I could have waited and written a long detailed review... but I didn't... because I wanted to write a review as soon as I read it.. I wanted the reactions to be genuine... your 'EFFORTS' deserved it!
Thankyou so so much lashy.. Thanks a lot🤗🤗
Other than Jhanu, I doubt anyone else would be able to differentiate it wasn't her piece of work...
Don't say this... My writing 👎🏼 and her writing 👍🏼 I always try to write good no doubt but not in my dreams I can think to match her standard😭
Tell u one secret, even jhanvi di doesn't know about this, but she's my guru 😉😆 I always try to learn from her writing..😆
as an author, she must feel so thrilled that she has such an ardent fan in you... not only do you follow every nuance of the story... you are able to adapt your style to become hers, which is no easy feat... shows how invested you are in PBD...
>>>> ☺️☺️☺️
The Goa incident really brought the biggest smile to my face...
Utopia, birthday celebrations, peacock blue saree, Telugu song (I would have never dared to put in a song from a language I don't know... so one more reason to pat yourself on the back)...
>>>@Bold: I did yesterday but here I'm doing it again 😆
Thankyou so much dear🤗 and about telugu song.. First, I didn't know exactly which language it was😆 reading chapter 2,I came to know that it's telugu.. Also, I didn't get it's translation on google in 2-3 attempts.. Neither I knew any particular telugu sites from where I could get it's translation.. After few attempts, I got it and then I matched the lyrics with what had written in chapter 2..😆
I was laughing at myself for doing such things.., inserting a song in language which even I don't understand😆 But then the idea I had in mind, it's necessary to insert that..😛
I am amazed, Payal! (See no Catty di here... genuine emotions, na that's why!😉) it didn't seem like you just wanted to add these parts in your OS... it was a well-planned story that flowed along perfectly well!
I don't know what to say, but I'm just 😃
Thankyou dearie 🤗🤗🤗🤗
The dialogues... BOB.. idiot.. the style they converse... the way the scintillating parts were all described to the T... you should be so proud of yourself!
Bold: sorry didn't get this😕😳
I"m feeling proud, because of your comment..😃😆
If there was one thing I didn't like in your OS, it's your lack of confidence in yourself.. the message at the beginning... why must you think this wouldn't be good enough... it's an exceptional offshoot of Jhanu's masterpiece!
Lashy.. I do many mistakes yaar.. also, my writing is not that good.. I started writing just because I wanted to write something but then It become my addiction. Actually, I wanted to write when I was in a college but didn't have confidence to do so.. I used to think when ever I read any novel, that can I write any story, ever?
Here, coming to IF I started posting, still I know I am not a good writer, that people want to read stories of mine, impatiently.
Pale blue dot and jhanvi di.. both are special and unique.. Didn't have confidence to write on this masterpiece and that too on such incidents-Jo's gift and Goa incident.. when I know how eagerly we are waiting for this to happen..
That's the only reason dear.. for my lack of confidence..
But your words truly made me so so happy that you can't imagine😆
Love you girl.. and am sure if Jhanu could.. she'd have a short change of plan in her vacation... take a detour to Delhi and visit you to give you a hug...
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>>> Here I want to confess something.. reading these lines of yours, for the first time on IF, I feel emotional..(In context of writing) I was surprised to perceive my teary eyes.. there was a shit-eating grin on my face. My parents were sitting beside me, so I swallowed..
Many times I got very heart-touching comments on my updates but this line.. I don't know why.. but It just means a lot..
Every word you wrote in this comment, touched my heart and made me 😭😭
May be because PBD is special , that's why..
I just want to say, Love you so so much for this awesomely beautiful comment 🤗🤗🤗
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