FF:Breathless: Tryst with Fate (Chap 4 updated page 1 (23.03.16)) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Thank you Deepu for for considering our pleas to continue this story. 🤗🤗

And congrats for your first FF/SS.🥳

I will come back shortly after reading part two 😳

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

wow congrats deepu akka for this story...
nd also ur continuing this story...
concept was awesome akka...
1st chapter was lovely d way jodha jalal met nd there reaction was so good to read...
in 2nd chapter there r thing about each other nd trying to find each other. ...
waiting for next chapter akka...
update soon. ...
nd plz accept my request akka... nd plz do pm me from next update plz...

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

fantastic updates

jodha rescue jalal😊 Yes, that was the first of the many twists.

waiting for their next meeting

continue soon Will update as soon as I practically can.

thnkx 4 pm

Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum
jj in love
wow

update asap

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Congrats for your story Deepa di... 😃

Chapter 1 :

Amazing amazing chapter di... 😡

Loved it so much... 😳

I loved your plot...Jodha being a warrior and saving Jalal... 😳 Yes, Jodha was a born warrior, hence she is a natural.😉

Loved the way you have described the feelings of both of them... 😳 😃 Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Really beautiful chapter di! ⭐️ 😕 😃

Originally posted by: avika444

Wow deepu u finally decided to continue the story haan

Good decision dear

Will read soon

Till then res plsss

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Fanatabulous chappy Deepu👏👏

Love you dear for continuing this story🤗

I loved it to the core.❤️

Jo and Jalal both sailing in same boat...both were mesmerized by each other.. Haa, one soul recognises another amiable one.😳

She was immersed in his deep black orbs and he was awestruck by the celestial nymph who knocked his heart to make him realise it exists.❤️ Comeon, there cant be anyone living without a heart. Haa, one can act hard & cruel, but it still is emotions but stronger ones.

Ohh! he was all set to meet that angel in disguise.. Yes, the first of the many disguises.

What happens wen she comes to know the handsome black orbs which hypnotized her was of none other than her enemy.😳 Heart broken she will be. Chapt 3 has snippets of it. 😲

Most amazing part in your writing I always find exciting is your poems Deepu... That you cannot help it. You will be forced to read it. Sorry.

Sweet torments which were spinning in their budding heart were communicating with each other through telepathy..praising each other's features both drown in eachother... her brown eyes and his deep black orbs...her fragile body yet agile fighting skills sent him to lala world to go gaga over his disguised beauty😳 Yes, first its Lala la, then its gaga gugu and then the inevitable happens. Sab niyathi ka khel hai behena!😉

And his masculine strong shoulders ..curly hairs ...great persona attracted her. Mutual attraction, opposites attract.😳

Precap is intresting Deeps!

Both are together wow...don't know each other identity...woooh

Now I am eager to read further.. Update next chappy soon.

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

What a lovely update!❤️

First abt the prologue😳,very interesting one😉.SHE tortured HIM for 365 days and HE wants to torture HER in 365 ways..what an idea sirji !!😆 Haa what you sow, so you reap.

I was confused with the new name,Jagti Bai.Got the clarity after reading Ch-2. Yes, all secrets will be revealed, but you got to read in sequence.

Chapter 2 was really fantastic👏.Both are breathless and drowned in each other's thoughts😛.I'm waiting for their next mulakat eagerly😳 Yes, two souls recognised eachother, now its the mortal beings that need to recognise.

The words,"over analytical cerebrum" cracked me😆.Your style of describing people,their thoughts and emotions is beautiful😃 Thank you. Still say, thy cerebrum is over analytical most times. 😆

The way you sum up the entire chapter,their emotions in the form of poem is just amazing⭐️ Thank you. That you cannot eliminate in my style of writing. 😉

Update soon,akka and thnx for the PM😊

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Wow Deeps⭐️ First of all Congratulation for your FF👏 thank you😳

With the mysterious prologue with 365 days 😲😲 What a start it is. Excellent! Glad you were intrigued!.

Celestial nymph and prince charming ☺️ Wow! Haa! they were two enchanting personalities with amazing chemistry. So it will be WOW!.

😃 getting ready for their next meet at Diwali Yes, that will be chapt 4

Much excited to read your twisted plans so that twisted story 😃 That is for sure. Twisters and knots make life interesting.😃

Originally posted by: lovespari

Congratulation fr ur frst FF deep dii🥳
prologue is super interesting dii😉😃
but hv one ques did the man is ja wjo kidnappd her or one more did both ja jo mrried You will have to read the story and all secrets will unfold dear. 😉

😕😆