ONE MISTAKE IN DIFFERENT VERSION- part1A/B/C PG 9/11/13

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Painful ..
Well he deserved it
After all he abandoned her :3

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

So basically I want to kill Manik Malhotra again!
Dude, his one mistake in the other version makes me what to puke on his face and this version wants me to scratch him but no I feel better because this ass of a person understood what he had done on his own. Where as that Manik,agghhh!
Don't make them meet, give Nandini all the love in the world and burn the shit down of Manik's ass. But shit, why did this have to be MaNan?!?!

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Sanjana malhotra

@MissRight

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

sorry for him... but he deserves it...😡

but still cant wait for 'em to be back together😉

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Thanks for the pm

loved this version of one mistake

n m glad he doesnt know bout pregnancy or maybe there is none...

but m glad how the story is progressing

probably the guy is maddy or abhi

hoping to see jealous manik

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beautifulchaos

@beautifulchaos

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Hey Kiddo..

Hope u are doing well...

Thanks for the update... It is excellent.. I'm loving it to the core..

Aah!!! it is relief to imagine Nandini in someone else's arms. I know things between Nandini and te guy is on a platonic level as Nandini is too dignified a girl to hop from one guy to another in a mere span of 27 hours. Also, Nandini's friends must be as respectable as herself but the MORON Malhotra doesn't know that right???

And I do not understand why cannot he ask Soha to F*** off?? Ok she barged in his car uninvited but what is the need for him to tag her along?? And well... didn't expect anything better from Soha... she will try to make the most out of this chance and grab this opportunity with both her hands...

What goes around comes around and Karma is indeed a bitch.. Happy to see Mr. Malhotra getting boiled in his own stew...

Update soon...

Love n God bless

Nura

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sadiya51

@sadiya51

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Wow I loved all the parts and ya who is that guy
Is nandini still pregnant in this and would love to read further but pls do update the real version

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rimsha01

@rimsha01

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Awesome.

The thing which i loved the most was your translation of the song. It was so deep. Perfectly suited his situation.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Love it... his POV was great, the way realized on his own and so soon too his mistake, the song translation- thanks, suits so well, now lookin forward to finding out about the other guy...and how Manik wins her back...