Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28] - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
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[Part 7]
[LOVE WITH HARSHNESS]


Tanu goes to uni...
When she enter...she see Dany and Priya there...

T: hey guys...where are our two jerks???
P: they didnt told u that they are not cmng...
T: what??? What rubbish yr??
D: i know why they didnt told u...bcz if they had told u...
T: i would have broken their faces...
D: ya thats what i was saying...
T: idiots...morons...in ko to mn baad mn dekhongi...abhi to kisi or ko treatment dena hai..
P: kisko???
T: the one and only mr. Rishi Singh Bedi...
P: oh acha...
T: but i have no plan...

They all start thinking...after a lil bit thinking...Tanu shouts...

T: wait for a while...i have an idea...

She gives an evil smile...
She tells them the plan...

T: ab ayega maza...

When their class started...
They all goes to the class ..
Rishi finds a note on his desk...

*Note:Rishi wait for 10 mins after the class i want to talk to u...but if i dont come u can go after 10 mins...
Regards principal..*

R: what is this?? Cant he call me in his office??? Confusing principal...

After their class got over...
Everyone leaves the class...
Rishi waits for 10 mins but no sign of principal...
After 10 mins of wait...he stands up and is going out of class...
Just then he steps on something and its a rope...
A bucket of water falls on him...and he gets all wet...

R: what the freak????

Just then he see Tanu and her gang...

R: now i got it who was behind that all...thank God i have spare clothes in my locker...i will see u...

Rishi goes to the locker room...
And change his clothes..

M: everyone be ready competition is about to start...

Dance competition begins...
Everyone gave their performances...
And now its TanShi's turn...
They didnt even practiced bcz Tanu made Rishi angry...
They comes in front of each other...
Rishi is still angry on her...his anger is visible in his eyes...
Tanu got lil bit scared...bcz she knew when he becomes angry at this level...he can do anything...
He cant control his anger...

Rishi places his hand in front of her...
Tanu hesitately gives her hand to him...

(Just like TanShi's reception dance...)

Then he starts dancing with her...
He dances with her very harshly bcz he is still angry...
he spins her and she is about to fall when he hold her hand...
She starts crying...

[Editing by me]

his heart melted at her tears...
He makes her stand up...
He hold her hand and moves it upward...
When he was about to kiss her hand...
She pulls it back ...
He tries to dance with her ...but now she isnt...
He again spins her but this time calmly...and then goes on his knees...
He hold his ear...she smiles at his antics...
He stands up and they move together in the sync of song...
She hugs him still syncing...

[Editing by me]

Just then lights on...and the sound of applause make them to wake up from their beautiful dream...
Judges stand up and give them a big hand...👏
They look at each other...
R(in heart): Rishi u have to control urself...
T(in heart): what was that feeling...and it looks like that he also had that feeling...

And the announcement of winner time...

M: and the award goes to...
.
.
.
.
.
.

Rishi and Tanu...

TanShi got shocked...
The sound of whistles and clapping wake them up...
They goes to stage and recieves the award...
After the dance competition get over...
Tanu goes to changing room...
Rishi comes there and locks the room...

T: hey...hey u...what are u doing here???

He doesnot utter a word and starts moving towards her...
she start stepping back...

T: i m saying stop there otherwise i will break ur face...

But he doesnot give her a damn...
Just then Tanu's way is blocked by wall...
Rishi comes closer to her...

T (with low and stammering voice): dont co...come near m...mm...me...i..i..i m...wa..warning u...

He bends towards her ear and she closes her eyes...
He whispers in her ear...

R: i m sorry...

And leaves her there stunned...
She opens her eyes with shock...
But before she question him he was gone...

T: he said sorry??? And that to me???

Precap: Tanu's accident...

