Fan-Fictions 21st-27th August 2005 - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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HEY FARAH!! PLZZZ WRITE MORE!!
IM WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok this is next part for my fan-fic "kahani mohabbat ki " for the previous part the link is below..........

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_post.asp?TID=62183

kashish sujal k cabin mey jaati hai...]
kashish:sir mujey ghar jana hai......

sujal;any problem miss kashish app preshaan dekh ri ho.......

kash:ji wo personal hai plz sir

sujal:ok ok ok

angad:kash howa kyahai atleast mujey to batao......

kash:phir kabhi mujey abhi jana hai

angad haan to mey chalta hoon tumharey sath wesey bhi kripa say milna hai mujey

kash:ok

kash n angad leave
in the car............................
ANGAD:KASH KYA BAAT HAI TUM ITNI TENSED KYUM HO.

kash:kuch nahi hai angad bas piyush or neha ki shaadi hai 2 din baad

angad:kya keh rahi ho tum

kash:haan

angad:yeh kesey hosakta hai

kash:wo angad ...... neha pregnant hai...

angad:kya..........................

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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool amna, continue. chi chi chi piyush kaisa nikla 😆 😆 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey farah? whrs ur story yaar!?!??!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ok, i'll continue with my part...........(do naam ek jaan)

sujal aur kashish dil hi dil mein apne pyaar ka izhaar kar dete hain.
charu, kashish and sujal are now outside the hospital

sujal: aiye, mein ap dono ko ghar tak chor deta hon
kashish: its ok, mein taxi peh chali jaongi
sujal: as you wish, ao charu ....lets go (sujal moves towards his car)
kashish: likin charu tumhare saath kyun.........
sujal: tumne hi to kaha keh tum taxi se chali jaogi, to charu ko mein chor deta hon
kashish: (looks at sujal with "dont be smart with me" look) mera matlab tha mein aur charu dono taxi peh jayenge!
charu: ok guys....cut it, di sujal ji......
kashish gives charu a strange look!!
charu:mera matlab sujal bhaiya itna keh rahe hain to is mein harj hi kya hai, chalo na di....lets go!

kashish looks at sujal and sujal nods his head , saying lets go!
sujal drives them both home but doesnt get off as he is getting late.
charu: bhaiya andar ayiye
sujal: nahi, phir kabhie abhi late ho raha hon
kashish: (thoda sharmate huwe) thanx
sujal: kis liye? 😳
kashish: for everything! (they look at each other aur jaise waqt tham sa gaya ho, both give each other a hidden smile)
.............sujal leaves

GAREWAL HOUSE:
as sujal enters
veena: fursat mil gayi ghar ane ki. kahan reh gaye the?
sujal: mama, (hugging her) mein ne bataya tha na apne friend keh bare mein, hospital mein tha woh
veena: ab kaisa hai tumhara doost
sujal: bilkul theek....abhi usse ghar chor kar araha hon.
veena: waise yeh kon sa naya doost ban gaya hai? (veena smells something fishy is going around)
sujal: mmm...woh ....hai ek mama,aap nahi janti
(she turns around and holds sujal's ear lightly)
veena:tumhari ma hon, raag raag se wakif hon, chalo seedi tarah bataon...
sujal: kya.....mama?
veena: meri hone wali......bahu ka naam!!! (and pats sujal lightly on his cheek)
sujal gets a little embarressed!
sujal: mama woh.......nahi aisi koi........
veena: nahi, matlal koi nahi hai
sujal: nahi hai.....(he puts his hand through his hair, sharmate huwe) magar abhi tak mein ne usse kuch kaha nahi!

peeche se awaaz ayi
rishi: to ab keh dena Big B! aur agar nahi kaha ja raha to hum ja kar keh dete hain! kyun mama!
sujal: rishi, tum! tum ne mama ko bataya, mein tumhe....... (comes towards rishi but veena comes in btw)
veena: to, yeh nahi bata to tumhara khayal hai mujhe pata nahi chalta! chal ab jaldhi se uska naam bata de, kal mein aur tumhare papa tumhare rishte ki baat karne jayenge!!!
rishi: woooohoo. congrates big b!!!
sujal: (hugs her mama tightly) you're the best mama!!

upar se to sujal yeh jaan kar khush hota hai, likin uske maan mein eh baat usse pareshan kar rahi hoti hai......yehi keh jab uske ghar walon ko kashish keh bare mein pata chale ga.........to sujal ki mama aur dad kya socheinge!!!!!!!

well, guess this is enough for today.......warna aap bhi meri tarah paak jayenge 😛 . coming up..........kya sujal ka pyaar rishte mein bandh payega..............ya kashish ki zindagi ka karwa sach uski khushiyon ko ek bar phir usse door le jayega!!!!

tc. cheers
farah
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Posted: 19 years ago
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YOOHOO!!
MORE!!
MORE!!
MORE!!
MORE!!
I hope Sujal gets his love!!!!!!!! HIS KASHISH!! 😛
GOOD FARAH!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
ok i m continuing keep it going
link : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=36294 for previous partz
kashish : ahh sujal oof bohot dard hora ha hay
sujal: oh my god kash r u ok ? oh no yeh kya hoga ya tumhe dard nahiin hora oh no main kya karo..
kashish : doctor .....
sujal : nahiin kashish main sujal hoon oh no kahiin tumhare dimaag par no way..
kashish : DOCTOR KO PHONE KARO DUFFER
sujal : oh oh yeah haan abhi karta hoon
just then pyush cumz
piyush : kashish sujal kya howa ?
sujal : pyush doctor ko phone karo plz
pyush : haan abhi karta hoon
he goez
sujal pickz up kashish and she putz her handz arnd his head
-- background music--
thoda saa pyaar huwa
thoda hai baaqi
hum to chaah hai ge tujhe
ooooooo
hum to chaa hai gay tujhe jab talak jaan hai baqi
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they r staring at each other phir sujal gainz sense and takez kash to bedroom.
the doc cumz and checkz kashish
sujal : dr is she all right ? watz rong ?
doctor : mr garewal im sorry to say kay..
sujal : nahiin doctor aise nahiin ho sakta
doc : im sorry to say kay abki wife ko
sujal : doctor nahiin
doc : aapki wife ko maooli sa moch aya hai she ll be fine in 2 to 3 dayz ( i m talking wid experience )
doc prescribez medicine and leaves
mujhe thoda aur likhna hai after dat u guyz can continue plz ok 😃



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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
vivacious_virgo it is really good plz write more 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Awesome updates all of u. 👏 👏 plz continue..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
aamnadi plzzz continue pyaar toh hona hi tha!!
thanks!

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