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Posted: 19 years ago
#31

hello friend i am sheela or mai yeh chtii si story likh rahi ho hamare sujal per ..

SUJAL:GHAR PER THA-

KAHISH IS COMING OR WOH DIRECT SUJAL KE KAMRE MAI CHALE JATI HAI:

SUJAL DEKH KER CHOOK JATA HAI

SUJAL:APP KON OR MAIRE KAMRE MAI KAISE:

KASHISH:JEE WOH MAI VEENA UNTY KE KAMRE MAI JANA THA LAIKEEN MAI SAMJI KE YEH VEENA UNTY KA KAMRA HAI IS LIYEE MAI AA GAYEE:

SUJAL:VEENA UNTY SHE IS MY MOM TUM INEEH KAISE JANTI HO?

KAHISH:WOH KYA HAI KE VEENE UNTY NE MUJHE APNI BETI MANNA HAI IS LIYEE MAI AJJ PEHLI BAR IN KE GHAR AAYE HO LAIKEEN WOH HAMARE GHAR AATI JATI HAI:

SUJAL:ACHAA THEEK HAI LAIKEEN MOM TO ABHI GHAR PER NAHI HAI:

KASHISH :OH NO MUJHE UNN SE MILNA THA LAIKEEV AB...OKAY BYE:

SUJAL:BYE BYE:
NEXT DAY YEH DONOO MILEE RASTE MAI..SUJAL APNI CAR MAI THA OR KASHISH PEDAL

SUJAL CAR CHALA HE RAHA THA KE US KI NAZAR KASHISH PER PARI

SUJAL :HEY TUM YAHA
KASHSIH:HA WOH KYA HAI KE MUJHE APNI BEHAN CHAROO KE BIRTHDAY PER US KO GIFT DENA HA EK DRESS WOH HE LAINE JA RAHI HO SHOPPING HOLE"

SUJAL:BETHOO MAI VAHEE SE NIKLOO GA TUM KO CHORR DETA HO VAHA"
KASHISH:NAHI MAI CHALE JAVOO GI"
SUJAL:HEY BETH BHI JAVOO
KASHISH:OKAY
SUJAL:KYA BAAT HAI HUM KAL SE MILEE HAI MAGAR AB TAK HAMNE APNE NAM BHI NAHI BATAYEE HAI"
KASHISH:I AM KASHISH AND YOU
SUJAL:I AM SUJAL GAREWAL
KASHISH:APP KYA KARTE HO
SUJAL:I AM BUSINESS MAN
KASHISH:OKAY
KASHISH:OH SHOPING HOLE BHI AA GAY
SUJAL:JEE HA BATOO BATOO MAI KAB AA GAYA MUJHE TO PATTA BHI NAHI CHALA
KASHISH:OKAY SUJAL BYE
SUJAL:ABHI BYE KAHA MUJHE BHI KUCH SHOPING KARNI HAI
KASHI:OH REALLY CHALOO MAIRE SATH HE KARLOO APP SHOPING
SUJAL:OKAY

AB APP LOD PLEASE IS KAHANI KO CONTINUE KARE ...WAISE APP KO YEH KAHANI KAISI LAGII YEH BHI BATANA ZAROR..

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Posted: 19 years ago
#32

farah plz continue yaar itna bhi bada nahi tha plzzzzzzzz 😆.yaar thoda aur likh do plz.its too good 👏.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
PLZ CON 'DO NAAM EK JAAN'

GREAT STORY 👏




SANA



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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok guys mey yahin per hoon nida.............. 😉
me goona write next part of pyaar to hona hi tha.............

well guys guys after this all mess between sujal and kash..........

sujal come out of bathroom after taking bath

he didnt find kash there.................

sujal from his room: kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

kash down stairs:ufff yeh sujal kis mitti ka bana howa hai........

kash enter in her room: kya hai sujal

sujal:mey ney tumhey kaha tha na sath jaen gye neechey

kash:tum mujey ik baat batao tum abhi tak bachey ho ya barey hogye ho

sujal:kya matlab

kash:nahi dekho na herwaqt bachoon ki terhabehave kertey ho ...............jessey koi bacha appni mummy say candy mangta hai

sujal:dekho ik to tum meri mamma nahi ho........dosra mey candies nahi khata teesra agar tum ko apni age bataney ka itna shook tha k tum meri mom jitni ho pehley batana tha................. 😆

kash:enough sujal veena mummy ab itni baari age ki nahi hai..............

