Tera Ishq Mera Junoon [TanShi FF] [Part 20 Page 28] - Page 13

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update haya👏 ...ohh new character priya I think shell play mks character in this story n bring tanshilicious closer😳
.. waiting for next part n more tanshilicious scene 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya333

Loved the update Haya... Hope they are aware of Priya's intentions...no problem because priya is making them to come closer...waiting for next update...waiting for Tanshi's romance too

wo word titli...😳
Hope so...😳
Ya she is...😉
Will update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: vinushi

Awesome update haya 👏 ...ohh new character priya I think shell play mks character in this story n bring tanshilicious closer😳
.. waiting for next part n more tanshilicious scene 😳

wo word gilehri...😳
Yr where are u now a days ...come to the forum plzzz...😭
Ya may be she is...😉
Will update soon...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Part 12]
[UNFORGETABLE CUTE MOMENTS]


Rishi is shocked on the happening of the moment...
He is standing still in his position with his hands on the tree...
His eyes fixed on the girl hugging him...
As he is drunk so he is out of his senses...
Tanu breaks the hug...
On seeing at his face...
She became awkward on his reaction...
She moved her eyes from Rishi to ground...
Finding some words to escape this awkwardness...

"Wo I...I got scared"
she said but stopped and looked at him who was still staring at her like he saw a monster...
She clicked her fingers in front of his eyes...
He blinked his eyes rapidly for a sec on hearing fingers snapping sound...
And get back to his senses..

"Rishi kya hogya hai tmhe??? "
She said with shocked expressions...

"Mujhe??? Mujhe to kuch bhi nhi huA..."
He said while swinging in air...
When he talked to her a weird smell entered her nose...
Which she recognized in a mere second...

"Alcohol"
She said shocked...

They both forgot about the incident which happened just a minute before...

"Rishi are u drunk??? "
She said just for lil bit confirmation...

"Hawww..."
He said making her to get more shocked...

"Kya hua??? "
She gave a reaction on his words...

"Tum achi nhi ho...i hate u.."
He said making a puppy face...

"Arey...mne kya kaha??? "
She said understanding his situation and taking fun of it...

"Tumne kaha k mne drink kiya hai...tmne mujhpe ilzaam lagaya...
I hate u..."
He said like a child...

"To tum ne sharab nhi pi?? "
She said enjoying the moment..

"Nhi nhi...ittu si bhi nhi..."
He said trying to make her believe his words...

"Pakka?? "
She said...

"Tumhari kasam..."
He said placing his hand on her head...
But changed his words imidiately...

"Nhi nhi blke meri kasam..."
Taking his hand back and placing on his own head...
She , shocked on his reaction questioned him...

"Meri kasam q nhi??? "

"Q k jis ki jhooti kasam khate hn wo mar jata hai na isliye...meri kasam...tmhari nhi..."
He said making her understand that the fear of loosing her made him change his words...
A smile adorned her lips which reached her ears...
She pulled his cheeks on listening his words...

"Oyeee...mn bacha nhi hon..."
He said annoyed with her action...
She laughed at his antics...

"Nhi tm bache hi ho..."
She said between her laugh...
And what he did just shocked her on the hell...
She didnt even expected this reaction...
He came forward closing all the distance between them...
Joining his head and nose with her...
Their breaths mingled...
She closed her eyes on his action...
And he just said...

"Do u love me??? "
His words entered her ears...
She opened her eyes locking them with his...
He once again said...

"U love me??? "
She didnt replied...
He cups her face and lift it a lil bit more...
Making her to close her eyes...
Their lips were mere inches away from each other...

"Do u??? "
He said once again...

"Yes.."
She said with her eyes closed...
A peaceful smile spread on his face...
He looked at her with so much love and affection...
And took her in his embrace...

"I love u too.."
Was just he said...
They both shared a peaceful and long lasting hug with the moon witnesing their love for each other...
Rishi breaks the hug...

"Ghar chln??? "
He said with a smile...

"Hmmm..."
She said with her red cheeks...
As he seperated himself from her...
Due to alcohol he lost his balance and fell backward...
Making her to laugh out loud...
He made a face on her reaction...

"Acha sorry.."
She said stopping her laugh on seeing his sad face...
She gave him her hand which he accepted imidiately...
She gave him support to walk towards the car...
She made him sit on the front seat...
And she herself sat on driving seat...
They were having a beautiful journey...
Rishi starts staring at her...
On realising a continuous gaze on her...

"Rishi udhar dekho..."
She said lil bit loudly...
Making him to jump up in his place...

"Kya hai??? Q dara rhi ho??? "
He said more loudly then her...