Wo word guys for late...now a days life is very busy...
But enjoy reading...hope u guys like it...😳
Do comment and hit the like...😳
Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#82
Amazing update haya 😳awww rsb Ko gussa aaya Tanu par kaise ...nahiii ho Sakta 😆...tanshi dance😳she hugs him ☺️... changing room scene is just superb❤️. ... waiting haya for next update

PS :😡haya babyyy itna late update
Atleast daily ek update to hame😭 de Sakti hai na😡
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83
Aww u stole my heart!!! What an update as well as edit!!! TanShi won the competition!!!❤️
Tanu made Rishi anger n she got scared by seeing his anger!!!
Rishi expressed his anger in dance by harassing her.
But the reason of anger herself made him melt❤️😳!!!
Rishi said sorry to Tanu... N that style😳❤️!!!
Precap: Excitement on the peak...
Eagerly waiting for next part!!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#84
Nice update hayu 😳 every part of this update is mind blowing n specially tanshi dance. N last part rishi's apologize style is fabulous... Keep it up n plz update soon😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
As usual an awesome update 👏
tanshi dance alwys special to me😳
tanu's tear,rishi's sweet gesture 😉
loved it😊
bt precep tanu's accident😲
I hope tanu thik ho
waiting fo next...
plz update soon
kisiko itna
wait karana buri baat hai😃
Edited by TearDrop50 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86
falling for this tanshi more in each epi.R really Love it tanshi dance abd rishi was time angry with tanu . Shocking precape .Plz try to update sooner .Itna wait na karaya kar .Wa Waiting for next part hope to get sooner
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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: vinushi

Amazing update haya 😳awww rsb Ko gussa aaya Tanu par kaise ...nahiii ho Sakta 😆...tanshi dance😳she hugs him ☺️... changing room scene is just superb❤️. ... waiting haya for next update

PS :😡haya babyyy itna late update
Atleast daily ek update to hame😭 de Sakti hai na😡

wo word gilehri...❤️
Will update soon...
Wo word yr...i m not getting time...
See i m also not comng online...😔
Totally tangled in life problems...
So sorrryyy...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88
@cotton candy...
Wo word dear for liking this story...😳
And wo word for ur excitement...😃
Will update soon...😳

@lemon...
Wo word yr...😳
Wo word for such a great compliment...😳
Will update soon...😳

@moni...
Wo word dear ...😳
Hehhhehe...i know kisi ko itna intezar krwana achi baat nhi hai...😆
Will update ASAP...😳

@rajeeviansonai...
Wo word dear..😳

@Aru...
Awww thats so sweet of u baby...😳
Wo word for loving and supporting this story...😃
Will update soon...😃😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#89
Sorry Note:
Guys plzzz dont be angry...😭
Now a days i m totally tangled in my life problems...
Thats why not giving updates early...😒
And its moharram upcoming...
I will be totally busy...
And beside busy i wont give updates from 1st moharram to 10th...
So wo word in advance...
Enjoy guys...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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[Part 8]
[AN ACCIDENT]


Tanu was still in troma that Rishi said sorry to her...
And that too in this style...

*Uni's off*

She is still thinking about him and walking on the road...
She unconciously comes between the road..
Someone starts the car...after seeing Tanu...
A car comes near her...
she turns back...
But before she do anything...
It hits her and she fall on road..
She gets badly injured...
And the driver drove the car off...
Someone knowingly hit her...
She became slowly slowly unconcious after seeing someone running towards her...but cant able to see his face...
Its none other then her hero Rishi...
Blood is all over the road...
He comes to her...
sits on road and place her head on his knees...

R: Tanu wake up...Tanu...i wont let anything happen to u...
Its my promise...

He picks her up and takes to the hospital...
The doctor says its an emergency case...
and we have to do haste...
Otherwise cant say anything...
Rishi is said to complete the formalities...
He called her parents...
They reached the hospital...
Doctor comes out of the operation theater...

D: we need blood imidiately...otherwise its a chance that she will die...

Rishi grabs doctor's collar...

R: doctor agr usey kuch hua na to mn apka ye hospital seal krwa donga...
D: dekhiye hm koshish kr rhe hn...