sujal:mey kab mamma ki baat kera MEY To vasu mom ki baat kera tha..............

kash:sujal tum........................... 😡 tum mujey irritate kerey ho

sujal:thats wat i want my very dear wife.........huuuuuuuuuu

kash:agar mey tang kerney per aai na to mey tumheynahi choroon gi

sujal:tumey kis nay kaha k mujey choro....haan 😉

kash:i ..... i...........i

sujal:i know tum ney kal hi kaha tha k u love me rite.......... 😉 but i must tell i don....... 😆

kash:wat ever..........u r immposible sujal impossible to understand.................

this is for a day friends....................

wt luv and regards amna
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
farah continue..... par kashish ney inkar kyun kiya?????(do naam ek jaan)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Great stories... keep up the good work...
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Posted: 19 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=65795

Kashish Pyaar ki...

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=65795
ok ppl.....i know now keh hindus can't marry in cousins to thora sa relaion change kartay hain...ok...now kashish is an adopted beti of teh Garewals...uss ka pita Om ka bhut acha dost tha...since tehy dies the Garewals have adopted her as a daughter...and Mihir is a distant relative f teh Garewals so Krippa is not a first cuzin of Angad so they can get married...lekin tulsi ko woh chachi hi kehtey hain aur Kripa is like the daughter of the family too!



hey ppl...hopeu liked the last part..tahnsk for ur comments...khair now we left the story whree someone comes in kashish's room and places a hand on her shoulder and saya:
KASHISH!!!