"Aise ghoor ghoor k mt dekho mjhe.."
She said...

"To phr kese dekhon??? "
He said innocently...

"Dekho hi mt.."
She said concentrating on road...
His evil mind gave him some signals...
He smiled at her words...
She looked at him in disbelief...

"Ab is mn smile krne ki kya bt thi??? "
She said in disbelief...

"Is mn bt ye thi..."
He said...came closer to her and kissed her cheeks...
Making her to go all red...

"Rishi...mn...mn..."
She said with stammering voice...

"Tm kyA..."
He said teasing her...
And again kissed her cheeks...

"Rishi plzzz bsss...accident hojaega..."
She said making him to stop his teasing...
He kissed her one last time...

"Rishi.."
Was all she said ...
And he stopped...
He placed his head on the seat...
Faced the window...
And went into dreamworld...

When they reached home he was already in deep slumber...

"Oh God!!!! Rishi tmhe bhi abhi sona tha..."
She said making a pout sadly...

Precap: Rishi in investigating mode...

Hope u guys like it...
Do comment and hit like...
Enjoy reading... 😳

Edited by HayaZehra313 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Superb part hayu..every part is beautifully wrote..u r brilliant yaar👏..Rishi n tanu romance..tanshi yaad aa gaye yaar.❤️
Fully tanshian part..love u baby..keep write like this..
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aww lovely TanShilious update Foxi!!!😳❤️...
Drunken Rishi n his antics😛😉...
Expectations k upar wala update😳...
Tanu teasing Rishi❤️... Aww how cute...
Finally Rishi made Tanu to say her love for him❤️...
While reading I was remembering d Pune incident... Cute Rishi in drunken state...who is continuously troubling Tanu...😉.
Their car scene aww...❤️😉😛...
Rishi n his mischievous naughty mind...😆...
He utilized their time for teasing Tanu...
Loved it to d core Hayu❤️...
Precap:Rishi in investigation mode...
Can't wait for next part dear... Update ASAP❤️...
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Smita_rawat

Superb part hayu..every part is beautifully wrote..u r brilliant yaar 👏..Rishi n tanu romance..tanshi yaad aa gaye yaar.❤️

Fully tanshian part..love u baby..keep write like this..

wo word lemon...😳
Awww happy that u loved this story...
Loads of hugs for u and love u too...❤️
I will try my bestest to update ASAP...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: gopsss

Aww lovely TanShilious update Foxi!!! 😳❤️...
Drunken Rishi n his antics😛😉...
Expectations k upar wala update😳...
Tanu teasing Rishi❤️... Aww how cute...
Finally Rishi made Tanu to say her love for him❤️...
While reading I was remembering d Pune incident... Cute Rishi in drunken state...who is continuously troubling Tanu...😉.
Their car scene aww...❤️😉😛...
Rishi n his mischievous naughty mind...😆...
He utilized their time for teasing Tanu...
Loved it to d core Hayu❤️...
Precap:Rishi in investigation mode...
Can't wait for next part dear... Update ASAP❤️...

wo word cotton candy..😳
Happy that it reached ur expectation level...😳
Yes confession is done now...😉
Hahhaha...same i also remembered that incident...😆
That was fun yr...🥱
RSB's mind is really devilish... 😛
Happy that u loved it...😳
I will try my best to update soon...😳
Ur comments are way too motivating...😳
Love u...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
[Part 13]
[HE...THE INVESTIGATOR]


Tanu somehow managed to drop him to his room...with the help of his servant...
She goes to her home all the way smiling...

*-----*-----*------*

Sunlight entered his room...which was full of mess...
He looked more handsome in that light...
Sunshine made him to wake up from his beautiful sleep after drinking lots of alcohol...
He woke up with headache...his memory was blur...
He cant recall any incident which was hapened yesternight...
Only one thing he remembered was someone attacked Tanu...
Even he didnt recall her confession...

"Ufff my head is aching..."
He said squirming in pain...

"Lekin wo kon tha jis ne Tanu ko marne ki koshish ki???"
He said...

"I will investigate..."

He got up from bed to go to uni...

*-------*-------*--------*

On reaching uni when his sight went on her...
She was behaving different...
As he didnt remember anything thats why he didnt understand the reason of her wierd behaviour...
She just looked at him and went away avoiding him...
He was all confused why she is behaving like this...
He thought to ask her..he was about to go just then Abhay and manpreet surrounded him...

"Hey bro...where are you going???"
Manpreet said winking at Abhay...

"Yr Tanu is behaving awkward...but i dont know why..."
He was tensed about her...

"To aise hi karegi na...tu ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai..."
Abhay said making him to be shock on hell...