Tanu's father comes and says Rishi to leave doctor's collar...
He leaves it...

D: dekhiye ap log blood ka intezaam jldi kijiye...
unka blood group A+ hai...
R: mera bhi A+ hai...mn donga blood...
D: aiye ap mere sath...

Rishi donates blood...thinking of Tanu...

R (in heart): Tanu mn tmhe kuch nhi hone donga...
Ye wada hai mera...tm mjhe itni asani se chor kr nhi ja skti...
agr tm chli gai to mjhe tang kon krega...
I miss ur harktain yr...jldi se theek hojao...

A drop of tear leaves his eyes...
But he suddenly removes it...
And it goes unnoticed by everyone...
As all of them are worried...

Doctor once again comes out...

D: operation successful rha...but inko andar se boht chotain ai hn...
Dua kijiye k subha tk sahi hojaye...or inhe hosh ajae...
Agr inhe hosh nhi aya to condition critical hoskti hai...
R: doctor kya hm us se mil skte hn???
D: ya but dehaan rkhiyega...patient ko disturb mt kijiyega...
R: sure doctor...

Everyone goes inside the room...
Tanu is lying unconcious there...
After seeing her daughter's conditon Sharda cant control her tears and went out to weep loud...
Veerender goes to comfort her...
Rishi is now alone in room...
He goes and sits on chair beside Tanu's bed...
He holds her hand and tears rolled down from his cheeks...

R: Tanu utho na yr...kya hogya hai tmhe...
Meri Tanu to itni strong hai...wake up dude...
u know i fell in love with a way u touched me without using ur hands...
u touched my heart...u touched my soul...
ur love is all what i need...i want u..all of u...ur flaws...ur mistakes...
ur perfect imperfections...i want u in my life...wake up na yr...

He stands up and kisses her forehead and then one by one her both eyes...and then sits back...
Holding her hand he doesnt realized when he went into deep slumber...

*morning*

This time Tanu wakes up first...
She sees Rishi sleeping on her hand holding it...
And a drop of tear is resting on his cheek...
She smiles a bit and then moves her hand upward slowly...
She removes the tear...and starts caressing his cheek...

T (in heart): i dont know what is this...
But i think i m falling for u...u r different...
u r making my life heaven..
I know its u who always saved me...
But i dont understand why u hide it...
May be bcz of our fight...

She smile thinking of their cute moments...
But then she suddenly realised...and removes her hand...

T (in heart): Tanu i think u have gone mad...sar pe bhi chot lag gai hai...
Idiot kya soch rhi ho...is ko dkh kr saaf lgta hai that he dont love u and u r falling for him...
but phr ye mere liye roya q???
Arey yr koi bhi insan kisi ki aisi halat dskh kr ro skta hai ...
Or hoskta hai wo roya na ho...bs sote hue ankhon se pani agaya ho..
Oh God i m going mad...plzzz help me...

Rishi wakes up and sees Tanu staring at him...

R: wo sorry asal mn tmhare parents bahar chle gae the q k unse tmhari ye halat dekhi nhi gai...is liye mn yhn ruka hua tha.. ankh kb lg gai pta hi nhi chala...sorry...

He stands up and was about to leave when she held his hand..

T: i know u saved me...thank u sooo much...
R: mne tmhe nhi bachaya...
T: to phr kisne bachaya...
R: mjhe kya pta...
T: to phr tm yhn kya kr rhe ho???
R: mn tmhre parents ko bula kr lata hon...

He pulls back his hand and leaves...
In the whole scene he doesnt looked at her...

T: meri taraf dekha bhi nhi...
agr sach bol rh the to meri ankhon mn dekh kr bolte...
koi jawab nhi tha tmhare pass...mjhe pata hai tmne hi mjhe bachaya hai or mn ye prove kr dongi...
Now u wait and watch...

She gives a devilish smile...

Precap: Tanu once again in danger...

Thats it for now..
Hope u guys like it...
Enjoy reading...😳

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