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Chapter 2:-
Jalal got out of the palace...he was searching for jodha in every direction...then he remembered what the soldier said to him...that he had seen jodha going towards Alvira's pahadis...
he moved to that direction and made his horse ran as fast as he could...meanwhile
Jalal: - ya khuda...jodha begum jaha kahi bhi ho sahi salamat ho...kahi jiska hume dar hai wo bewkufi na kar de wo...unki hifazat karna...
(he was getting more and more restless as he could not find even a single trace of jodha...
he stopped his horse...and started shouting loudly)
Jalal:- jodhaaa...kaha hai aap??
(suddenly..he got to listen the voice of footsteps of a horse...he watched in that direction...it was none other than jodha riding the horse vigoursly...jalal moved in that direction quickly)
Jalal: - jodha begum...ye kya pagalpan hai...ruk jayiye...
(but jodha was in her own agony...she could not listen his voice...she continued moving...)
Jalal:- Jodhaaa...ruk jayiye...ye humara hukm hai...jodhaaa...
(suddenly jodha stops her horse and get down and start moving towards the lake...)
(Jalal doesn't wait for the horse to stop and just jumps from it...he fall on the ground...but manage to get up and run after jodha)
Jalal:- jodhaaa begum ruk jayiye....(he shouted so loudly that his voice echoed many times...)
(jodha reaches at the bank of the lake...and stops and turnes facing jalal now...he was at some distance from her...)
Jodha: - humare sameep aane ka prayaas mat kijiyega shenshaan...hum apne jivan se vyathit ho chuke hai...ab is jivan se hume koi aasha nahi hai...hum hamesha sako pida pahuchate hai...aur aaj humne apni maasa ka sir bhare darbaar me jhuka diya...hum apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paayege...
Jalal: -(standing at some distance...slowly stteping forward) nahi jodha begum...esa nahi hai...humari baat suniye...
Jodha: - nahi sahenshah...hum aaj kisi ki baat nahi sunege...hum hi sabke dukh ka karan hai...aur aaj is karan ko hum sadaiv ke liye samapt kar dege...
(she gives a faint smile with tears in her eyes and raises her hands...slowly going behind...)
Jodha:- hume shama kar dijiyega shenshah...(and she slowly goes behind...)
Jalal: - nahiii...jodhhaaa...(shouts loudly than ever...and splashhh...jodha falls down in the lake...)
(jalal goes their running and finds jodha struggling in the water...without any second thought or wasting the time...he jumps into the lake to save her...by that time jodha get disappered in the water suddenly...)
Jalal:- jodhaaa...jodhaa..(crying...)š
(suddenly he watches jodha's hand and move in that direction quickly...he goes near her and captures her waist and drag her towards the bank...they reached the bank...jodha becomes unconscious by that time...jalal lifts her and take her in his arms and take her out of the lake and puts her down taking her head is his lap... )
Jalal:- aankhen kholiye jodha begum...hosh me aayiye...(pats her cheek)
Jodha...khuda ke liye esa zulm mat kijiye hum per...humare gunaho ki itni badi sazza mat dijiye hume...aankhen kholiye...
(and he presses her stomach and upper cheast to take the water out...he even blows air in her mouth...rubbs her hans)
Jalal:- jodha...uthiye na jodha hume esa mazak bilkul pasand nahi...hum wada karte hai aaj ke baad kabhi tang nahi karege aapko...aur aap to janti hi hai ke shenshah apni zubaan ka pakka hota hai...hum aapko dantege bhi nahi...ab to aankhe khol dijiye...(he says it with mixed expressions on his face...smile,anger,disgust,fear...and tears in he eyes...and again presses her stomach...this time the water comes out from her mouth and she starts coughing...and she opens her eyes)
Precap: - khatti mithi nok jhoke b/w our akdha
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