FF *Ishqzaade* Chapter 27 updated on page150*THREAD CLOSED* - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
👏You are amazing dear!! Awesome Story!! Loved it soo much!! hats Off!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: PrincessNany

👏You are amazing dear!! Awesome Story!! Loved it soo much!! hats Off!!👏

thanku sweety😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
👏It was Amazing, AkDha Hug!!! Oh I am glad you added that, Now waiting for the next Update, Do Update soon, And make them ride back toghether
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ApurvaLovesARVI

👏It was Amazing, AkDha Hug!!! Oh I am glad you added that, Now waiting for the next Update, Do Update soon, And make them ride back toghether

wait and watch dear...shayad wo itni jaldi wapas hi na jaye...rest you will get to know soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
great job...wel done..amazing...please update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pallavvi

hey...did i write mother...sorry😆
going to change it now😕




heay, i enjoyed it. imagine Jalal's motherly expression for Jodha. 😆 she will again jump in water out of shock and embaressment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
hello friends...
here is a bonus update for you all...
as i might not be able to give u any update because i am having an important presentation tomorrow...
so here it is...

Chapter-4

(jodha realizes that she is hugging jalal and is in jalal's embrace...she tries to depart but jalal is too lost to leave her...she lookes up and gives a faint smile...she again tries...but still jalal in his own world and dint leave her...finally she speaks up)

Jodha: - shenshah...(very softly)

Jalal: - hmmm(still hugging her)

Jodha:- wo...hum ab thik hai...

Jalal:- hmmm...(not leaving her)

Jodha:- shenshah(a little louder)

Jalal:- abbb...(quickly gets depart as he realizes what he was doing and is shocked at his gesture...embaraced, put his hand behind his head and looks here and there...)

Jodha:- she also looks in another direction...and blushes...😳

(they remain silent for some time...then jalal looks at jodha and is surprised to see jodha blushing...he thought that she will scold him for his gesture but no she was smiling...seeing this jalal started smiling too and thinks)

Jalal:-(to himself) kya humara gale lagana inhe acha laga...naraz bhi nahi hui...

(Jodha listens jalal murmuring something...)

Jodha:- kuch kaha aapne...???

Jalal:- abbb...na...nahi to...humara matlab hai...bus yehi ke ab hume wapas chalna chahiye ...mehel me sab pareshan ho rahe hoge or din bhi dhalne ko hai...yaha charo or Ghana jungle hai...yaha ab aur rukna thik nahi...chaliye(and he stands up to go and offers his hand to jodha to stand up)

Jodha:-nahi shenshah...hum wapas nahi jayege...

Jalal:- (again sits is front of her) magar kyu...

Jodha:- hum maasa se nazren milane ke kabil nahi rahe...ab kya mukh leker unke samne jayege...jiski ma ne uska mukh dekhne se mana ker diya ho us beti ka jivit rehna vyarth hai...

Jalal:- phir wohi baate...humne kaha na aapse...kuch nahi hoga...hum khud badi ammi se baat karege...wo khud aapki walida se baat karegi...or jaha tak hume pata hai badi ammi kabhi bhi humari baat nahi talegi aur ab tak to wo bhi samajh hi gayi hogi ke aapne janbujh ker esa nahi kiya...aap fikr mat kariye jodha begum...hum sab thik kar dege...(she dint respond)

Ab apne khun se likhker farmaan dena padega kya aapko tab manegi...(and he smiles)

(this makes jodha laugh)

Jodha:- nahi iski koi aavshykta nahi hai...

Jalal:- nahi nahi...agar aap chahe to hum esa kar sakte hai...humare liye koi badi baat nahi hai...boliye de kya farmaan aapko...shayad tab aapko tassali ho jaye...

Jodha:- haan..haan, hume pata hai...rakt bahane me tanik bhi sankoch nahi hota aapko...wo to humne us din hi dekh liya tha jab humare malham lagane per aapne dusra haath bhi kat liya tha...iski koi aavshykta nahi hai...hume vishwas hai aap per

(jalal feels really happy that finally jodha has some trust on him...he stands up again)

Jalal:- to phir chale...(and he offers his hand again but instead of holding that jodha stands up by herself)

Jalal:- rassi jal gayi per bal nahi gaya...uff itna gurur kis kaam ka...😆

Jodha:- kya kaha aapne...

Jalal:- kuch nahi...kyu aapne kuch suna kya...

Jodha:- haan humne suna...aapne humare bare me kuch kaha...

Jalal:- ab yaha aap hi hai to aapse hi kahege na...(murmurs)😆

Jodha:- dekha...apne phir kuch kaha...dekha humne...

Jalal:-aapke kaan baj rahe hai shayad jodha begum...waise bhi is jheel ka pani bahut khara hai...mehel chaliye...khwaja shera se ilaj karaiye...vrna log kya kahege ke shenshah ki begum ko thik se sunai bhi nahi deta...

Jodha:- aap humara uphaas kar rahe hai??

Jalal:- nahi nahi...humari itni majal jo hum aapka uphas kare(and he giggles seeing jodha getting irritated)

Jodha:- thik hai yadi uphaas hi karma hai to akele hi chale jayiye,,,hume nahi jana aapke sath...(she start moving in the opposite direction of jalal)

Jalal:- arre...jodha begum...

(suddenly jodha feels dizzy and faints)

Jalal:- jodha begum(worried and catches her before she reaches the ground...)

Jalal:- jodha...jodha...ya allah inhe to tez bukhar hai...(and suddenly it starts raining...)

Jalal:- ye kya barish ko bhi abhi aana tha...agar ye aur bhig gayi to inki tabiyat aur nasaaz ho sakti hai..(it was almost night now,he sees some light coming from some distance and run in that direction to find a shelter...there is a small cottage near by...he moves to that cottage with jodha in his arms and enter the cottage)*AS YOU ALL KNOW EKTA MAIYAA HAS NO SHORTAGE OF COTTAGES IN SUNSAN PLACES*😉😆

Precap:- jungle me mangal😉

Thanku...keep smiling...and commenting too...dont forget to press the likewa button😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha




heay, i enjoyed it. imagine Jalal's motherly expression for Jodha. 😆 she will again jump in water out of shock and embaressment

thanks for telling yar...actually wote that yesterday on ms office and directly pasted here without checking...ya...heheh😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
loved it. u really write very good story. continue when u r free
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
wow that was gr8. both ch3 and 4

for ch-3 : I was smiling when i read "only 15 minutes" and then ended up laughing when i read "*you can increase the time limit as per your wish...i don't mind*😆🤣"

Plz pm me when u update.


Chapter 4 was a delight to read. I really liked how jalal was teasing her and their friendly and mischievous conversation. gosh i don't when will they see onscreen.

plzz pm me next time u update.
Edited by ashpat - 11 years ago

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