ONE MISTAKE IN DIFFERENT VERSION- part1A/B/C PG 9/11/13

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Myrah Rajvardan Malhotra

@_Myrah_

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#91

M totally loving this..

Its super amazing n damn interesting...

Eagerly waiting to knw who is that man...??? Ab mazza aayegaa jealous manik...

Do continue soon...

N thnx for pm,.

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Megha Agarwal

@megha6agrwl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Yaar...!!

This is something more affectionate n emotional...!!!

Thank God...its a 3 shot..bcoz in the ss its getting difficult to tolerate Nandini's POV which is jusified but makes me cry..!!

Evn manik's..!!

All the best

Updates are as usual awesome

Continue soon

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Loved d update.

So now manik understood dat he wasnt der wen she needed him d most.hope to see manik solving problems.

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Pooja

@pooja_shineStar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

This is wow!

Poor manik..but he deserves this and omg...soha she is sich a b****, totally hate her!

And i am very curious to know who the other man is..maybe you are bringing a new character?

Very well written updates

N im very sorry..but i am very, very bad at writing loong comments...soo hopefully this satisfys you a bit (:

Continue sooon!

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

This version is also interesting..
But a doubt, if manik doesnt love soha then why he said this to nandini...i mean usse to 24 hrs je andar hi samaj aa gya ki he doesnt love soha..
This is quite sierd atleast manik ko kuch din to soha ke saath spend karne chahiya the then slowly slowly usse samaj aana chahiya tha ki he had lost his most precious..
But never mind lets see how u'll turn this story..
Cont soon.

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prrk86

@prrk86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Superb and emotional update Love manan and

maniks pov was awesome but y is soha with him

Can't stand her lovely update and thanks for the pm

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Noor

@CROCKOMICHI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

oh god i am officially in love with this ff. amazing but soha yar plz remove her she is so irritating, but was nandini with cabir. i think

update

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Apoorva Rath

@angelsparkling1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Wow Soo amazing

superb

fantastic

n very emotional

just loved it

Updt soon

can't wait for the next part

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sweet_kaur

@sweet_kaur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Fab update
Omg I'm literary in tears
Loved all three parts
Specially the translations which
Got involuntary tears in my eyes
Beautiful and emotional
And wonderful
Update soon
Thanks for the pm dear!

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tanishka.verma9

@tanishka.verma9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

It was amazing!!!!!! I loved it!!! But i am confused. Did soha cheat on manik?? Weren't they supposed to be happy?? Can you please tell me from where you have started this story?? Is it after nandini left signing the divorce papers or some other time?? But seriously you are an amazinggg writer!!! Keep up the good work and update soon!!

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