Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 3

ok im continuing keep it going
link : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=36294 for previous partz
pyush leavez to escort da doc leaving husband wife in peace
sujal : kash i m so sorry ....
kashish : kya ???? y r U sorry ?
sujal : meri wajeh se yeh sab hua hai agar mai... oh kashish i m really very very sorry
kashish : sujal .. tumhari wajah se . tum jo mujhse itna pyaar karte ho kay shaayad kisi nay kisi say kabhi itna pyaar na kiya ho . main jaanti joon kay tum apni jaan de dogay lekin mere upar ek kharoch bhi nahiin aane dogay . 😭 sujal woh kehte hai naa in frndshio no sorry no thank u phir humara pyaar to in sab cheezon say bohot badkar hain... aur waise bhi ek mamooli si moch hai
sujal : lekin yeh to ek kharoch say bhi bobhot bad kar hain 😃
both r laughing and talking aur pyush bahar kada har cheez sun leta hai 😡 , uske aankhon main aansoon aate hain as he rememberz kanan 😭
then he goz downstairz.
sujal ko phir say shaitaani soojhti hain.
he goez to wardrobe and startz selecting clothez .
kashish : tum kahiin jaa rahe ho ?
sujal : bhool gayi main piyush aur kidz kay saath... lekin tum kahon to ruk jaaon ?
kashish : nahiin nahiin sujal tumhe jaana chaaye i m ok
sujal : u sure ?
kashish : haan .... lekin ( shez slightly hurt bcuz she thinkz sujal will spend time wid her.
sujal : ok ( speaking over her ) agar tum insist karti ho to chala jaata hoom
he sayz bye and goez out without even looking at her,
he goz down and
sujal : pyush suno kashish ko moch ai hain isliye main rook jaata hoon u and kidz go ahead.. sorry
pyush : i understand buddy itz ok
they go and kashish hearz car leave and is very sad
she takez sujalz photo and sayz:
sujal tum jaante nahin main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon i luv u sujal i luv u very very much . she kissez the photo
sujal waz outside and he heard evertrhing
sujal: lo tum nujhe yahiin baat pehle kahdati .. meri phot say kyun ?
kashish : sujal tum lekin tom to
sujal : surprise surprise
tumhe kya laga main apni jaan ko yun akela chod kar chaala joaon ga ? kabhi nahiin, ab to main bas ghoomne jaa rehata aur tumhara yeh haal hai agar main is duniya say chala jaon to
kashish putz her hand on sujalz mouth and shakez her head
sujal kisses her fingerz and leanz forward and kisses her ...... 🤬 and now i dont feel like invading their privacy
now u guyz con my share iz over
and thnx nida 😃

rajeev 1 too good 👏and nida u too 👏.u guys r too good .go and join balaji and give some lessons 2 creatives.

pink

Wow... cool!!!!!!!! All the stories are wonderful... really... keep it up!

natz continuee armaan and aamna dii aso continue pyar to hona hi tha pleasee

Guys i am starting a new fan-fic.i am giving the character outline if you like it then i will continue.So here goes the outline:

Garewal Family
Chetan Garewal-who is settled in Shimla and the chairman of Garewal Group of Industries
Beena Garewal-wife of Chetan Garewal
Sujal Garewal-Elder son of Chetan & MD of Garewal Industries
Akshat Garewal-Younger son of Chetan and manages the legal matters of the company

Agarwal Family
Mihir Agarwal-who stays in Mumbai with his family
Tulsi Agarwal-wife of Mihir
Prithvi Agarwal-elder son of Mihir and manages their music company
Kashish Agarwal-daughter of Mihir and also manages the music company
Kasak Agarwal-daughter of mihir and studies in university

Khanna Family
Rohit Khanna-friend of Mihir and has a music company
Nitya Khanna-wife of Rohit
Mishti Khanna-daughter of Rohit and fiance of Prithvi
Angad Khanna-son of Rohit,a popstar and best friend of Kashish

wow soma post the 1st part ur introduction is nice hope ur 1st part will b great.

amna where r u ? plz post the next part of your story 😊

i want kiranz and rammenaz too 😃

hey cool soma...keep it buddy, 😉

farah

ok......me continuing too!! (do naam ek jaan)

sujal was really happy at knowing keh uska pyaar ab rishte mein badal jayega, magar he was worried keh kya uski family kashish keh past ko apna payegi?????????

