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Posted: 19 years ago
#51

wow kiran.mujhe laga i was reading the story of rajeev and aamna 😆.well done and keep up the good work 👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
keep up the good work you guys
i love all your stories
and please post the next part soon!


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Posted: 19 years ago
#53

MERE DHARKANO KO QARAR DO



MIHIR AS MUZAFFAR
TULSI AS HALEMA

PRERNA AS TANIA & amp; nbsp; & amp; nbsp; ANURAG AS SHERAZ

ELDER DAUGHTER AND SON IN LAW OF MUZAFFAR AND HALIMA

RAJEEV AS TAHMOOR

ELDER SON OF MUZAFFAR AND HALIMA



he is a paki actor dont know his name

IMAGINE THIS GUY AS SALMAN

HE IS YOUNGER SON OF MUZAFFAR AND HALIMA

KRIPPA AS SEHER

YOUNGER DAUGHTER OF MUZAFFAR AND HALIMA

THATZ ALL ILL POST ANOTHER FAMILY SOON

Edited by genious420 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
yaaaaaaaaaaaaar golu plz rite the next part of ur story .i m just lllllllllooooooooooovvvvvvvvvviiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnngggggggg ur story.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
yaaaaaaaaaaaaar golu plz rite the next part of ur story .i m just lllllllllooooooooooovvvvvvvvvviiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnngggggggg ur story.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
please rajeev1 continue your story
i just love it 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
hiiiiiiii friendzzz i am back with my story 😊 ............. i am posting the next part i hope u all like it........ 😊
Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai
part4:-
recap:sujal or kashish ke car ka accident hoo
jata hai...kashish kee hation main bangels toot
kee lag gate hain mager sujal koo nahe pata kee kashish ka haath zakmee hai....sujal uss kee car repair
hone kee liya workshop beag de ta hai or
kashish or woo jane hee lagtain hain kee kashis
behosh ho jate hai or woo gerne hee wale thee
kee sujal uss koo paker leta hai...or deakhta
hai kee kashish kai hattion see blood nekal
raha hai.........ag aage ........

sujal kashish koo apne godd main utta kee
apne car main betata hai .......
kashish abee tak behosh hote hai...
sujal kashish ke waja see kafe pareshan
hota hai .......
woo kashish koo hospital kee taraf lekar jaa
raha hota hai......uske ceel per veena kaa
phone aata hai.......
sujal to himself:ooh noo mamma koo kia kahon gaa
main........ 😕
sujal pick up the phone
sujal:hello....
veena:kahain hai too abe tak? kitne deer hogye
hai ..raat kee 12:00 baj gye hain sujal....
or tere flight too 11:00 baje pohunchane tee naa..
sujal:woo..mamma...main ajj nahe aa raha....
veena:nahe aa raha matlab...kyun nahe aa rahe hoo..
