Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 5

WOW!! FARAH!! PLZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE SOON
YAAR PLZ...KASHISH KO APNA FAISLA BADALNA HOGAA
SUJAL HAS ACCEPTED HER PAST..
AUR RAHEE BAAT VEENA N CHETAN KII..WOH BHI MAAAN JAYENGE!!! 😉 Lekin...Rishi ka koi bharosa nahi haii!!! 😃
ANYWAYS..WRITE SOOOOOOON!! 👏

hey amnadi...great part once again 4 pyaar toh hona hi tah...

keep up da good work!!!...u rock!!...

and plzz some1 plzzz post da next part 'keep it going'..

thanks!!...gr8 stories guys!!

kiran and farah both of u rock.......plz give tutorials 2 ekta and her creative team..... par b careful 2 put torture proof jackets.....

farah too good 👏.maza aa gaya.i am in love with your story"s sujal.kya lage ga rajeev ye scene karte huye.uff 😳😳😳.i am just imaginig.ek shikayat hai aise twist par finish mat kiya karo plz 😆.well done 👏👏👏.kiran u too great going 👏.yaar thoda zayada likha karo plzzzzzzzz mujhse ruka nahi jayata kya karo???😉😉😉😃

pink

ok guys i want to post another story
in this story all characters r muslims
i read this story in some magazine
soon i post it

yeepeee! go ahead.......i'll be waiting genious420!!!! 😃 😊 👏

ok.........i'll contiune further (do naam ek jaan)

.....kashish yeh jaan kar hairaan hoti hai keh sujal ko sab maloom hai..........jis baat ko woh chupana chahti thi, jis baat se woh khudh ko sujal se dur kar rahi thi, uske bare mein woh pehle se hi janta tha.....

kashish: (standing very close to sujal) mujhe samajh mein nahi araha mein kya karun...........
sujal: (usko haath pakar te huwe): sirf mujh par bharosa karo aur mere pyaar par aitbaar..........mein tumhe kabhie akela nahi hone donga!!!
kashish: (looking directly into sujal's eyes and noticing his tear that were all ready to drop!) ek shart par.............
sujal: mujhe har shart manzoor hai......tumhare liye!
kashish: tum mujhe kabhie tang nahi karo ge......(slightly smilimg)
sujal: mmmmmmm....sochna parega! (he too smiles )
kashish hits him on his shoulder and sujal steps back , jaise kashish ne nahi balke Mohammad ali ne punch mara ho. hehehehe) likin kashish holds onto him and they embrace.........awwwwwww.........pehli baar!!!!!!!!! yeeeppeeeee.
kashish: i.........i....love you sujal!!!
sujal: mein hamesha se janta tha. (still hugging)
song time................taaaataaa!

kon sa mor aya zindagi keh safar mein,
baas gaya tu hi tu, ab to meri nazar mein,
dil har ek dharkan tujhko pehchaan thi hai,
meri chahat hai ab kya tu nahi janti hai
mein tujhe jaan gayiiii
hoooooooooooooooooooooooooo
tujh ko pehchan gayiiii,
phir bhi teri haan hai baqi!
thoda sa pyaar huwa hai, thoda hai baqi!!!(courtesy mainne dil tujhko diya)

sujal and kashish were still in a tight hug position keh achanak koi horn marta hai........

a man from the car: are oh laila majnu,,,,,,romance karna hai to side peh ho ke karo, yeh sarak keh beech mein kyun khare ho!
sujal and kashish get embarrassed!
sujal: sorry sir! (he asks kashish to sit in the car and he too sits in! and off they go...............kahan gaye yeh next part mein, i am in a hurry at the moment..............

to kashish aur sujal ka pyaar to ikraar mein badal gaya, ap logon ke purzoor israar peh , magar kya yeh pyaar apne anjaam tak pohanch paye ga!

well.........i'll be back!!!!
luv
farah ............(sorry pink is baar bahut chota hai, magar next time bahut lamba likhongi) 😉

ur 222 gd guyzz.u rok people.plllzzzz cont.

