ONE MISTAKE IN DIFFERENT VERSION- part1A/B/C PG 9/11/13

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

nice updates...plz continue...

why the hell manik choose soha over nandini...i think he had lost his brain...nandini did everthing she can do for him..she always supported him...she took good care of him...she was selfless...only thinks about him..

in return he only gave pain to his wife...so manik have to live with this pain😡...

soha she was shameless...

These lines 'He has lost the diamond while searching for petty stones. He has lost his heart while trying to find his heartbeat... He has lost his soul while trying to find a soulmate... He has lost himself while trying to win someone else' i loved them...great job👏...

take care...

thanks for pm...

Edited by prasanna77 - 9 years ago

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Swarna

@manancraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Awesome... Heart touching...❤️.

U portrayed manik's emotions so well...

Aankhon main aanshoo aa gaye...😭..

Can't understand one thing...why the hell he is STILL roaming with soha...😡...

Make him suffer...plz... I will b hurt 💔 ...but he deserves it...

Waiting for their face off...cont soon.😃

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Nyc but It's sooo fast Nandu k jate hi Mani n usko miss kiya n 2nd 27hrs m Nandu kisi or k arm m...!!!

I think Atleast 2 to 3 days gap hota to hi acha hota...

& Plzz plzz plzz CONTINUE THAT REAL ''ONE MISTAKE'' PLZZZ PLZZZ
WOOO BOHAT AWWWEESOOOME H PLZZZ USKO CONTINUE KAROOO PLZZZ

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millie

@millie17

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Awsm updts..
Thnx fr gvng us these lamba wala parts...
I really likd them a lot...

So manik realised that he hv destroyed his life wth his own hands...
He hv thrown d most precious thng of his life by himslf...
Its gud to c him repentng...
But I jst wish he throws out soha completly frm his life bfr going bck to nandini...

Who is d prsn wth nandu...?
Mayb a v gud frnd...
But manik deserved to witns dis to realise all his past mistks...

Continue soon dr...
N thnx fr d pm...

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firefly09angel

@firefly09angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Awesome update...
Nandini kissi aur ke saath???
Wanted to read further...
Continue soon...

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awesome!! I loved it!! Manik is in so much pain but he deserves this,for hurting nandini... He now realized how nandini was better than chipko soha,far far better... Now who is this guy with nandini... Pls continue soon...I m very curious to know that wat happens next... Thanks for pm... 😊 😊

Edited by Sonalmanan - 9 years ago