so here is the new part:
Kashish aik damm sey murr ker dekhti hai: uss key samney aik normal height ka larka kharra hota hai..black Polo shirt aur black dress pant...uss key chehray per aik halki si muskrahat hoti hai aur ankhain hamak rahi hoti hain: yes gurls u r right/....this is our Sujal..the dreamboy of every gurl...Kashish jab ussey murr ker dekhti hai to uss ka moun khul jata hai aur woh hairangi sey ussey dkeh rahi hoti hai:
Kash: SUJAL!!! tum agaye?/
Sujal: koi shaq??
Kashish hansti ahi aur phir uss ey gallay lag jati hai ( friendship hug) aur Sujal halka sa apna sar hilata ahi aur kashish key sarr per haath rakhta hai
Kash: kaisey ho tum?? main ney tumhain kitna miss kia...janab ney anney main kuch ziada hi jaldi nahi kar di...bhayi tumhari yeh parhayi kab khatam hogi...mujhey to laga tha keh tum wapis hi nahi aogey..chalo kisi bahanay to aye..acha suno...tum sey jo cheezey main ney mangwayi thi woh laye??
Sujal ke chehray per muskaraht hoti hai
Sujal: tum bilkul nahi badli na....main theek hun...no.2 mujhey wapis to ana hi tha...no 3 shayed tumhain ghalatfehmi thi keh main nahi aonga...aur no4 haan baba tumhari sarri cheezen laya hun jo tumhari extra-long list per thi
Kash: Oh my God!! pata nahi mujhey yaqeen kyun nahi ho raha keh tum hi ho
Sujal: han...pata hai kyun...kyunki ab main pehlay sey ziada handsome, cute aur adorable hun
Kash: ahahaha!!! cute and adorable? forget it!
Sujal: attey hi larayi shuroo....kabhi to baksh dia karo meri maa!
woh apnay haath jorta hai aur apna sarr apney haathon per rakhta hai like taking an ashirwad
Kash: baksh dia Bacha!!
they both alugh
Sujal: God!! its so good to see u...main ney tumhain bhut miss kia tha ashu...wahan sab kuch tha ekin mera sab sey pyara ost nahi tah
Kash smiles:janti hun tum kia kehna chahtey ho...lagta tha keh jaissey zindagi adhoori si hai...kuch kammi hai
Sujal: haan...lekin ab woh kammi nahi rahi
Kash: haan...ab to tumhara itna damagh khaon gi key bhaag jao gay wapis
Sujal: jhalli!!
Kash: haan janti hun barrey parhay likay hogaye hain janab
Sujal: arey tu yeh bata teri parhayi...
Kash:kia parhayi yaar?? yeh koi waqt hai parhayi ki baatain karney ka....bass chal rahi hain...tum sunao...sehat to theek lag rahi hai...matlab udhar apna poora khuyal rakha aur kahan waqt per lia...zidaa tension to nnahi li na...warna damagh kaam nahi karta tumhara
Sujal: yaar meri sehat sey related mumma ney itnay sawal nahi kiye jitnay tum ney kar liye hain
Kash: waqt hi kahan dia tum ney unhain...seedhey to idhar agaye...sahi tarah sey milley bhi nahi unhain
Sujal: haan yeh to hai...chalo sab sey dobara mill letey hain
They both go downstairs...Sujal sab sey mill raha hota hai...Kashish Varrun ko dekh ker ankhon sey ishara karti hai Krippa ki taraf aur questioning stare deti hai...Varrun ussey ankhon ankhon main batata hai keh Angad kamray main gaya hai....Kashish hansti hai aur Krippa, jo key aik konnay main bethi hoti hai, uss key saath khali seat per beth ajti hayi
Kash: to...kaisa laga?
Krippa (innocently): kaun?
Kash: Mr.Amitabh Bachan KBC2 main...arey pagal main Angad ki baat kar rahi hun....kaisa laga?
Krippa: kaisa lagna hai?sahi hai
Kash: ahahahaa...ziada nautanki na kar merey saath...janti hun key ussey dekh ker terey dil main laddoo phoot rahey hain....acting karti hai
Krippa:kia Ashu tu bhi na...aissa kuch nahi hai
Kash: aissa hai main janti hun...shit yaar main ney to sara scene hi miss kar dia...woh aya ...tera reaction...oh no
Krippa: aissa kuch nahi hai haan...bass sab sey milla aur kamray main fresh honey key liye chala gaya
Kash: tujh sey nahi milla??
Krippa shakes her head in an answer for a no
Kash: how mean is that! chal tu fikar matt kar...khanay key table per mulaqat hum karawa den gay...kyun Varrun??
varrun uss waqt takk wahan achuka hota hai
Varrun: haan jiji bilkul..definintely...no problem Krippa jiji...just chill
Krippa unahin dekhti hai aur smile kar key sarr hilati hai
Krippa: u guys are impossible...ashu main kitchen main ja rahi hun...Badi-Ma ney kaha hai keh kahan laganay main maddad karo
Ashu: bahi aj to hum V.I.P hain...main koi kam nahi kar arhi..tu ja na kar le
Krippa kitchen main challi ajti ahi...tab takk Sujal sab sey mill chuka htoa hai aur sab hall main beth hukay hotey hain..Varrun aur Kashish aik konnay main bethey plans bana rahey hotey hain Krippa aur Angad ko millanay ka jab Shruti Kashish ko hall main bulati hai
Shruti: ASHUU!! zara idhar ana
Ashu: ayi...jee kia baat hai??
Shruti: tujhey yaad hai tu keh rahi thi keh Sujal ayega to sab ki taraf sey uss ki khabar tu leygi keh uss ney itna kamm contact kyun kia??
Sujal usey dekh raha hota hai very cutely
Ashu: bilkul yaad hai jiji....in ki khabar to main achi tarah loon gi...kyun Choti-Ma!!