nids

wow too good farah kya baat hai 😆.kya story hai mazza aagaye .👏

pink

ok so we continue the stry...lets see what sujal kashish were talking about

Kashish and Sujal are sitting together and they are talking
Kash: to...tum batao London kaisa laga??
Sujal: yaar kia bataon...its fantastic...lekin wahan insan bhut akela parr jata hai jab apna parivaar saath na ho
Kash: haan yeh to hai...to koi friends banay??
Sujal: of course yaar jahan rehtey bhain wahan friends to bann hi jattey hain...(smiling)
Kash: tum jantay ho main kin friends ki baat kar rahi hun
Sujal laughs
Sujal: haan woh friends bhi bohat si banni
Kash: janti thi main..wahan ja ker kharab ho jao gay...abhi Bari-Ma ko batati hun
Sujal: arey nahi meri ma...aissa kuch nahi hai...main ney ap key orders key mutabiq koi friends nahi banayi...wiasey bhi tumharay hotay huay main ksisi ki barray main soch sakta hun??
Kash: kia matlab??
Sujal: matlab key apni sba sey pyari dost ko yahan chor gaya tha aur tumhain bhut miss kia!
Kash: hmm....arey yaar tum kitna kamm kha rahey ho aur khao na...yeh lo na samosay (she piles 3 samosas in his plate, SUjal: kashish yeh...), aur haan yeh palak paneer bhut tatsty hai try to karo na ( woh dher sara salan uss ki plate main dalti hai , Sujal: Kashish bass....) arey bass kia...abhi to utm ney kuch nahi khaya hai...aur haan yeh Choti-Ma ney tumhari pasand key chawal banaye hain...lo na(woh bhut ziada chawal Sujal ki plate main dall deti hai, sujal is startled) aur haan yeh...
Sujal uss ka haath pakar leta hai
Sujal: KASHISH!! yaar tum ney kia samajh rakha ai mujhey...yaar main itna sarra kaaisey kahon ga...insan hoon haathi nahi hon main
Kash: ley...khao gay nahi to sehat kaisey bani gi??
Sujal: mujhey sehat bananay ki zaroorat nahi hai i am perfectly alright...tum dekho...khud to kha chuki ho chirya jitna aur merey liye kitna sarra khana...main kaisey khjaon ga??
Ashu: acha tum naraz na ho(cute face banati hai)...main tumhari help kar deti hun...kha leti hun na tumharay saath
Sujal: better!
woh dnon aik plate main kahna shuroo kartey hain
Sujal: to tum mujhey batao keh tum waisi hi ho...yaa....
Kash: kia matlab?? waisi hi hoon na main...kia hua hai mujhey...aur jis tarah ap ka mind chal raha hai to main ap ko bata doon keh koi larka meri zindagi main nahi hai...happy?
Sujal: great...tumhain kaisey pata chala key main yeh sawal tum sey poochney wlaa hoon?
Kash: dil ko dil sey rah hoti hai darling!!
she laughs and gives a very light slap on his face
sujal bhut hi cute face banata hai like a baby's
Sujal: marra kyun?
Kash: is liye mara hai takkey tum ainda aissey sawal na karo...tum jantey ho keh tumharay ilawa meri zindagi main aur koi larka nahi hai...u r my bestest friend!!
Sujal: hmm....to kashish agar main shadi kar loon to tumhara kia hoga+?
Kash: kia kaha tum ney??shadi...main tumhari shadi hi nahi honney doon gi...
Sujal: kyun??
Kash: kyunki main...main...main nahi samajhti keh tumhari shadi honi chahiye (she is confused)
Sujal: kyunki tum yeh baat bardasht nahi kar sakti keh tumharay ilawa meri zindagi main koi aur larki ho
Kash blushes
Kash: jee nahi aissi koi baat nahi hai...mujhey kia farq parta hai...jao shadi kar lo
Sujal (smiles): madam...shadi key liye larki ki zaroorat hoti hai...smajhi?/
Kash: aur woh kaun pagal hogi jo apna sar tumahrauy saath phoray gi??
Sujal: tum
Kash: kia??
Sujal: haan matlab keh tum as a friend apna sarr to phr chuki ho na merey saath
Kash: hmm....chalo aik kaam kartey hain...main tumhaeay liye larki dhoondhoon gi..ok?/
Sujal: tum??? phir to rehney hi do...ho gayi shaid...acha aik kaam karain gay...hum donon ki agar 30 saal takk shadi na hui na...too...
Kash: to hum ik doosray sey shadi kar lain ag
Sujal: done??
Kash: done!!
they bth laugh...phir sujal uss key cheeksko pakarta hai and says
Sujal: u r very cute!!
KAsh: u are also veerrry cute...acha ab chup ker keh khana khao...
They start eating

Sorry but taht's it...i know it is short per sorry...i didn't have time...do give ur comments luv kiran!