ONE MISTAKE IN DIFFERENT VERSION- part1A/B/C PG 9/11/13

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola my lovelies.. . Sissys and my dear friends...

I'm the writer of ONE MISTAKE as you know and of course of many other stories along with it... But right now m here to ans all your what ifs...


Okay... So this is mainly to answer all your questions by making a complete different version...

I dont know if even it is a smart idea...To make a different version of your own story... Nor I think anyone has ever done this before... So m a little nervous... And so I dont know what am doing is right... Or I should even continue... So i guess you'll have to help me with it


But well to tell you the truth even I have been thinking of One Mistake in a different story version for a while now... And after reading many of your comments... Which contained many what ifs and if nots...

I decided to come up with this...


So as you might know... One Mistake was supposed to be a 2shot before... Or maybe 3...

In which I had planned none of this to happen but somehow your love forced me to cont and I couldn't deny...

So i have decided to come up with a two shot again...

Where all your what ifs will be answered

What if soha hadn't cheated him... What if he didn't know still that Nandini was pregnant... What if soha never left him... Or what if soha never helped him open his eyes...


What would happen then...

Would he still realize that he loves her...

Would he still go after her...


Would he still crave for her the same way...

Would he still chose to put in the same efforts...

There. Are many questions to be answered yet... Many things to be cleared...
Many possibilities to unfold and many reasons to open...


Lets see how it really turns out to be...

(and well only to tell you I came up with this because of course all this can't be put up right in the middle of the story... So this was my only option)




If interested... Like and comment below...

So i know how many people are really interested...

And if not... Then simply ignore... Its fine with me...

If I get a good response... I may continue... Or if not... I will forget I ever even wrote this...


So... Dont feel shy if your willing to read this version of the story... Just comment like and let me know...


Thank you

Love
Apurva










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krazzy_parthian thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Interesting...
Would love to read...anything of manan that to from an awesome writer

Continue jaldi

LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey its a v gud idea to luk at d story frm a diff angle..
I would lv to read dis...
Evn I ws lso thought about dis mny times while rdng d updts...

Plz continue soon...
N do pm me once u updt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice interesting cont soon dear
Would love to read it 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Hey I really liked ur idea..
I loved ur original version..
N as u correctly stated .. d only pbl I had ws wat if soha didn't cheat n didn't gav lecture on him being disloyal.. den manik would never realize his mistake..
Plz bae.. I need ur nandu strong n may b mov on wid maddy.. den may b outta jealousy manik would realize..
Well I trust u wid our opinions..
Waiting fr this version..
Do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Pls continue soon.. I m very much interested to know different angles to one mistake... 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting


would love to read more


Updt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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pls continue wud luv to read it!!
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seriously those questions are haunting me!!! Tume mere dil ki baat kehdi!! Please continue with this ts!!! I really really really wanna know what would have happened! !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting. ..
Pm me wen u vl update

Love

Shreya

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