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😆Ah ! Jahnu Thank you. I have definitely diverted some of my time & energy to fiction, leaving poor finance to rot in a corner for sometime.😆
But thank you for your encouraging words. You & other writers have inspired me to try my luck at writing. Hope it will make some sense to the readers.
Originally posted by: hemakeerti
First a big hug to you, my intelligent friend, for FINALLY diverting your pen from Finance to Fiction
The dusky beauty was lawfully married to Jalal, but she was still a Princess not yet his queen.
"How long did you torture me huh??? Over 365 days?" Yes, there is going to be some interesting twisted tortures happening. Have to wait for it to unfold.😉
Prologue is intriguing enough to whip our curiosities.. a thumbs up for this 👍🏼 Thank you that was my very intention. 😳
I wonder if the person who kidnapped is Jalal or Sharifuddin 😆.. Its okay with me if its Sharif 😉 😲 Its not ok if its Sharif. But anyway, mystery will unfold itself later.
but not ok if its Jalal 😆.. Poor Emperor yaar.. don't make him suffer for 365 days here too.. He has suffered enough on screen 😉 Well, if you know what Jo does or did to him, you will take back your words.😆
Chapter 1:
"Nothing can stop me!, nothing will stop me... from extending the boundaries of my empire"
This reminds me of initial episodes of JA when Jalal says "Ye Amer hame pukar rahe hai Baba!!" I find a correlation between these two scenes. Thankfully your leads didn't get started on a nafrat-grhina mode 😆. True. I unconsiciously wrote this without considering the seriel. But I guess, I was influenced by the historical write up on Akbar and other rulers of the Europe who were eager to extend their empires.Both are equally breathless about the other.. Let me see how long it takes before they get truly BREATHLESS 😉😆 Well, I don't know what you mean😉😆
Jalal had a name, and a place to begin his search with!! And Jodha had only his image. Interested to see how the second meeting is going to be. Assassin Vs Enemy.. WoW!! 🤪
YEs, Jalal has a name to search but not Jodha. It will be interesting. Keep reading.
Next setting in Marwar?? Diwali? And what else is in store for us? Reveal it soon.. don't make us wait longer.. Not to forget.. your poems are delicious desserts after a wholesome meal.. I look after my readers would love them to enjoy themselves. So I want them to enjoy desert after every meal.😉
Congratulations on your first FF dear.. Have a great writing time!! 🤗🤗Thanks a ton dear. I did appreciate your comments to improve my writing. So keep commenting.
Pati Patni Aur Panga
Jaane Anjaane Hum Mile
Tum Se Tum Tak
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
Vasudha
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