PBD: The Journey Through Utopia - It's 2 years!! Payal's OS Updated! - Page 25

That was a super awesome OS Payal😃
As it is PBD is one of my favourite story I have been following since a long time, waiting for an update every time with equal excitement.
You scripted this OS too well..
Especially the gift that she gave and Jalal's reaction was a treat to read..
"I love you Idiot" was such a cute line to confess...
Again the song and all those moments that re appeared same like the start of this beautiful journey..
Superb buddy, just loved it👏

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Beautiful os Akka

Amazing

N sorry for the late reply Di

what a beautiful os dear
like lashy di said it was hard to differentiate between your and jhanvi Di writing
you write so beautifully that I was thinking I was reading PBD chapter
you write exactly that things which I want to read in PBD,
like jodha wearing that sari, Goa incident, and most important thing is three magical words which jalal said to jodha,
I know in main story they don't need proper confession but I really want them to confess their feeling,
which you describe so beautifully in this os ,
you describe jodha in that sari, and jalal eagerly waiting for Jo to come and wish him so well,
love the way jalal hold jodha hand and cut the cake, you know this is something so special things for any girl,
and jodha wish and jalal reply this is something so special in PBD jalal and jodha which you write so perfectly,
and much awaited scene Goa incident which you bring perfectly like same song Jo singing in front of jalal,
jalal recognize jodha but I really want you to write further about jodha reaction,
in short perfect os for 2 anniversary of pbd which write by perfect writer,
payal dear you write in the beginning of os that this is not your 100%, if this is not your 100% I afraid what is your 100% this is just perfectly written you know,
I am shock to see in you lack of confident what happen to that girl who write so perfectly mature concept and write stories in which jodha was so different from any story like grey shade of jodha which we see in your story which I really appreciate .
I write this thing because I read your comments somewhere that you don't feel to write in forum , please pardon me if I hurt you. I really like your writing dear.
and thanks you for PM

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Love you manasi 🤗 thankyou so much dear ☺️

N mitali,PBD ghol k pi li h vodka shot me mix karke 😉😆

Thanks dear!!🤗

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

Bindu, Mansi, Pallavi.. wonderful posts👏👏

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Thank you Diksha! I wanted too small seat so that Jodha can sit closer to Jalal☺️

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

By PBDian Payal😃