ONE MISTAKE IN DIFFERENT VERSION- part1A/B/C PG 9/11/13 - Page 8

It was just awesome like you only,
simply mindblowing.

Originally posted by: apps33

Haha...No dear M not going to slap uh or do anything...

It was not your fault...

I guess that stry just put uh too much in a trauma😆

And i know now that was not for me...

And i also understood the complete scene

And trust me it was ntg but funny😆😆😆

Oh dear..u r too cute n sweet..thank u so much...u must have guessed wht shit tht story was n whn i read ur proluge i just got...so sorry for the misunderstanding 😕 n u write so well...thts why i love one mistake... Thnx for understanding n again sorry for my dumbness 😆

Again you just nailed it.
The way you portrayed maniks emotion through the song.
Update soon
Waiting loveee

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

Oh dear..u r too cute n sweet..thank u so much...u must have guessed wht shit tht story was n whn i read ur proluge i just got...so sorry for the misunderstanding 😕 n u write so well...thts why i love one mistake... Thnx for understanding n again sorry for my dumbness 😆

dont complain me that iam giving u same feedback to your each chapter

because u wrote all chapters equally beautiful.and comparing that song lyrics with manik situation was an amazing part

.ur os was also very good.i want more short stories

continue soon...

hey .. ws eagerly waiting for the chaps..

Wowww it was awesome dear. Tq for updating dear was eagerly waiting for it. Manik's pov's were amazing. Tq so much for this fantabulous update. Please update the next part asap. Tqvm for the pm dear. Take care and always keep smiling:-)

update was superb and emotional.

Awesome