FF *Ishqzaade* Chapter 27 updated on page150*THREAD CLOSED* - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
You Are AA--MAZZ-INGGG!! WA--AA-O... Simply WOW!! Waiting for next update!! You are amazing writer yarr...😳😳
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Amazing Update😊
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hello everyone...😊
here is the next part...😃
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Chapter 9:- (Part-2)

Adham:- khtm kar do in dono ko...

(jalal and jodha are now surrounded by adham's soldiers...jalal takes out his shamshir...jodha has no weapon...jalal and jodha are standing joining their back and facing the soldiers...soldiers attack on them...jalal protects jodha...he doesn't allow anyone to touch her begum...though jalal is capable enough to handle all of them...but it is not possible to handle so many attacks at the same time...jodha understands this...she notices that the weapons of the soldier killed by jalal are lying on the floor...she escapes from there as they were busy in fighting with jalal and reaches to that position...she picks up the bow and aims the arrow at the soldiers surrounding jalal...she kills all of them in a flick of second with her never failing archery talent...adham is shocked to see this...jodha's arrows were not allowing anyone to even go near jalal...adham was really annoyed now...he understands that until jodha is there...it will not be easy for him to kill jalal...he signals yusuf khan to kill jodha... )

Adham:- yusuf khan...hume pehle is jodha ko khtam karna hoga...iske rehte jalal ko marna mushkil hai...is begum ko khtm kar do...

(yusuf nods his head...and approaches jodha holding his shamshir to kill her...jodha looks for another arrow in the quiver...but unfortunately she finds the quiver empty...she ran to pick the armour plate lying on the ground at some distance...she rolls down on the ground and picks the armour plate at the right time as yusuf was about to attack her with his sword...she stops his attack by the plate...yusuf was behaving like an animal who is utmost thirsty of blood...he gives an evil smirk to jodha... )

Yusuf:- zid chor dijiye jodha begum...kyu bhari jwani me allah ko pyari hona chahti hai...aap humse nahi jit sakti...

Jodha:- ek nihathe per shastra uthker apne aap ko vir samajhte ho... dhikkar hai tum per...

(jalal was busy in handling a large part of adham's army but from the corner of his eyes he was also looking at jodha...he knew it that she is in danger and she needs a shamshir...jalal kills a soldier coming towards him and picks up his shamshir...and threw it towards jodha...)

Jalal(shouts):- jodhaaa...ye lijiye...

(jodha catches the shamshir...and gives a smirk to yusuf...)

Jodha:- to aap kya keh rahe the...ab dekhte hai ke kaun kitna yogya hai...(and she starts fighting with yusuf like a well trained warrior...yusuf was way too shocked to see her fighting like that...it was getting very difficult for him to handle her attacks as they were so powerful...he tumbles and falls down...his sword slips from his hands...he is on ground...jodha puts her sword on yusuf's neck...)

Jodha:-aaj hum tumhe marker un purusho ke liye ek misaal kayam karege jo striyo ko durbal samajhne ki bhul karte hai...hum to bhagvan ko pyare nahi hone wale parantu...aaj tumhe nark avashaya bhejege...(yusuf is really afraid...he asks for forgiveness but jodha shows no mercy on such a mean person...she cuts his head with a single stroke...and kills him...)

(Adham sees all this...which was just unbelievable for him...he was not able to believe that a girl can fight like this...and can kill one of his most trustworthy fellow...who himself was a very good fighter...he understands that he has to use another way...both jodha and jalal were fighting tremendously and had killed half of the army of adham...Adham decided to apply the technique...he was best at...i.e. backstabbing...he got down from his horse and went near jalal from behind holding his shamshir...on the other hand jalal, unaware of it, was busy in fighting with meraj and mustaid...actually it was adham's plan...he knew it very well that he can't match jalal in his fighting skills...so he conspirated to kill jalal...he had already instructed meraj and mustaid to attack jalal and try to keep him busy with them...and that will be the time when adham will attack jalal from behind...and they will finish him...but while planning this consipiracy...adham had totally ignored jodha...who has now appeared as the biggest obstacle to kill jalal...she has becaome his shield now...adham observed that jodha is surrounded by other soldiers and is busy facing them so she won't be able to reach jalal and it's the right time to trap jalal...)

(he was approaching jalal...raising his sword to kill him...jodha saw it...she killed all others surrounding her in a single stroke...and ran towards jalal...adham raised his sword very high and was about to aim it at jalal's neck...but an another sword disabled his technique and stopped his attack...it was none other than jodha...she reached there on time and made adham's attempt to be failed...)

