FF *Ishqzaade* Chapter 27 updated on page150*THREAD CLOSED* - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
thanks...great job..well done...amazing...please update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: XDPagalKuriXD

I think you should change the title to let people know you have updated a new chapter! Really good, carry onšŸ˜†


thnkx dear for d suggesion. .keep awaring me lyk ths only. .changed it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg great story!!! Love this!!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
Plz continue sugar and keep it upšŸ˜›šŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Changing the title wz a gud idea i realized dt u've updated ur article thx a bunch its really nyc luvd it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pallavvi


thnkx dear for d suggesion. .keep awaring me lyk ths only. .changed it :)


its okay! I want people to read it! cos its good! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
nice update. please update the next part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
that was really nice - at least we will get this in ur ss bec in serial he is going to yell at her.

this is very good for ur first attmept at writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely update! Thankx for the pm.. Bechara Jallu.. What a scene!! Amazing!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpat

that was really nice - at least we will get this in ur ss bec in serial he is going to yell at her.

this is very good for ur first attmept at writing


thanku dr. .thts why i cut that yelling part. .dantega bt zyada nhi. .bcz i want to see luv b/w them not war. .:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hello everyone...😊
glad that you guys liked the 2nd chapter too...😃
here is the next update...
hope you will like it too...šŸ˜‰

(Jodha opens her eyes slowly but still feeling week due to the struggle she did in the water...this brings a wide smile on jalal's lips, he becomes so happy that he hugs jodha taking her in his embrace with one hand on her head and another around her shoulders...hugs her tightly )

Jalal: - aapne to hume dara hi diya tha...ek pal ke liye to laga jaise hum aapko phir kabhi nahi dekh payege...allah ka shukr hai aapne aankhen to kholi...and he keeps on speaking...

(meanwhile jodha realized that jalal has saved her and she is still alive...she gathers all her strength and pushes jalal back and stands up...jalal is shocked)

Jodha: - chor dijiye hume...hume samjh nahi aata ke aapki icha aakhir hai kya...jab hum jivit rehna chahte the to humara jivan humse chin liya...aur aaj jab marna chahte hai to marne bhi nahi diya...hume akela chor dijiye shenshah...hum jina nahi chahte...

(and she again runs towards the lake to jump...but this time jalal stops her by seizing her wrist tightly)

Jalal:- ab bus bahut ho gaya jodha begum...aapko ye bewkuffi nahi karne dege hum..hume to laga tha ke aap bahut bahadur hai...lekin aap to kitni buzdil nikli...zindagi ki taklifo se bachne ke liye maut ko gale lagana chahti hai...hume aapseye ummid nahi thi jodha begum...khudkushi to buzdil karte hai...kya aap unme se ek hai??

Jodha: - haan hum kayar hai...hum har chuke hai...humare bhagya ne hume parajit kar diya hai shenshah...hume shama kijiyega ke hum aapki ummido per khare nahi utar paye...is jivan ka ab koi arth nahi hai humare liye...ise samapth karna hi thik hai...hume mar jane dijiye...

(and she tries to free her wrist and forcibly moves towards the lake ...it was enough for jalal now...he captures her shoulders and pull her back and shakes her..)

Jalal:- aap pagal ho gayi hai kya jodha begum...hosh me to hai...ye kya jahiliyat hai...

Jodha: - chor dijiye hume...humne kaha choriye hume mar jane dijiye...choriye...and keeps on shouting...

Jalal:- jodha humari baat suniye...jodha...jodha humari baat to suniye...jodha(she does not listen)

(slap...jalal slaps her very hard that she falls on the ground...starts ctying)

Jalal:- bus...bus jodha begum bus...bahut ho gaya...bahut sun liya humne...aap samajhti kya hai apne aapko...humesha kehti rehti hai...humne ye kar diya ..humne wo kar diya...humne aapki zindagi tabah kar di...per asal baat to ye hai ke aap humesha wohi karti hai jo aapko sahi lagta hai...aapko lagata hai ke puri duniya jahil hai aur aap hi ek zahiin hai...per esa nahi hai...halat or waqt ke bhi kuch mayne hote hai jodha begum jinka appko zara bhi ilm nahi hai...zaroori nahi hota ke jaisa aap sochti hai wo hamesha sahi hota hai...aur aaj jo aap karne ja rahi thi wo kisi gunaah se kam nahi hai...jan lene ka haq sirf us khuda ko hai aur kisi ko nahi...samjhi aap...

(he realizes that in rage he slapped jodha and she is crying facing to the ground...he feels like cut his hand for hurting jodha...he quickly gets down and sit on his knees in front of jodha...she is crying covering her face with her hands...he holds her hands and removes them from her face and hold them lightly with love and care in his eyes...)

Jalal: - dekhiye aaj aapne Hindustan ke shenshah se kitna sangeen jurm karwa diya...apni begum per haath uthane ki gustakhi ker di humne , hume maaf ker dijiye jodha...magar aapne esa kiya hi kyu...

(now jodha completely breaks down and starts crying like a baby with terrible sobs...)

Jodha: - humkya kare shenshan...hum kisi ki pareshani ka karan nahi banna chahte...parantu phir bhi hum humesha sabki pareshani ka karan ban jate hai...pratidin hume apni satyta siddh karni padti hai...hum thak chuke hai ab...aur aaj to hum apni maasa ka ser jhukne ka bhi karan ban gaye...ab hum apni hi nazro me gir gaye hai...hum bahut bure hai shenshah ...hum sabko dukh pahuchate hai...hum bahut bure hai...(and the sobs becomes more louder...seeing jodha crying like a child, jalal feels really bad...he dint know what to do at that moment so he just puts his hand behind her head and pushes her head against his chest with other hand on her waist...hugs her tightly..)

Jalal:- shhh...chup...kisne kaha aapse ke aap buri hain haan?? Aap to is duniya ki sabse khubsurat, sabse zahiin, sbse honhar ladki hai...jo Hindustan ke shenshah ki zubaan ko bhi khamosh kara deti hai...aap to bahut bahdur hai vrna itna saahas kisme hai jo shenshah ko chup kara sake,aapke jaisi itni bekhauf insaan ka rona acha nahi lagta.. hai na jodha begum...esa nahi kehte...aap bahut achi hai bilkul bhi buri nahi hai aap...

(he consoles her like a guardian...like he is consoling a little girl whose precious thing was lost...kisses on her head...)

(for the first time jodha was so close to jalal's heart and she can feel the warmth, love and care in his embrace,...and with that kiss it is confirmed to her that she is safe like a pearl in a shield...her sobbs reduces and she hugs jalal back tightly lost in his strong arms...jalal just closes his eyes and feels jodha's presence so close to his heart,he has never felt like that before, he can listen to his own heartbeats ...for the first time jodha can also listen to jalal's heartbeats ...the taps of jalal's heartbeats was seeming like a sweet music to jodha's ears...and they remains like this only for 15 minutes)

*you can increase the time limit as per your wish...i don't mind*šŸ˜†šŸ¤£

Precap:- i am still thinking for it...so you will get to know when you will read the next update

don't forget to press the likewa button...& lots of comments too😊


Edited by Pallavvi - 11 years ago

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