sujal: mama, woh sab to theek hai, magar mein chahta hon keh kashish se pehle mein khud baat kar lon!
rishi: big b, agar hum ne yeh baat aap peh chordi to shayad 10 20 saal tak aap baat kar hi leinge. (he started giggle)
veena: dekh, tum ne larki pasand karli, humein koi aitraaz nahi, ab baqi ki baatein hum kareinge, aur phir mere bete ko koi inkaar kar hi nahi sakta!!!!..........(hmmmmm.........over confidence!!!!)


.........KASHISH"S HOUSE

charu and kashish enter the house, tulsi is in her room! kashish is somewhat nervous and scared, whether she should go and talk to tulsi or not.
charu: di, mama kamre mein hain, aap unse milo!
kashish: haan......mein...........magar, woh...(she is still confused)
charu: di, yeh jo rishte hain na yeh itni asaani se nahi tute, aap hi mujhe kaha karti thi na jab mein mama se naraz ho jati thi. to phir yehi baat mein aaj aapko keh rahi hon. aap jao aur mama se baat karo
kashish: (has tears in her eyes) charu tum kuch nahi janti.........
charu: janti hon di, likin sab kuch janne ke baad bhi jab mere aur aapke rishte mein koi fark nahi hai to mama keh liye aapke pyaar mein kaise ho sakta hai!
kashish is quite shocked at knowing this.
kashish: charu yeh tum kya keh rahi hon
charu: haan di, mama ne hospital mein mujhe sab kuch bataya tha!

while both the sisters were talking tulsi comes down the stairs to where kashish and charu were.

tulsi: ab kaisi tabiyat hai?
kashish: (gets more tears in her eyes) mama, i am sorry..........meri wajah se aapko sari zindagi ek bujh uthaye jeena para, mere karan aapki zindagi jahanum se bhi batar ho gayi..........mera aapki ankhon ke samne rehna shayad kisi saza sa kaam nahi tha..............(she starts to weep) nafrat hoti hai muje khudse.......kyun mein bach gayi.....mera mar jaana hi behtar hota!!!!

tulsi: (who is standing firm comes close to kashish and picks her up from the floor holding her arms) khabar daar jo dobara aisi baat ki to, mera maara mun dekhegi!

kashish: mama!!!!
tulsi: (also crying awwwww...like daghter like mother. lol) tu sirf meri beti hai, galti meri thi jo tujhe mein samajh nahi payi. tu kya huwa agar tumne meri qook se janam nahi liya to..........teri ma to sirf mein hi hon na! (abe kya palta mara hai!!! tulsi maiya you are great 😆 )
kashish: (now with khushi keh tears) mama, mein........aap hi meri mama ho, aur koi nahi! (they both hug each other warmly and tulsi consoles her)

meanwhile charu who was standing a side while wiping her tears showed a thumbs up sign to tulsi and tulsi gracefully acknowledged it......happy family!!!)

par aap sab janna chahte honge keh tulsi ne yeh patla kyun mara, i mean when did she changed her opinion......so this was not long ago, infact yesterday night, jab charu tulsi keh peeche ayi thi hospital se tab ki baat hai.......................FLASHBACK)

