tha tmse...
R: arey sorry ki kya baat hai uncle boliye ap...
V: wo asal mn Tanu ki zid hai k wo tmhre sath jae...to...agr tmhe koi problem na ho to...tm isse ghr drop kr do...

Rishi looks at Tanu who gives him a devilish smile...

R: arey no problem mn kr donga issey drop...
T: mama papa ap jao hm ajaenge...
V: Thank u so much Rishi beta...
R: mention not uncle...😳

Sharda and Veerender leaves...
After they are gone...
Tanu moves her hand forward...with a devilish smile...
And says him to hold her hand with the movement of her eye brows...
He shook his head...
And holds her hand...
She holds him tightly...reducing the distance between them...
He looks at her with shock...and leaves her hand...

R: Tanu are u ok??? Dimagh to khrb nhi hogya...
T: abhi hi to thik hua hai...

She says with a wink...

R: pagal hogai ho tum...thora door ho kr chalo...
T: dekho meri tbyt khrb hai or tum mjhe pareshan kr rhe ho...
R: what a mess??? Abhi mn tmhe pareshan kr rha hon...
U r great Tanu...
T: hehehehe...i know...

He holds her hand and she again holds him tightly...

R: ufff God...tm mjhe irritate krna band krogi...
T: tmhe irritate krne mn hi to life ka maza hai...

She places her head on his shoulder...
They reached the car...

R: miss glue...will u leave me now???
T: nope mr. Handsome...i wont leave u...i will sit with u on driving seat...
R: what rubbish???
T: just kidding...i m not interested in u...
R: thank God...
T: ya ya...

She leaves him and sits on the front seat...
He also sits in the car and starts driving...
He places his hand on gear...
She also places her hand on his hand knowingly...
Rishi looks at her stunned...
Only to find her smiling and looking at front...

R: Tanu sar pe chot to nhi lgi na??? May be hme doctor ko ek or dafa check krwa lena chahiye...
T: hehehehehee...not so funny...

He removes his hand...
Tanu sees a pani puri shop...

T: Rishi pani puri...
R: dekhi hai mne...
T: stupid dekhne ka nhi keh rhi hon...chalo khate hn...stop the carrr!!!!

He stops the car...
She was about to leave when he held her hand...

R: madam wait...
T: what now...
R: u r ill...apka accident hua hai...u r not allowed to eat...
T: Rishi plzzz sirf thora sa...
R: no plzzz...

She makes a puppy face...

T: plzzz...acha only one...tm khud sirf ek khila dena mjhe...

Rishi melts at her sweetness...

R: ok but only one...
T: done...

She said with all her teeth out...

They goes to pani puri shop...

T: Rishi tmne kaha tha tm mjhe khilaoge...
R: whattt??? Mne kb kaha tha???
T: dekho mne kaha tha k tum mjhe apne hath se ek khila dena or tmne bola ok khate hn...tmne mana nhi kiya...ab tmhe mjhe khilana prega...
R: Oh God...ye kya hogya hai tmhe...achi khasi tigress thi pta nhi ye bachon ki rooh kahan se ghuss gai hai tmhare andar...
T: tm nhi khilaoge???
R: acha baba khila rha hon...

He picks up one and feeds her...

R: bsss ab chalo...

When they were about to leave some goons come and points gun on Tanu's head...

T: Rishi...Rishi help...

Rishi comes and hits on goon's hand...
The gun drops from his hand...
Rishi holds Tanu's hand and makes her to stand behind him...

R: meri Tanu ko hath kese lagaya...

And he punches goon...
He hits them badly and they ran away...

R: Tanu tum thik ho...

Tanu hugs him...

T: dekha mne kya kaha tha...tum hi ho jo hmesha mjhe bachate ho..
R: kya hogya hai tmhe...
T: mjhe kuch nhi hua...tm chahte to bhAg skte the...pr tmne mjhe bachaya...u r my saviour...or wo goons...
Unhe mne hi bulaya tha...

Rishi is hell shocked on listening it...
He breaks the hug...

R: whaattt???? Tumhara dimagh to thik hai...tm aise kese apni jaan pe kkhel skti ho...jb k tmhe pta hai k tm abhi weak ho agr ghlti se bhi tmhe lg jati to...kbhi socha hai apne barey mn...
T: mne ye sb isliye kiya...ta k tmse confess krwa skon k tum hi mjhe bachate ho hmsha...
R: to is k liye tm ye sb krogi u r just too much...

He goes and sits in car...opens the door of Tanu's side...

R: betho...

She comes and sits in car with approx crying face...

Precap: Tanu finally realises her love...

Thats it for now hope u guys like it...
Enjoy reading...
Will try to update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#92
superb update dear👏
eksath double dhamaka😃
hospital scene mai rishi ka concern dekhkar
mai to shapnome chali gayethi😉
kash meri life mai bhi itna pyaar karne wala
rishi jesa koi milta😳

late kiya par bhi,
itna pyaarasa double update de kar
dil khush kar diya
waiting for next...thora jaldi okk???😃



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Posted: 6 years ago
#93
Wow i m in dreamland haya ... amazing amazing both parts r amazing superb I m in love with this ff❤️. ...I can't say anything ...I don't know what to say...Rishi saves Tanu ...n hospital room scene is just superb😭...n Tanu saw Rishi she starrre Rishi😳she know that he used to save her ...she planned to reveal Rishi s truth...Rishi beat the goons ❤️...n that meri Tanu Ko baat kaise lagaya ...wooow👏...I can't wait nooo I won't wait can u pls update the next part sooon ❤️
I know tu bussy hai but pls jab bhi time mile to update kar de or Thora jaldi kar can't wait😳😭bahut wait karwayi hai tu😡...but love u 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#94
Superb foxi.👏 Ur both updates r too good.
Rishi's care for tanu 😳 wow touch to my heart.
Tanu's antics 😆 I am speechless yaar. Ur fabulous always.
Plz entertain us like dis.n update soon when u r free from ur work.😳😛

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Posted: 6 years ago
#95
Awesome updates Foxi!!! Tanu lost in Rishi's thoughts n met with an accident... Rishi took her to hospital... Rishi's care for Tanu❤️😳...
Tanu found her feelings for Rishi❤️...
That hospital scene..n car scene... I loved it!!! Rocking parts...
From now it will take a long time for ur next update...
Cant wait for next parts... Par intazar karna padta hai na...
Is ur blood group is A+😉!!!
If u get time please give us updates... We r always waiting for u... Love u❤️.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#96
Nice update
Continue plz
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Posted: 6 years ago
#97
Awesome update foxi . Loved both the parts .Rishi tu phale se hi mood mai tha now tanu also ab maza aayega .Aag dono taraf sae lag gayi .Ab tanu apne antics sae rishi sae ilu bolwayegi waiting for next .Wo word for late comment
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Posted: 6 years ago
#98
Really super updates Haya... Loved them... Naughty Tanu.. .loved her ...wo word for late reply...waiting for update... Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#99
Kaha hai tu😡... where is updates😭😡
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TearDrop50

superb update dear 👏

eksath double dhamaka😃
hospital scene mai rishi ka concern dekhkar
mai to shapnome chali gayethi😉
kash meri life mai bhi itna pyaar karne wala
rishi jesa koi milta😳

late kiya par bhi,
itna pyaarasa double update de kar
dil khush kar diya
waiting for next...thora jaldi okk???😃




Wo word dear for loving my story at this level...
Awww...thats so sweet...😳
InshAllah u will also get such life partner...😳
I m happy that u r glad with the flow of this story...
Sorry for late dear...
I will update tomorrow...InshAllah...😳

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