FF:Breathless: Tryst with Fate (Chap 4 updated page 1 (23.03.16))

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Lovely lovely update deepu... the story is progressing very well...

Obviously, Mr. Jalal is trying very very hard to concentrate on his training... but... we know what's going on in his mind!!!

Anyway... thanks to Abdul and his wit, Emperor Jalal was able to locate his Ms Nobody in front of Everybody...👍🏼 [Pssst Abdul is a ⭐️]

But, poor Miss Nobody had no idea that the person her in guise of slipping some bangles on her was a special Mr. Somebody 😉

And while all that happened, we enjoyed them in this avtaar

Of course, left to him... he would have wanted to move on to the next level with this

and this

But, you'll have to wait mister

!!! There will be a next time!!!

*********************

Simultaneoulsy, the plot thickens with Suryaban (😡) eyeing her every moment he gets. Sukanya eyeing Suryaban ()every moment she gets ... and even Padmini eyeing Jodha for her son...

Before this becomes a complicated rectangle... I am going to enjoy the chemistry between the leads 😉

Thanks for the lovely lovely story Deeps.. please dont take too long between updates henceforth.. now that your new lappy is up and running!!!

Edited by lashy - 9 years ago

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: lashy
Lovely lovely update deepu... the story is progressing very well...
Obviously, Mr. Jalal is trying very very hard to concentrate on his training... but... we know what's going on in his mind!!!

Anyway... thanks to Abdul and his wit, Emperor Jalal was able to locate his Ms Nobody in front of Everybody...👍🏼 [Pssst Abdul is a ⭐️]

But, poor Miss Nobody had no idea that the person her in guise of slipping some bangles on her was a special Mr. Somebody 😉
And while all that happened, we enjoyed them in this avtaar

Of course, left to him... he would have wanted to move on to the next level with this

and this

But, you'll have to wait mister !!! There will be a next time!!!

*********************

Simultaneoulsy, the plot thickens with Suryaban (😡) eyeing her every moment he gets. Sukanya eyeing Suryaban ()every moment she gets ... and even Padmini eyeing Jodha for her son...
Before this becomes a complicated rectangle... I am going to enjoy the chemistry between the leads 😉

Thanks for the lovely lovely story Deeps.. please dont take too long between updates henceforth.. now that your new lappy is up and running!!!

Lashy in full swing.. at this hour of night/dawn? 😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Thanks to fact that I have to leave to the airport now 😆

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#114

you have exceptionally well writing skills di!!

i could imagine ever scene really well!

update soon!

and dont forget to pm me!😃

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Rani1965

@Rani1965

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Story is getting very interesting. Loved Abdul. Looks like he's having a good time teasing Jalal.
And finally somebody got to meet Ms Nobody.
Hope to get your next update soon. 😛

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: lashy
Lovely lovely update deepu... the story is progressing very well...
Obviously, Mr. Jalal is trying very very hard to concentrate on his training... but... we know what's going on in his mind!!!

Anyway... thanks to Abdul and his wit, Emperor Jalal was able to locate his Ms Nobody in front of Everybody...👍🏼 [Pssst Abdul is a ⭐️]

But, poor Miss Nobody had no idea that the person her in guise of slipping some bangles on her was a special Mr. Somebody 😉
And while all that happened, we enjoyed them in this avtaar

Of course, left to him... he would have wanted to move on to the next level with this

and this

But, you'll have to wait mister !!! There will be a next time!!!

*********************

Simultaneoulsy, the plot thickens with Suryaban (😡) eyeing her every moment he gets. Sukanya eyeing Suryaban ()every moment she gets ... and even Padmini eyeing Jodha for her son...
Before this becomes a complicated rectangle... I am going to enjoy the chemistry between the leads 😉

Thanks for the lovely lovely story Deeps.. please dont take too long between updates henceforth.. now that your new lappy is up and running!!!