"What i did??? "
He said all confused...

"Seriously u dont know??? "
Manpreet said...now he was confused...

"No!! "
He said glaring at them...

"Abey chor yr drame bazi kr rha hai ye...treat nhi dena chah rha..."
Abhay said making a sad pout...

"Kis cheez ki treat?? "
He said now becoming more confuse...

"Acha bhabhi ne tujhse confess kr diya tjhe pata bhi nhi hai...chal chal ja yhn se..."
Manpreet said...

"What??? When??? "
He took a pause and then said...

"Oh shit!!!! I was drunk thats why i dont remember anything...i met her yesternight after droping you idiots home..."
He said now realising what he missed...

"Nhi kr yr..."
Said Manpreet...

"Tum dono ko kese pata??? "
Rishi said..

"Humne khud Tanu ko bolte hue suna tha.."
Abhay said...

"Shit!! Shit!!!! Shit!!!! Damn shit!!!..."
He said cursing himself for not remembering anything and also for drinking yesternight...

He turned and ran towards Tanu...
She was standing on side using her phone...
He came and stood in front of her...
She looked at him and her cheeks go red...

"I wanna ask one thing..."
He said looking directly into her eyes...

"Hmmm.."
Was all she said...

He came forward...held her by her arms...
And said...

"Do you love me??? "
He said and she bent her head...because her cheeks were red...
He looked at her and found his answer...
But he wants to listen it from her...
He lifted her chin...

"Tell me Tanu.."
He said trying to get words from her...

"Yes..."
She said and then she was pulled in his arms...
Hugging her tightly he said...

"I love you too.."
happiness was visible in his words and voice...

"Sorry i dont remember anything about yesternight beacause i was drunk..."

On the name of yesternight...
He remembered attack on Tanu...
He broke the hug...
Cupped her face...

"I will always protect you...i promise..."
He said , kissed her forehead and went from there...
She watched him leaving...

*------*-------*--------*

After reaching home the first thing he did was he called someone...

"I want all the information in 24 hours...who was that and what he wanted from Tanu?? "
He said to that person who was his friend and a great detective...

"Yes i will give you all information...chal bye see you soon..."
His friend said...

"Bye.."
he said disconnecting the call...

"Who the hell are you..i wont leave you...you didnt hurt her you had hurted me..."
He said giving that person a death note from here...

"But first i have to do one important thing..."
He said with evil smile...

He picked up his car keys...
And went to her home...
She was standing in front of mirror...
Someone came from behind and closed her eyes with his hands...

"Rishi.."
She said...

But didnt got the reply she wanted...

"Not Rishi i m your one and only lover..."
He said...(remember whenever Rishi talks to her being an unknown person he changes his voice...)

"You again..."
She said disgusted...

"Ya me again...u have any problem..."
He said making her to cluntch her teeth...
He turned her face away from mirror...
She removed his hands and was about to turn when he stopped her by back hugging her...
She tried to escape from his grip but all went in vain...

"What do you want??? "
She said still trying to remove his hands from her waist...

"Hmmm...nice question baby..."
He paused for a second and then said...

"I want you darling..."
He said smirking at her...

"Keep your this rubbish smirk inside...i dont love you...i...i love someone else..."
She said to him...

"Oh!!!! I see who is that lucky man??? "
He said acting very nicely...

"His name is...Rishi...Rishi Singh Bedi..."
She said again trying to escape...

"Oh!!!! Thats mean you love me..."
He said now in his own voice...

She was hell shocked on listening his voice after the voice of that person...

He loosen his grip...
She pushed his hands with a jerk...turning to him all shocked...
Only to find him smiling at her...

"You cheapster..."
She said hitting him on his shoulder...

"I hate you...you cheated me..."
She said angrily...

"Arey.."
He said but was cut by her in between...

"Shut up your mouth..."
She said...
She started hitting him on chest cursing him...

"You cheapster...you liar...you pervert...i hate you..."
She said continuously hitting him
He held her hand and pulled her towards himself...

"Jaan logi kya??? "
He said winking at her...just to get one more punch on his chest...

"You cheap jack...i love you..."
She said and hugged him...which was returned by him...

"I love you too...soon to be mrs. Cheap jack..."
He said and she gave him one more punch...
They both enjoyed their moment...
Hugging each other and sharing so much love and care...

*------*-------*---------*

Precap: Rishi will know the truth...

Hope you guys like it...
Enjoy reading...😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Mind blowing, fabulous, excellent.what I am saying.my words is short yaar..tanu n rishi confession of love is wow😳.again tanshian style update yaar❤️.i remembered some glimpse of tanshi❤️. update soon eagerly waiting for ur next update.

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