ONE MISTAKE IN DIFFERENT VERSION- part1A/B/C PG 9/11/13

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Awesome update

Nice update

Loved it

Loved the update

Update the next part soon

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anya

@anya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

wow...loved d all three parts...

u penned down manik's emotions soo well...

nd soha ...wat she is doing wid manik?

nd y manik didn't said anything 2 soha?

nd who was dat guy?

i think so...its abhi...r smeothr frnd...

bt not d type wat amnik was guessing...

cont d nxt part soon...

wtng 4r dat...

keep smiling!!!

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Awesome update

Manik realised that what he has lost

Even I loved those lines

Beautiful words!

Well written lines!

The song was apt !

Along with the translations.

Soha!

I'm just annoyed with her

I wanna know what happens next. ...

Is it aryamaan who is consoling nandu?

Looking forward to the next chapter

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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riya_10101

@riya_10101

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

part 1 is awsome...

hope in second part it will nandu...

cont soon... thnx for PM😊

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Superb amazing update dea. ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Amazing update.

I liked this version of the story more.

Soha wasn't really needed to understand his mistake.

Glad that Nandini's absence was enough for him to understand his feelings towards her.

Soha is so annoying.

Chance pe dance sort of :P

Manik felt bad watching someone else taking his place.

Watching Nandini in someone else's arms.

Who was the guy anyways?

Loved the update.

Song selection was good too.

Thanks for update & pm.

Continue soon :)

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PILU123

@PILU123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#117

amazing update dear...

this soha is very irritating besides i dont want to tolerate aryaman or maddy plz

i cant understand if nandini s absence cause manik immense pain why he is still roaming around with soha?

thanks jaldi update karne ke liye

also post next part soon plz

thanks for the pm😊

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Thanks for pm.dear

Very very interesting and emotional update.

Manik realized his mistake. .now he is trying to find het.

Soha is one dumb girl. .

Very very interesting story.

Looking forward to seeing more.

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Amazing

Manik after losing her gets to know her importance in his life and now he regret it

Searching for her lyk a mad and finally he found her totally shattered that guy must be cabir

Loved it

Waiting for nxt

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Pravallika69

@Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Amazing
Evry line u wrote so well describing Manik condition
How he is missing her
How much pain he is going through
N here nandu is with someone
Who is it?
N did she move on
Too many questions
Dieing out of curiosity
Pls uodate soon
Dnt make us wait pls yaar
Update pretty soon
Great job appu

Thanks for PM
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi

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