Jodha:- humne kaha tha na adham...jab tak hum jivit hai...tum humare pati ko hath bhi nahi laga sakte...(she smirked...)

Adham:- to thik hai...pehle tujhe hi khtm karta hu...naak me dum karke rakha hai utni der se...ab bahut hua...apne kanha ko yaad ker lijiye jodha begum kyuki ab aapka unke paas jaane ka samay aa gaya hai...

Jodha:- aazma ker dekh lijiye...wo to samay hi batayega ke kaun kaha jata hai...per itna samajh lo...humare rehte...shenshah tak to tum nahi pahuch sakte...

(Adham and jodha fight starts...adham was attacking jodha vigourously...and jodha was replying his attacks with the same aggression...and within few seconds ...adham realized that he can't win over jodha by playing fair...he noticed that the wound at jodha's hand has started bleeding*snake bite*...he played a trick with her...he looked over jodha pretending that he is looking at jalal)

Adham:-jalal(smirking)...(jodha misunderstood that something has happened to jalal...she looked back to confirm if he is alright...and that was the time when adham attacked on the same hand which was bleeding...leaving a long cut on jodha's hand...it started bleeding badly now...she held her hand and mourned in pain...but dint lose her grip on the sword...)

Jodha:- aaahhh...adham khan...(shouts)

Adham:-ha ha ha ha...shamshir chalane me bhale hi tum humse behter ho jodha magar dimag chalane ke mamle me abhi tak bachhi ho...jung me jazbaato ke liye koi jagah nahi hoti bevkoof ladki...

(jodha gathered her whole strength and again attacked adham but her hand was bleeding so badly that adham overpowered her this time...and pushed her behind...jodha's sword was about to slip from her hands and adham was about to take his final stroke to finish jodha...when jalal held jodha's hand preventing the sword to slip down and with other hand he stopped adham's attack...jalal and jodha both looked at each other...)

Jalal:-hum aapko kabhi harne nahi dege jodha begum...kabhi nahi...(firmly but with teary eyes)

*AKDHA EYELOCK* *Bg starts ISHQ HAI WO JAZBAAT...ISHQ HAI WO EHSAAS ...*

(Adham looked over them and what he saw ...Gave a huge shock to him...meraj and mustaid both were lying on the floor lifeless and all of his other men were also killed...he was alone there now...he got really scared...)

(jalal put his one hand over jodha's hand to support her in holding the sword...still looking in her eyes...and in other he held his shamshir...and jalal started fighting with jodha's hand...now it was adham v/s akdha...both jalal and jodha's eyes were burning with anger and they started attacking adham vigorously...adham tried all his tactics to prevent them...but all in vain because they have become more powerful than ever because they were together...jalal was preventing each of his attacks with his sword...and from other hand...jalal and jodha causing severe wounds on his body...they targeted his chest, arm and shoulder...now adham fell on the ground as they caused his shamshir to fall down too... )

Jalal:-kya kehti hai jodha begum...mar diya jaye ya chor diya jaye...(he said it with a smirk)

Jodha:- is jaise aastin ke saap ko kabhi bhi shama nahi karna chahiye shenshah...

(and they raised their shamshir to make a final stroke to end adham's life...but suddenly huge fog appeared their and their vision faded...adham ran to save his life...jalal ran after him to catch him but suddenly a person riding the horse whose face was covered with a mask wearing black cloths...took adham with him on the horse and escaped from there...jalal shouted loudly...)

Jalal:-adham khaannn...(echoed in every direction)

(scene shifts to adham and that person...that person abort adham at a safe place...he got down and helped adham to get down too...adham thanked him)

Adham:- aapka bahut bahut shukriya...aapne humari jaan bachayi...lekin aap hai kaun...aur aapne humari madad kyu ki??

(The person removed the mask from his face...it was none other than mahamanga...adham was shocked to see this that how maham came to know about all this...)

Adham:- ammi jaan... aap????(amazed)

Maham:-haan meri jahil aulad...hum...(angry)

Adham:- magar aap...yaha...kaise...??

Maham:- tumhari kartuto ki wajah se bevkoof ladke...

Adham:- lekin aapko pata kaise chala ke hum yaha hai...

