FF:Breathless: Tryst with Fate (Chap 4 updated page 1 (23.03.16)) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Yayyy !!!!

Finally u r continuing it Deepa dii...

Thank you sooo veryyy much !!

First of all a biiiggg Congratulations on ur first FF Deepa dii 🤗 !!

M loving this one !! The storyline is soo Unique brewing more n more curiousness inside me 😆 !!

The 2nd Chapter was an AWESOME one !!⭐️

Both lost in each other !!

After meeting her , he is Breathless , she took away his peace , sleep n I guess , his non existing heart too 😛 !! Yeah! heart non existent is not possible. My story has heart in the right place unlike natakiya rupantar!!😆

Where as after meeting him , she too is Breathless , he took her peace too , but in return gifted her something too -- crimson red blushing cheeks 😆 !!

He is lost in his ' The lady in shining armor's ' thoughts where as she was in her ' Prince Charming's ' specially in those mesmerizing black orbs of his 😉 !! Yes, their souls reached out to eacher hence the mutual attraction. When the magnetic pull exists, nothing can be done.

Not to forget ur BRILLIANT poem here ...

Which was like cherry on the cake 😛 !!

The words u chosed in ur poem , the emotions it reflected , the state of their heart which it reflected ...

Gosh !! MIND BLOWING !! Thanks. Hope I can continue this trend.

N yeah , the precap !!

I loved Abdul's dialogue there -- ' Pledge me the half Kingdom ' 😆 !!

Jalal is sooo desperate to get even a single glimpse of his Celestial nymph 😉 !!

Okk now here comes The Most Important Part of the cmmnt --

" Update SOON " 🤣...