PBD: The Journey Through Utopia - It's 2 years!! Payal's OS Updated! - Page 26

Originally posted by: lashy

I can't believe this... you wrote this? Payal I only ask because I've read both, your works and Jhanu's... and... and... and... your style/language everything has completely morphed to suit the style of PBD!😲

I could have waited and written a long detailed review... but I didn't... because I wanted to write a review as soon as I read it.. I wanted the reactions to be genuine... your 'EFFORTS' deserved it!

Other than Jhanu, I doubt anyone else would be able to differentiate it wasn't her piece of work... as an author, she must feel so thrilled that she has such an ardent fan in you... not only do you follow every nuance of the story... you are able to adapt your style to become hers, which is no easy feat... shows how invested you are in PBD...

The Goa incident really brought the biggest smile to my face...

Utopia, birthday celebrations, peacock blue saree, Telugu song (I would have never dared to put in a song from a language I don't know... so one more reason to pat yourself on the back)... I am amazed, Payal! (See no Catty di here... genuine emotions, na that's why!😉) it didn't seem like you just wanted to add these parts in your OS... it was a well-planned story that flowed along perfectly well!

The dialogues... BOB.. idiot.. the style they converse... the way the scintillating parts were all described to the T... you should be so proud of yourself!

If there was one thing I didn't like in your OS, it's your lack of confidence in yourself.. the message at the beginning... why must you think this wouldn't be good enough... it's an exceptional offshoot of Jhanu's masterpiece!

Love you girl.. and am sure if Jhanu could.. she'd have a short change of plan in her vacation... take a detour to Delhi and visit you to give you a hug...

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Payal, amazing OS...u won't believe, but I felt like I m reading my own thoughts...even I had imagined Jo to wear the saree while she will greet him at midnight when only two of them will be there...but that was just a thought...and here u actually penned down so beautifully..

but that's not only thing... seriously, I had only thought abt saree, but u gave the Goa incident such a good reminder...totally unexpected.. and one more thing, though while reading it felt like, much like Jahnvi's writing, still there is a special Payal's touch that differentiates ur writing...just so beautiful 👏👏👏👏

Very nicely written OS... Just seemed like jahnvi's update... Now it's going to be tough for Jhanvi to up this... [:D/]

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

By PBDian Diksha😃

Hey Dear Author 🤗.. first of all congratulations to u for the success of this story👏👏 and all the best for the future👍🏼...but then while congratulating you, even your readers , our dear PBDians too deserve a special applause to support and love such wonderful creation👏👏...

You won't believe, how I stepped in this PBD land...I used to see this title quite often , but I don't know why, never felt like visiting the thread and read the story...but one such day, I was quite irritated due to hopeless workshops in office, and wanted some deviation so , visited our forum...and that day, no new update of the stories I used to read was there... and frankly , I didn't want to read any old fictions...and so I was just staring at the screen , when I again saw PBD...and then I decided to take a chance to read a new story...I think that was Chap 13 or 14, I read for the first time...and rest is history...

Addiction...the only thing I can say, about how I feel about this magical creation...that day ,it not just got me out of that unhappiness, but it even captured me to read every chapter, every word I missed of this story from beginning...and then next 2 days that was my only mission...but still , I wasn't commenting much... just one or two lines...but it changed...such is the impact of this story, that you can't stop yourself from opening your heart about it...and today, here I m once again writing whatever I feel in this moment...

And the whole credit goes to one and only creator of this amazing PBD world , Jahnvi⭐️⭐️⭐️...kudos to you , dear...your unique writing style, the powerful imagination about the story and the amazing ease and control over describing the emotions always surpass all our expectations...

And about PBD...then when the leads r or Jalal and Jo, then it's natural for everybody to be part of this dreamland...Jalal , Jo, their parents, friends , colleagues feel like part of or daily life... even the immortal things like Jo's scooty, Jalal's bike , their workplace , their home , even that swing they share, just feel like exist in front of us...such is the impact of this..

He is a fighter, she is a surviver...he was back-stabbed by his close ones, she was robbed by somebody unknown...but their destiny brought them together...to fill the emptiness in their lives, to complete each other, to become each other's destiny...

Let's celebrate this togetherness of not only Jalal and Jodha but the togetherness of all of us PBDians on this 2nd anniversary...🤗.

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

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Originally posted by: Kalgi22

OMG!😲😲 I do blush time to time!! 🤣

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

OMG!😲😲 I do blush time to time!! 🤣

😲😲 Kalgi???? blushing

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