Maham:- hum tumhari tarah dimag se paidal nahi hai adham...khuda ke fazal se unhone hume char aankhe di hai...jo kisi bhi aane wali musibat ko waqt se pehle bhapne ki kuvvat rakhti hai...hume to aap per kal hi shak ho gaya tha jab aapne humse fauj ki kamaan samhanlne ki khwahish zahir ki thi...hum samajh gaye the ke aapke dimag me koi to fitoor chal raha hai...isiliye humne aapka picha kiya aur allah ke karam se hum sahi waqt per yaha pahuch gaye...aap itni badi bevkoofi kaise kar sakte hai aadham...yakin nahi hota hume...kyu kiya aapne esa????

Adham:- to galat kya kiya...aap kya chahti hai hum zindagi bhar us jalal ki gulami karte uske talve chatte...haan???

Maham:- Aadham...(really irritated by his foolishness).aadham...ya parvardigar...kya kare hum is ladke ka...har cheez ka ek mukammal waqt hota hai adham...waqt se pehle aur kismet se zyada kisi ko kuch nahi milta ...kitni baar kaha hai aapse humne...jazbaat me aaker liye gaye faisle humesha barbadi ki wajah bante hai...hum...

Adham(stops her in mid):- bus ammijaan...bus...ab humse aur sehen nahi hota...isiliye humne apna dimag istemal kiya...aur...(maham interrupts him)

Maham:- jis cheez ki kami hai aapke paas use zaya kyu karte hai adham...kitni baar samjha chuke hai hum aapko ke bina humare mashware ke koi kadam mat uthaiye...lekin aap hai ke...itihaas gavah hai...jab bhi aapne apne dimag se kuch karne ki koshish ki hai humesha nakamayaab rahe hai...takat to beshumaar hai aapke paas per dimag raddi bhar bhi nahi hai...sirf takat ke balbute per jung nahi jiti jati adham...

Adham:- to aap kya chahti hai...hum hath per hath rakhker baithe rahe...jo ho raha hai use rokne ke liye kuch na kare...

Maham:- kariye adham beshak kariye...per sahi waqt aane per...filhal aap kuch nahi karege...aap abhi or isi waqt kaabul ke liye ravana ho jayiye...humne aapke jaane ke pukhta intezaam kar diye hai...kaabul me bhi apne ristedaar se baat kar li hai...waha aapko kisi cheez ki koi kami nahi hogi...jab tak yaha mamla thanda nahi ho jata aap wohi rahege...aur jab tak hum na kahe aagra ki sarhad ke aas paas bhi mat bhatakiyega...samjhe aap...(she shakes his shoulder)...samjhe...

Adham:-nahi ammi jaan...hum buzdilo ki tarah muh chipakar nahi bhagege...

Maham:- humne aapki raay nahi maangi thi adham...aap pehle hi bahut kuch bigaad chuke hai hai...ab aap wohi karege jo hum chahege...ye aadmi aapko Kabul tak pahucha dega...(she signals towards a man standing beside her at some distance)...aap kuch din waha rahiyega...hum yaha sab samhal lege...kyuki agar baat haath se nikal gayi to phir hum to kya fariste bhi aapko jalal ki shamshir se nahi bacha payege...ab der mat kariye...fauran jayiye yaha se...

Adham:- thik hai ammi jaan...

(Maham hugs adham...and adham leaves for Kabul...)

Maham:- samhal ker jayiyega...aur apna khayaal rakhiyega...

Adham:- aap bhi...(he leaves)

Precap:-❤️ ❤️***************Izehaar e mohabbat******************❤️❤️

Thanku friends...⭐️

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waiting eagrly😃

Edited by Pallavvi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yippeyy...yippeyy...me first...
are is adham ki to esi ki tesi...kamina he...aur sath me uski maa bhi...
awww...but akdha is superb...
realy u write so well ...i can imagine...aaye haaye...superb yaar...realy loved it...love it..love it...loves it so much...thanks for the wonderful update...n waiting for the next part...
Edited by Nany - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks...loved it...great job...awesome...please update sooon
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when will jalal get to know abt MM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏JODHA👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
we should never underestimate the power of a woman
loved the end part when jodha-jalal together fought with adham
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Just wow!! Awesome Update!! Brilliant description of the fight-back by AkDha.. Not only will jalal realise that how talented is Jodha..not like other Begums who can just flirt and be jealous...Precap is awesome.. Saving Adham is actually good.. He will definitely get punished in future I know!!👏👏👏👏👏
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update soon please...it ws an awesome update
Edited by kabhiasya4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was very nice. continue

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