charu enters her house and sees tulsi sitting on the sofa and crying.
charu: aap ro kyun rahi ho mama? di jeeye ya mare aapko kya fark parta hai, unka aur humara rishta hi kya hai.
tulsi (snubbing her) charu! woh teri bari behen hai, khabar dar jo is tareeke se uske liye baat ki to
charu: kya woh sirf meri bari behen hain, aapki kuch nahi? (with twinkling eyes)
tulsi: ......haan uska rishta tumse hai......mujhse uska koi nata nahi
charu: agar unka ap se koi naata nahi to yeh ansoo kis ke liye baha rahi hain?
tulsi: (looks at charu ) mein.....apne pati ke liye...jin se kiya huwa wadah mein nibaaah nahi payi
charu: kis pati ke liye mama? woh jis ne aapko dhoka diya? aap se pehle kisi aur aurat keh saath naja........
tulsi slaps charu tightly
charu: kyun...takleef hui mama. us aadmi keh liye jis ne aapko aapki zindagi ka sab se bara dhuk diya........us aadmi ko to apne maaf kar diya..........aur unki kiye ki saza di ko deti chali gayi! yeh kaisa insaaf tha mama aapka??
tulsi: (......thinking) ....woh mujhse bahut pyaar karte the........
charu: aur di! kya di aapse kaam pyaar karti hain?
tulsi looked at charu with eyes wide open.
charu: kyun aapki nazron mein di keh pyaar ki koi ihmiyat nahi! sirf kyun ke unka aapse khoon ka rishta nahi!...........mama apne dil peh haath rakh keh batayein keh kya di aapko mujhse zaida pyaar nahi karti?
tulsi soch mein par jati hai, uska dil kuch aur keh raha hota hai aur dimaag kuch aur!
charu: bolo mama, bolo/. di ka kasoor kya hai? bolo
tulsi: (cry outs loud) to kya mein usse kaam pyaar karti hon!!!! maaana keh usse dekhte hi mujhe beeti baatein yaad ajati hai magar mera dil janta hai keh mein usse kitna pyaar karti hon..........
charu: to phir di se kehti kyun nahi. kyun khud bhi ghut ghut keh jee rahi ho aur di jo bhi jeete jee mar rahi ho................
charu hugs tulsi and tells her to make a decision. either follow her heart aur follow her dimaag!!!...............rest you all know!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(FLASH BACK ENDS)

NEXT DAY............GAREWAL HOUSE (sunday yani choti ka din)

veena: are jaldhi keejiye na, der ho rahi hai. Mrs sinha intezaar kar rah hongi!

rishi: mama, i ready!
sujal: are tum kahan ja rahe ho?
rishi: apni bhabie jee se milne big B, aur kahan!
sujal: nahi mama, plz, rishi nahi jayega! yeh wahan sara kaam bighar dega, aur waise bhi tumhara college hai!
rishi: big b aaj sunday hai!! aur aap dar kyun rahe ho trust me na!
sujal: mama!
veena: haan rishi tum nahi jaoge, aaj sirf mein aur tumhare papa jayenge, tum yehin rahe kar apne bhaiya ko sambhalna..........
rishi: mom...not fair..........chalo koi baat nahi, face to face nahi to kya huwa phone peh baat karlunga!

So finally the garwal duo gets ready and goes to the sinha house, jahan tulsi unka intezaar kar rahi thi.....

kashsih: mama ap itni tayariyan kyun kar rahi ho? kon ane wala hai?
tusli: kuch khaas log hain, aur tum bhi zara ache se tayar ho jao!
charu was also busy cleaning the house and preparing! keh achanak door bell beeji!
ding dong.....
tulsi: shayad woh log agaye! charu ja keh darwaza khol!
charu opens the door and says namaste to veena and chetan! and welcomes them both indide.
tulsi greets them and they start to have a friendly conversation!

veena: tulsi jee, kashish nazar nahi arahi!
tulsi: jee woh yehi hain, charu ja bula keh lana di ko
charu: abhi ayi!
charu goes up in kashish's room.: di chalo mama neeche bula rahi hain.
kashish: acha ati hon.
charu: jaldhi se!!!!
kashsih comes down stairs and meets sujal's parents. veena to kashish ko dekhte hi 32 dant ki smile deti hai and chetan too is glad to see her
veena: bahut pyaari beti hai aapki! likin tulsi jee hum aaj yahan isse apni beti bana ke liye ayen hain, agar aapko koi aitraaz na hoto......mere bete sujal ke liye......apki kashish ka haath...........

everyone smiles and tulsi is over joyed..........sab khush hain siwaye...........kashish keh.
tulsi: aaj aapne mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse bari khushi di hai...................
...........charu hugged kashish, but there was no response but suddenly kashish came back to her senses and said
kashish: mama.........mein yeh shaadi .........nahi karti sakti!

tan tan tanna!!!!!!!!!!! Everyone is left shocked!

kya wajah hai keh kashish ne sujal se shaadi se inkaar kiya.......kya yeh inkaar ikrara mein badal payega...............well.........lets hope so!
its a long part today............hope i havent bored you! tc. and enjoy
farah!