veena: bilkul...poori khabar lena iss ki..wahan ja ker to yeh humain bhool hi gaya...aur saath hi Angad ki khabar bhi lena tu
Kashish jaldi main keh deti hai: je uss i kahbar main thori na loon gi...woh to Kri...eoh aik damm ruk jati hai SUjal ko dekhti hai..woh hans raha hota hai meaning he understands..he winks at her friendly
Veena: kya kaha tu ne??
Kash: nahi kuch nahi...un ko to aissa sabaq sikhaon gi keh zindagi bhar yaad rakhain gay...with a shararti look on her face
Just then Gurri the servant comes ther
Gurri: jee Krippa Madam ney kaha hai keh khana lag gaya hai
Parvati: theek hai tum jao...hum atey hain
Gurri: main jaon?? kahan??
Veena: hey bhagwan..gurri...tum kitchen main jao
Gurri: kitchen main kia karoon?/
Varrun comes to the rescue: Gurri...tu aissa kar key kitchen main ja aur apnay moun per tape laga kker apna moun band kar ley...theek hai ja!
Gurri goes from teher and evryone laughs....
Parvati: chalo...ab khana kha lauin..chalo ashu...ayie bebe....
Everyone goes into the drawing room...wahan do round tables thori doori parr parray hotay hain...aik table per bachey beth jattey hain (shruti, sameer, bhumi, roshan, mehak, varrun, ashu and sujal--these both are sitting side by side) aur barrey aik table per beth jattey hain
Krippa comes tere and is about to sit down when Kashish winks at Varrun and Sujal aur Krippa sey kehti hai
Kash:(naughtily) arey Krippa...yaar hum sab to beth gaye hain...aur Angad ko kisi ney bulaya hi nahi...tu aissa kar ja ker ussey bula la
Krippa: main...?
Varrun: jee jiji ap...kyun koi problem hai??
Krippa: nahi problem to koi nahi ahi par main....?
Sujal also enters teh joke
Sujal: haan Krippa jao na...ussey to pata hi nahi keh khana lag gaya hai...jao bulla lao
Shruti: arey yaar..dekh kia rrahi ho...usey kaho keh khana tanda ho raha hai jaldi ajaye...jao na
Krippa: jee jiji
actually sarrey bachey mill ker bechari Krippa ur Angad ko aissey hi tang kartey hain....becharay!!
Kash: ab dekhna kia scene hoga!
Varrun: kash hum ja ker dekh saktey
Sujal: burri baat hai bachay (in a fatherly manner in a funny tome) un donon ko kabhi to privacy dey diya karo
Kash: ab to Krippa phansi!! kab sey iss time ka intezar kar rahi thi...she claps her hand in amusement
Sameer: tum log nahi sudhro gay..akhir uss ko kabhi to chor dia karo
Ashu: lay...agar chor dia to kai maza rahay ga jeeju!
they all laugh aur khana khana shurroo kartay hain
Krippa thori si nervous thori confuse Angad key kamray key darwaay per knock karti hai
Voice: come in!!
Krippa darwaza kholti hai aur aik handsome sa larka murr ker dekhta hai...he is damn dashy, tall and good-looking
Angad thori dair Krippa ko dekh ker chup kar jata hai..phir thora sa smile kar ke kehta hai
Angad: Krippa tum...kaisi ho?? koi kaam tha?
Krippa usse dekhti reh jati hai aur kcub keh nahi pati
Angad: krippa??
Krippa: huh...haan...woh main theek hun....woh khana lag gaya hai akey kha lena
Angad: tum chalo main ata hun
Krippa:jee
Krippa blush ker ke wahan sey bahgti hui jati ahi Drawing room ki taraf
jaissey hi woh enter hoti hai Ashu ussey deh leti hai
Kash: ayie ayie hazoor....to kia kaha janabe-ali ney?/
Krippa: woh araha hai
Kash: bass yehi kaha...main araha hun?
Krippa seat per bethti hai aur plate apnay samney rakhti hai trying to nbe normal: haan
Kash: haye sayapa!! itni mehnat key baad sirf yehi..chalo its a beginning...(whispering in Krippa's ears now) waisey dikhta kaisa hai?/
Krippa: theek hai
Kash: haan..theek hai...janti hun ussey dekh ker tu beyhosh ho gayi hogi aur kehti hai theek hai!!
Krippa: nahi aissa nahi ahi...
just then Angad enters the room aur kash usey dekh ker krppa key kaan main whisper karti hai: not bad at all! kafi good-looking hai!!
Angad: hi kashish
Kash: hi,...kaisey ho?? how was ur journey??
Angad:fantastic...bhut bhuk lagi hai...arey woh yahan juice nahi...?
Mehak: haan main lati hun
Ashu: (glaring at her) nahi tu beth...Krippa...tum jao aur Angad key liye juice ley ao
Krippa uth ker Angad key liye juice lati ahi....aur table per rakh deti hai
Kashish nudges Sujal
SUual: arey Krippa...ab layi ho to uss key glass main daal bhi do na...(trying t control his laughter)
Krippa sighs aur Angad key glass main juice dalti hai aur apni seat per akar beth jati hai...ab sab apni baaton main lag jattey hain so lets hear key kashish aur Sujal kia baatain kar rahey hain:
ab yeh jannanay key liye keh un donnon main kia interestong gup-shup ho rahi thi aglay part ka wiat karain...plz keep reading and DO GIVE UR COMMENTS PLZZ!! thanks love kiran
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
nice part kiran!
i love your stories
when are you gonna continue thoda sa pyar hua hai
i loike that story too!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx pink....and sana! and yeah sangi fikar not main hoon na, inkar ko ikraar mein badalne ke liye 😉

