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😛Hello to all bhai and bandhus here...
After watching the suside segment on SBS, i could not stop myself from writing my fiction on this track...if any mistakes...do correct me...as its my first one...
JALAL: - kya kaha tumne...jodha begum...mehel se gayab hai...esa kaise ho sakta hai...
Soldier:- Gustakhi maaf shenshah lekin esa hua hai...eh sainik se khud jodha begum ko pahadiyo ki taraf jate dekha hai...usne unhe rokne ki bahut koshis ki per wo nahi ruki...
(jalal remembers all the incidence that happened in the court)
Flashback:
Mainavati:- humne tumhe ese sanskar to na diye the jodha ke tum ek vidhwa stri ke samman per kichad uchalo..
Jodha:- humara vishwas kijiye maasa, humse jo hua unjane me hui, hum iske liye shamaprarthi hai..hum subke samne mahmanga se shama mangne ke liye upasthit hai...
BANDHIS;- haan rani sa, isme jodha ka koi dosh nahi, humne hi usse mehel ke baagiche me khelne ki zid ki thi...galti humari hai ...
Mainavati:- jo bhi ho...jaise bhi hua ho...parantu paap to hua hai jodha thaare se...aur iske liye hum tumhe dand bhi dege...kyuki jawaisa ne hume iski zimmedari di hai...
to sun jodha...aaj ke baad hum tumhara mukh kabhi dekhna nahi chahege...aajivan ab tujhe ye mankar jivan vyteet karna hoga ke teri maasa is duniya me nahi rahi...
(this was the biggest punishment ever for jodha...she felt like someone has snatched the whole world from her...she fell on her knees)
Jodha:- maasa...esa mat kahiye maasa...hume apne apradh ka bodh hai...aap hume mritudand de dijiye parantu esa mat kahiye...and she started crying loudly...
(seeing this JALAL got melt)
Jalal:- rani mainawati...hum jante hai jodha ke galti bahut badi hai...mgar hume bhi ab lgta hai ke jodha ne janboojh ker esa nahi kiya...aap ek baar fir sochiye ...(and he scold the daasis for their act of forcing jodha to play holi in the ground...and tell them to get lost)
Mainawati:- nahi jawaisaa...jodha is rajya ki maharani hai...use apne sasural ki maryada ka khayall rakhna chahiye tha...hum use kabhi shama nahi karege...humara nirnaya atal hai...and she goes from their witout listening anything...(i know, mainawati can't be so rude but i just want to show a valid reason for jodha commiting suside)...
<jodha stands up and goes from their looking devastated without saying anything...jalal just watches her going and can sense her pain...
FlashBack over.
Jalal: - hume laga hi tha ammijan ke jodha begum koi galat kadam na utha de...isse pahle ki der ho jaye...hume jana hoga...hum khud unhe wapas layege...
Rukkaiya: - aap itne pareshan kyu ho rahe hai jalal, wo itni ahem nahi ke aap uske liye apna kimti waqt zaaya kare...marne dijiye usne...aapko bhi bhi chutkara mil jayega us kambakht se...
JALAL:- Ruqqaiyaaa...(shouting)...apni had me rehna sikhiye...ek aurat hoker aap kisi dusri aurat ke bare me aap esa kaise bol sakti hai...hum jante hai ke apni walida se bichadne ka khauf kya hota hai aur jodha begum is waqt kis takleef se guzar rahi hai...aur hume achi taraf se ilm hai ke hume apna waqt kaha aur kaise bitana hai...aapki salah nahi maangi thi humne...
👏
(i always want this when ruqqaiya talk bad about jodha)😆
Ruqqaiya gets shocked as jalal was talking with her like that was a new experience for her...she gets angry and goes from their...jalal leaves from there to find jodha too...😉
P recap:-jodha is riding horse in high speed...and jalal sees her and tries to stop her...and some of the intense scenes...
Hows it?? please leave comment...😃
i am ready for all the critisizm and juta chappal...and please forgive the writing mistakes...🤗
waiting for your feedback😊
Index: -
chapter1- page 1 (The above one)
chapter2- page4
chapter3- page6
chapter4-page9
chapter5- page13
chapter6-page 16
Chapter7 - page 19
Chapter 8:- page 22
Chapter 9(Part-1):- page 24
Chapter 9(Part-2):- page 27
Chapter 10(Part-1) :-page 30
Chapter 10(Part-2) :-page 35
Chapter 11:- page 39
Chapter 12:- page 42
Chapter 13:- page 46
Chapter 14:- page 60
Chapter 15:- page 67
Chapter 16:- page 72
Chapter 16(part 2):- page 74
Chapter 17:- page 78
Chapter 18:- page 84
Chapter 19:- page 90
Chapter 20:- page 99 *aKDHA SR*❤️
Chapter 21:- page 107
Chapter 22:- page 117
Chapter 23:- page 124
Chapter 24:- page 130
Chapter 25:- page 138
Chapter 26:- page 144
Chapter 27:- page 150
LINK TO THREAD 2:-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3928859
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