sujal:mammaaa .aap koo too pata hai na.kee..
veena:kia kee....deakh sujal muje such such bata
tuu teakh too hai naa.....
sujal:mammaa ...main bilkul teekh hon..
bas kaam kee silsaly main rukna per raha hai..
warna main aa jata.....aap plzz pareshan maat hoin
veena:kase pareshan naa hoin main....acha abb kab
aye gaa tuu....
sujal:with cute smile on his face....mamma ab jase
hee mera kam katem hoga main apne mamma kee pas
aa join ga.....ok mamma ab main rakhta hoin..
take care bye
veena:acha tuu bee apna khyal rakhna.....
phir woo kashish kee taref dekta hai woo abe tak
behosh hote hai.....
ahanak hee sujal kee car ek sunsan road per karab
hoo jate hai....
suja bohut pareshan hota hai...
sujal:ab isse kiy hogya hai....o God bahir too
barish bee bohut hoo rahe hai....ab kiy karoon..
woo baher jakar apne car cheak karta hai....woo
bohut kashish karta hai majer car start nahe hote...
sujal time deakhta hai too 12:30 hogye hotain hain
sujal:itne rat ko itne barish main too koi workshop
bee nahe kule hoge ....ab too koi jage talash karne
hoge jahain rat betahe ja sake.......
sujal erd geard koi jage dekta hai jahan rrat
guzare ja sake usko kuch door hee ek cottage
nazar aate hai....woo kashish koo gad main uttah ker
cottage kee taraf chal parta hai...barish bee kafe
zor kee hoo rahe tee...
sujal cottage kee inder jata hai.wahain ek bed
hota hai woo kashish koo uss per leta deta hai...
phir woo jalde see apne pocket see apna rumal nee
kal ta hai or kashish kee hath see blood saaf kar
kee uss kee haath per bandh deta hai...
cottage main sirf ek hee bead hota hai or uper
lena kee lye bee kuch nahe hota....
woo deakhta hai kee kashish koo shivering hoo
rahe hai....sujal foran hee apna coat uttar ker
kashish per de deta hai....phir wahein zamean
per bed kee sath teek laga kee soo jata hai..
subah kashish kee ankh kulte hai too woo deakhte hai
kee uss kee uper kisse ka coat hai woo utt ker beathte
hai or deakhte hai kee sujl soo raha hai
woo utt ker sujal kee pas jate hai....sujal ka
coat uss kee hath main hota hai...sujal kee ankh
kulte hai too woo deakhta hai kee kashish uss
kee taraf ghoor rahe hai...
sujal:oh aap teekh ho........ptach.....
ek zoor ka thaper sujal kee gal per perta
hai....sujal bechara haran pareshan... 😕
kashish:hoe dear u..tumare himat kase hue
muje yahan lane kee....
sujal:mager main too.....
kashish:bus mainkhob jante hoin tum jase larkoin
ko..main too sumje tee kee tum ek sharef insan
hoo majer tum to.....
sujal:dakeya mrs kashsih aap galet...
kashish:don u dear take my name mr....ainda mere
nazron kee samne aane kee koshish mat karna....
yeh kha ker kashish bahir chale jate hai....bhir aabe
tak barish hoo rahe tee
ahanak hee kashish kee cheak kee awaz aate hai
kashish:aaaaaaaahhhhhhhaaaaa......

