Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005

Members can post their fan-fiction stories here for the week of 21st August and 27th August.

If it is a continuation of their earlier stories they can provide the Link to their earlier stories topic before they post their story.

Originally posted by: golu_1677

hi!

I have a question for u what abt the stories which are continuing there are so many stories. Which were continuing and u have closed those topics. if we all post the stories here it would confuse us as all of them are continuing and not a one time story. And u have said if it is a continuingstory we provide the link here but how and if the topic is closed where will we post are sstory now.

PLS NEED some more clarification in regard to this pls help.

Golu

You post the continuation of the earlier story here with the link to that topic. Provide the URL of that topic here. That way anyone reading the story will know what happened earlier.

i am continuing the story "do naam ek jaan". here is the link to its previous parts!! https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kahiin-to-hoga/68221/do-naam-ek-jaan-a-fan-fic😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kahiin-to-hoga/68221/do-naam-ek-jaan-a-fan-fic

Thanks For ur reply now i can continue with my story.

hi! friends now i will continue my story "A LOVE STORY" here is the link.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=61610&TP N=9

Next Part

Sujal is jst looking at kashsih. But kashish does not realise it. When she makes him lie down he is still looking at kashish as if everyhting around him has stopped. Kashish doesnt know this. Once she helps him lie down she i about to leave when sujal realises that he was lost in kashish. Kashish comes out of sujal's room.

Sujal then says to himself yeh kya hogaya tha tumhe yeh galat hai. Tum sirf Diya se pyar karte ho aur kisi se bhi nain kar sakte woh tumhari zindagi thi toh kya hua ki aaj woh is duniya mein nahin hai. Tabhi andar se ek awaaz aati ki tum kashsih se pyar karte ho aur woh ek achi larki hai.

Sujal is thinking when Veen aenters. She gets his breakfast and gives him his medicines but sujal is no mood to tkae his breakfast.

Sujal: Mumma aap rakh do thodi der mein kha leta hua.

Veena: Abhi mere samne kha tere ko apni diwai bhi khani hai.

Sujal: ok mumma. (He cant refuse veena)

It is 9:30 in the morning. CG has come back from his trip he comes straight to Sujal's room to find out how is he feeling.

Chetan: Kaise ho sujal?

Sujal: theek hua.

Chetan: Par yeh kaise hua?

Sujal: bukhar tha.

Chetan: u shld take cre of urself.

Sujal: how does it matter to u.

chetan : i am worried abt u my son.

Sujal: u r only worried abt the business not us. I wan to rest now so pls excude me.

Chetan leaves the room. Sujal didnt wan to say anything to chetan but he really feels bad the way he has treated all of them especially his mom.

Veena enters the room and asks him how is he feeling and then asks whether his dad came to meet him he says yes. But doesnt want to mention the talk between the two as he knows that it will upset his mom.

Everyone come and asks him how is he feelong and then leave for work.

Sujal lies down but is restless as he has never missed his office aur woh khali nahin baith sakta.
He sees it is 11:00am he calls the office.

Sujal: good morning Mr. Shah

Mr. Shah: Good morning sir. Aap ki tabiyat ab kaise hai?

Sujal: (suprised) aap ko kaise pata?

Mr. Shah: Woh piyush sir ka phone aaya tha ki aap ko disturb na karoon 3-4 din tak. app office bhi nahin aayega.

Sujal: okay. Aap ek kaam kariya jo nayee factory hum manesar mein sharu kar rahe hai woh file ghar per lekar aajaye.

Mr. Shah: par piyush sir

sujal: maine aap se kaha raha hoon na aap leaye.

Mr. Shah: jee sir par.

Sujal: do as i say u okay.

After somewhile piyush enters.

Piyush: kaisa hai? ab tabiyat kaise hai?

Sujal: theek hua feeling much better. bas thodi weakness hai.

piyush : tu aaram kar aur koi bhi office ki tension mat lena maine office mein sab ko mana kar diys hai ki tujhe 3-4 din tak koi bhi disturb nahin karega.

Sujal thinks wen piyush comes to know that I have asked Mr. shah to get files home for me he will be mad at me.

Just then Mr. Shah enters with files