so i'll continue.....(do naam ek jaan)

Kashish: mama.......mein yeh......shaad nahi kar sakti
everyone is shocked!!!! (making the pace faster) the garewals leave without saying anything with their dissapointed faces, veena was almost crying, well so was tulsi and charu! After the garewals left.............

Tulsi: yeh tumne kyun kiya kashish?
charu: di, aap to sujal bhaiya ko itna chahti bhi hain phir bhi! kyun di!
tulsi: itne saalon baad jab yeh khushi tumhari zindagi mein ane wali thi to kyun mun phir liya usse! aisi kya wajah thi??

all these questions made kashish confused!
kashish: (shouted) thi wajah........(calms down a bit) wajah thi! aaj woh yahan aye mera haath mange, magar kal ko jab unhe mere past keh bare mein pata chalta, to kya woh log mujhe apne ghar ki bahu mante, kya woh mujhe apnate...............
tulsi and charu get puzzled!
kashish: nahi mama, woh mujhe kabhie na apnate! mein unki zindagi peh bhi buj ban jati jaise mein aapki zindagi mein hon............
tulsi: (gets angry and shouts at kashish) khabar dar jo khud ko kosa to. tum nahi mein thi tumhari zindagi ki takleefon ki wajah, balke aaj bhi hon............agar mein ne tumha yeh sab sach na bataya hota to shayad aaj yeh sab.............(she starts to sob). while kashish comes up and consoles her
kashish: mama........plz aap mat royiye...........warna aapke yeh ansoo mujhe kamzor kar deinge! mein ne jo faisla kiya woh bilkul sahi kya ........bahut soch samaj keh kiya.................aur phir aap hain na mere saath..............

charu: aur sujal bhaiya?? (with tears in her eyes)
kashish: charu tum bhi na, do mulaqaton ko pyaar nahi kehte. i 'm sure jab sujal ko mere bare mein pata chalta to woh bhi yehi karta jo mein ne aaj kiya hai............
charu: magar di (trying to explain kashish)
kashish: (wiping her tears and tulsi's too) agar magar kuch nahi, discussion bandh.............chalo ab dinner karte hain!

alls well that ends well, Sinha house mein to sab ki ankhon se nammi mit gayi thi, chahe kashish ka dil kyun na ro raha ho, usne apni mama aur charu ko sambhal liya tha.......................magar kya yehi Garewals bhi bardasht kar payeinge!!!!!!!!! kya sujal is faisle se raza mandh ho payega!

well lets see:
GAREWAL HOUSE:
veena and chetan enter the house
rishi: big b mom is here. hey mom kya huwa, batao na, papa, humari hone wali bhabie kaisi thi (winks at sujal, who was standing with crossed arms and smiling)
veena : (comes close to sujal and touches his cheeks lightly) usne inkaar kar diya (and ran into her room will weeping, chetan followed her too)
rishi: (shocked) inkaar kar diya! (he too went after veena for further inquiry )

sujal's arm dropped and slowly the smile also fadded away!
he couldnt belive what veena had just said.
sujal: yeh kasie ho sakta hai,...............kashish ne...........inkaar!!!(he had a tear in his eye, that was almost about to drop!)
song time:
tanhaiiiiiiiii tanhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
palkon peh kitne ansoo hai layiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....
........(he goes to his room and hits the study table and kicks the chair)
..(song continues....) kyun aisi umeed ki meinne jo aise na kaam hui, door banayi thi manzil to raste mein hi shaam hui,
ab kahan jaon mein,
kis ko samjaon mein,
kya mein ne chaha tha aur kyun kismat mein ayiiiiiii,
tanhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiii, tanhaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
jaise andhero ki ho gherayiiiiiiii! (courtsey dil chahta hai!)

Subah ka uraaj nikal ata hai, magar sujal ki zindagi mein abhi bhi raat hoti hai! he gets up and without talking to anyone and without having breakfast, sits in his car and drives off.............while veena tries to call him.........but he doesnt respond

veena: hey bhagwaan, mere sujal ki rakhsa karna!
all were disturbed by the last evening event, rishi, veena and chetan too, magar koi zahir nahi karta!

