ONE MISTAKE IN DIFFERENT VERSION- part1A/B/C PG 9/11/13 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
It was just awesome like you only,
simply mindblowing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: apps33




Haha...No dear M not going to slap uh or do anything...

It was not your fault...

I guess that stry just put uh too much in a trauma😆


And i know now that was not for me...

And i also understood the complete scene


And trust me it was ntg but funny😆😆😆




Oh dear..u r too cute n sweet..thank u so much...u must have guessed wht shit tht story was n whn i read ur proluge i just got...so sorry for the misunderstanding 😕 n u write so well...thts why i love one mistake... Thnx for understanding n again sorry for my dumbness 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Again you just nailed it.
The way you portrayed maniks emotion through the song.
Update soon
Waiting loveee
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin


Oh dear..u r too cute n sweet..thank u so much...u must have guessed wht shit tht story was n whn i read ur proluge i just got...so sorry for the misunderstanding 😕 n u write so well...thts why i love one mistake... Thnx for understanding n again sorry for my dumbness 😆


Haha... No worries dear...

I know how some stories put u in trauma

I myself have experienced that...

And after reading your comment I could guess what level of torture it might have been...

And i only hope to not give my readers the same torture even unknowingly 😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
dont complain me that iam giving u same feedback to your each chapter

because u wrote all chapters equally beautiful.and comparing that song lyrics with manik situation was an amazing part

.ur os was also very good.i want more short stories

continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
hey .. ws eagerly waiting for the chaps..
its delight reading ur stories.. n this ws no less.
loved how u potrayed manik's pov.. bt y the hell heis still roaming around wid soha.. aarrhh..
i really want nandu to move on wid anothr guy.. say, maddy..
n at last maddy manik fight fr nandu's lov...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Wowww it was awesome dear. Tq for updating dear was eagerly waiting for it. Manik's pov's were amazing. Tq so much for this fantabulous update. Please update the next part asap. Tqvm for the pm dear. Take care and always keep smiling:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
update was superb and emotional.
manik was searching her lyk mad and finally he found her.
bt who is he...
eagerly waiting for next update
cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Awesome

Mind blowing



Outstanding


Nice




Superb




Heart touching





Wth he's still romaing with soha


Please one request don't show manik n soha intimate scene


I can bear romaing around but please I'm beg u



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