soo friendz thats 4 today i hope u like it...
teel me friend r u like it or not.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
hiiiiiiii friendzzz i am back with my story 😊 ............. i am posting the next part i hope u all like it........ 😊
Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai
part4:-
recap:sujal or kashish ke car ka accident hoo
jata hai...kashish kee hation main bangels toot
kee lag gate hain mager sujal koo nahe pata kee kashish ka haath zakmee hai....sujal uss kee car repair
hone kee liya workshop beag de ta hai or
kashish or woo jane hee lagtain hain kee kashis
behosh ho jate hai or woo gerne hee wale thee
kee sujal uss koo paker leta hai...or deakhta
hai kee kashish kai hattion see blood nekal
raha hai.........ag aage ........

sujal kashish koo apne godd main utta kee
apne car main betata hai .......
kashish abee tak behosh hote hai...
sujal kashish ke waja see kafe pareshan
hota hai .......
woo kashish koo hospital kee taraf lekar jaa
raha hota hai......uske ceel per veena kaa
phone aata hai.......
sujal to himself:ooh noo mamma koo kia kahon gaa
main........ 😕
sujal pick up the phone
sujal:hello....
veena:kahain hai too abe tak? kitne deer hogye
hai ..raat kee 12:00 baj gye hain sujal....
or tere flight too 11:00 baje pohunchane tee naa..
sujal:woo..mamma...main ajj nahe aa raha....
veena:nahe aa raha matlab...kyun nahe aa rahe hoo..
sujal:mammaaa .aap koo too pata hai na.kee..
veena:kia kee....deakh sujal muje such such bata
tuu teakh too hai naa.....
sujal:mammaa ...main bilkul teekh hon..
bas kaam kee silsaly main rukna per raha hai..
warna main aa jata.....aap plzz pareshan maat hoin
veena:kase pareshan naa hoin main....acha abb kab
aye gaa tuu....
sujal:with cute smile on his face....mamma ab jase
hee mera kam katem hoga main apne mamma kee pas
aa join ga.....ok mamma ab main rakhta hoin..
take care bye
veena:acha tuu bee apna khyal rakhna.....
phir woo kashish kee taref dekta hai woo abe tak
behosh hote hai.....
ahanak hee sujal kee car ek sunsan road per karab
hoo jate hai....
suja bohut pareshan hota hai...
sujal:ab isse kiy hogya hai....o God bahir too
barish bee bohut hoo rahe hai....ab kiy karoon..
woo baher jakar apne car cheak karta hai....woo
bohut kashish karta hai majer car start nahe hote...
sujal time deakhta hai too 12:30 hogye hotain hain
sujal:itne rat ko itne barish main too koi workshop
bee nahe kule hoge ....ab too koi jage talash karne
hoge jahain rat betahe ja sake.......
sujal erd geard koi jage dekta hai jahan rrat
guzare ja sake usko kuch door hee ek cottage
nazar aate hai....woo kashish koo gad main uttah ker
cottage kee taraf chal parta hai...barish bee kafe
zor kee hoo rahe tee...
sujal cottage kee inder jata hai.wahain ek bed
hota hai woo kashish koo uss per leta deta hai...
phir woo jalde see apne pocket see apna rumal nee
kal ta hai or kashish kee hath see blood saaf kar
kee uss kee haath per bandh deta hai...
cottage main sirf ek hee bead hota hai or uper
lena kee lye bee kuch nahe hota....
woo deakhta hai kee kashish koo shivering hoo
rahe hai....sujal foran hee apna coat uttar ker
kashish per de deta hai....phir wahein zamean
per bed kee sath teek laga kee soo jata hai..
subah kashish kee ankh kulte hai too woo deakhte hai
kee uss kee uper kisse ka coat hai woo utt ker beathte
hai or deakhte hai kee sujl soo raha hai
woo utt ker sujal kee pas jate hai....sujal ka
coat uss kee hath main hota hai...sujal kee ankh
kulte hai too woo deakhta hai kee kashish uss
kee taraf ghoor rahe hai...
sujal:oh aap teekh ho........ptach.....
ek zoor ka thaper sujal kee gal per perta
hai....sujal bechara haran pareshan... 😕
kashish:hoe dear u..tumare himat kase hue
muje yahan lane kee....
sujal:mager main too.....
kashish:bus mainkhob jante hoin tum jase larkoin
ko..main too sumje tee kee tum ek sharef insan
hoo majer tum to.....
sujal:dakeya mrs kashsih aap galet...
kashish:don u dear take my name mr....ainda mere
nazron kee samne aane kee koshish mat karna....
yeh kha ker kashish bahir chale jate hai....bhir aabe
tak barish hoo rahe tee
ahanak hee kashish kee cheak kee awaz aate hai
kashish:aaaaaaaahhhhhhhaaaaa......