COLLEGE

its monday morning, charu and kashish arrive at the college. kashish ki tang mein abhi bhi thodi si pain thi,........but she didnt want to miss the class!. is sse pehle keh kashish college ke andar step kar pati, keh achanak uske samne ek gari ake rukti hai! charu and kashish both step back.

ofcousre gari hoti hai apne sujal ki, Wah wah aaj to bahut hi dashing lag raha hai sujal. Well he gets out of the car, aur ake kashish ka haath pakar leta hai and pulls her while he walks back to his car.

kashish: (trying to churaofying her hand) sujal, mera haath choru........mein ne kaha mera haath churo!
likin uski koshsish na kamiyaab rehti hai and sujal forces her to sit inside his car and locks the door! he also sits inside and drives off.

while charu stands there watching all this happen!!!!

IN THE CAR
kashish: sujal gari roko..
sujal doesnt answer
kashish: mein ne kaha gari roko sujal, muje college jana hai
still silence
kashish: is sab ka kya matlab hai, tum kya sabit karna chahte ho.
sujal was still holding kashish's hand with one hand and drivng with the other!
sujal gaari ki breaks lagata hai!
kashish looks around! woh dono ek sunsaan si sarak par akele hote hain, koi gari nahi koi banda nahi (wah kya spot dhunda sujal!!!)

kashish: (ghabrate huwe) yeh tum muje kahan laye ho sujal? muje ghar jana hai, plz.....choro mujhe.

finally he turns towards kashish and apne sujal style mein sirf itna bola
sujal: tum ne ......inkaar kyun kiya ..........kashish???
kashish: inkaar.......mein samjhi nahi
sujal: itni bhi na samajh nahi ho.....achi tarah se janti ho mein kis bare mein baat kar raha hon. muje tumhara jawab chahiye
kashish: muje is bare mein koi baat nahi karni ( and finally releases her hand from his grip and opens the lock and gets down.

sujal too gets down: jawab dena hoga! tumhare inkaar ki wajah batani hogi......(kashish keeps walking and sujal follows her ,likin kitni door jati woh............sujal holds onto her arm once again and pulls her towards him
sujal: ek bar meri taraf dekh keh kaho keh tumne kabhie mujhse pyaar nahi kiya............ek baar meri taraf dekh ek kaho keh tum ne mera nahi bana chaha............ek bar meri taraf dekh ke kaho keh tumhe meri ankhon mein khud keh liye pyaar nazar nahi ata..............kaho kashish........KAHO!!!

kashish (thoda daar jati hai and gets tears in her eyes) mere inkaar ki wajah tum kabhie nahi samjh pao ge
sujal: yeh faisla karne wali tum kon hoti ho!
kashish: sujal plz, muje pareshaan mat karo. mein ne kaha na keh mein yeh shaadi nahi kar sakti matlab nahi kar sakti!
sujal: aur mein ne kaha na keh tum sirf meri ho, matlab meri ho!
kashish: (ab sujal ke pyaar aur zid keh age jhukna shuru ho gayi thi)
tum mere bare mein kuch nahi jante...............
sujal: janta hon
kashish looks at him surprised
sujal: sab kuch janta hon.....................aur kashish, agar tumhare inkaar ki wajah tumhara woh sach.............tumhara guzra huwa kal................tumhara past hai to tumhe apna yeh faisla badalna hoga.........................mere pyaar keh age jhukna hoga..................mera naam apne naam keh saath jorna hoga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kashish, abhi bhi sujal ki bahon mein khari thi, sujal ki baaton ko sun rahi thi aur uski pyaar ki gherayi mein koh gayi thi.................likin apne faisle keh bare mein abhi tak kuch nahi boli thi........................

kya hoga uska faisla,,,,,,,,,,,kya abhi bhi woh sujal keh pyaar ko nahi samajh payegi,,,,,,,,ya phir sujal keh pyaar ko apna le gi!!!!!!!!!! well..................next part mein zaroor bataongi!

thanx everyyyyyyyyyyone for appreciating the story!!!! hope you enjoy it......keep commenting or criticizing!!!!!
luv...farah
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amazing kiran. 👏 👏 you story is rocking. meri to hansi hi nahi bandh ho rahhi hai 😆 😆
kashish is absoluetly lovely! 😳 and so is sujal 😳 😳 😳 .........bechare kripa aur angad. 😛 😉
gosh you're the best...........hehehehe i still cant control my laughter.....GAWD help me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

write more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz! 😳 👏 😊

luv farah

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