soo friendz thats 4 today i hope u like it...
teel me friend r u like it or not.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
here is the next part of my fan fic name
"izhaar ki hajat hai"
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kahiin-to-hoga/56516/izhaar-ki-hajat-hai
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part 12
after that in kashish room
jab kripa apnay room main poohanchti hai(remind kripa and kashish share the same room)kashish gehri soch main goom hoti hai.kripa usay dekhti hai
kripa:kashish...............no response
again...kashish......still no response
kripa kashish kay samnay aati hai or us kay chehray kay agay hath hilati hai
kripa:madam.......kahan khoi howi theen
kashish:comes in to her senses............now feeling relexed.................kahain nahin....tum kahan the....main jab kamray main aaye to tum nahin thi....kahan gayee thiii
kripa:haann woh na main sujal bhaiya kay room main gai the............un say batain kar rahi thi........kuch un say main any apnay secrets share kiyee kuch unhoon nay
kashish:tumharay saray secrets to mujhay maloom hain..........likin.........sujal ka aisa kaun sa secret hai jo us nay tumhain bataya or mujhay nahin
kripa:hotay hain kai secrets...abh jaisay tumharay kuch secrets meray ilawa or koi nahin janta yahan tak kay sujal bhaiya bhi nahin to issi tarhan un kay kuch secrets hain jo meray ilawa koi nahin janta ......tum bhi nahin
kashish:kripa....(acted to be so exited).....bata na....sujal kay kaun say secrets hain
kripa:chiratay howay..................main to nahin bataoon gi.......sujal bhaiya nay mujh par bharoosa kar kay mujhay yeh baat batai hai or main un kay bharosay ko torna nahin chahti...........
kashish:bhai main us ki best friend hoon or iss natay.....mujhay jananay ka poora haq banta hai.........or tum to meri dost ho
kripa:abh say sujal bhaiya bhi meray dost howay......or dosti ki hai to nibhani to paray gi na
kashish makes an angry face: koi baat nahin sujal mujhay bata day ga....tum nibhaoo apni dosti
kripa:haan or waisay bhi un kay pass or koi chara nahin hai......tumhain hi to batain gai
kashish:confused.........matlab
kripa:kuch nahin......uthtay howay.............mujhay bhook lag rahi hai main khana khanay ja rahi hoon(and she went downstairs)
kashish:(to herself) yeh kripa ka kia matlab tha
kripa went to the kitchen.or fridge main say pani ki bottle nikal rahi hoti hai .....kay aik dam koi us ka haath pakar leta hai......who is that..........ya u r right its our dashing angad
kripa:angad yeh kia kar rahay hooo.......koi aa jayee ga.......moving backward a step
angad:anay do..........moving towards a step
kripa:koi dekh lay ga
angad:dekhnay do.....aur waisay bhi abh hamari shadi honay wali hai........koi kuch nahin kahay ga
kripa:angad mujhay daar lag raha hai.....chora na.................us say apna haath churatay howay
angad moves towards her to give her a kiss on her cheek.......but as he was about to kiss.........we hear a ahem ahem
kripa:bebe.................bebe just enter into the kitchen
kripa became shy and run from there................
bebe:yeh yahan kia ho raha tha
angad:speechless nad shocked.....bebe.....main wo ....kripa..........sir per haath phertay howay........he also runs from there
bebe:bhagvan in ki jodi banayee rakhay....................

next day
saray ghar main vavella macha hota hai...........
pandit jee aaaye hotay hain
tulsi:pandit je yeh meri beti kripa ki kundli hai............or yeh rahi angad ki.........kundaliyaan dekhatay howay.......
pandit jee:jeee khaye
tulsi:pandit jee saghai kay liyee koi accha sa mohrat nikal dain
pandit jee:jee theek hai
after reading kundli he said
pandit jee:jee aj say theek 4 dinoo bad aik accha mohrat hai..................yeh aisay din hai kay agar iss din kissii kanya ka rishta paka ho to woh rishta shafal rehta hai
bebe:yeh to app nay acchi baat kahi
tulsi:likin bebe.....char din main kia tayari hogi..
ba:fiqar mat karoo...........tum or prerna ghar ka shambhal lo or in bachoon ko bahir ka.....or kripa or angad...pointing towards them....tum dono bhi apnay pasand kay kapray kharedna.............
kripa:jee ba
tulsi:liki
bebe:likin wakin kuch nahin
sujal:pandit jeee.....app nay to aj dil kush kar diya...............yeh rahi app ki guru dhakshana.......sujal give him 2000 rupees
angad who was sitting besides him whisper in his ear
angad:bhaiya..........main nay app ko kush kar diya ......likin app mujhay kab khush karoo gay
sujal gets shy and watch towards kashish who was busy in talking to kripa
kashsh:mubarak ho kripa jee........chiratay howay....likin app ki jodi kuch jami nahin
kripa:tum kehna kia chahti hoo angad accha nahin hai
kashish:main nay yeh kab kaha kay angad accha nahin hai......main to yeh keh rahi hoon kay tum us kay saath nahin jami
kripa:kashish ki bachi.....us kay kaan kehnchtay howay.....jab app kay dulhay raaja mujhay millain gai to tab main app ko bataoon gi
kashish:mera to lakhoon main aik hoga
kripa:haan.....kyoun kay tum jaisii sirphirii ko to koi lakhoon maain say aik buddhu hi pasand karay ga
kashish:oper chaloo main tumhain batati hoon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
i have to go now
but i will post the next part soon

and big b
nice idea to get all the fan fics at a time
a big roud of applause
👏

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