~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 8

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

Here is my poem dear friendz. I AM READY FOR TOMATO AND CHAPPAL.

Eating pizza sitting at dinning table

Mummy switch on TV to see the Cable

Suddenly listen Jassi Jaise Koi Nahi

Me went to watch the TV

Oh it was promotional advertisement

I thought again family drama oh its a punishment

Then first the day came and JJKN on air

I said wasting time by watching this wouldn't be fair

One day my family went for an invitation

I was alone feeling bore so switch on television

While scanning sony it was jjkn going on

I stopped, started watching having fun

First when I saw Jassi I became confused

Who knows one day she will make us proud

Slowly Slowly I became the regular viewer

Enjoying everything also when Jassi gets fire

Days went on and watching JJKN become my habit

if guests drop in home that time I am upset a bit

and keep on waiting when they will quit

Couldn't realize when JandA captured heart

Realized when I felt JandA should be apart

One day I missed the show

I was sad how could I let it go

Idea came why not search through internet

then I saw India forum so my idea was perfect

That time I was not a member

I was just a viewer before December

Than I opened my id fan no 1 jjkn

Started login everyday to enjoy the threads rain

It gave me so many friends & so much love

I felt lucky so much nice people together to have

Being part of the forum feeling a great

Through out my life which I will never forget

Rest all of you know

So please now let me go.

Love - Fan no. 1 JJKN

ITS AWES OME SUCH DI! CHOMOTKAR!👏

Originally posted by: blyton

Haila! I'm going through this thread after a long time and
the stuff you guys have posted is just AWESOME! 👏 👏 👏

Pity i can't write poetry. I would surely have written some nice steamy
rhymes........ 😉 😈

what's stopping you, yaar? 😈

Ok.....here's something i wrote a few months ago when JJKN was still on air.....you guys must have seen it in my siggy:

"You may say it is imagination, dear
But why do i get the feeling so queer
When i see JANDA on my Tv screen
I feel it is MANDA living out their dream....."😳

I know it's not too good, but it is about as good as i can do!

Originally posted by: blyton

Ok.....here's something i wrote a few months ago when JJKN was still on air.....you guys must have seen it in my siggy:

"You may say it is imagination, dear
But why do i get the feeling so queer
When i see JANDA on my Tv screen
I feel it is MANDA living out their dream....."😳

I know it's not too good, but it is about as good as i can do!

wow, that was great Blyti !!😳..haiiiiiiiii manda😳😛

👏

Originally posted by: blyton

Ok.....here's something i wrote a few months ago when JJKN was still on air.....you guys must have seen it in my siggy:

"You may say it is imagination, dear
But why do i get the feeling so queer
When i see JANDA on my Tv screen
I feel it is MANDA living out their dream....."😳

I know it's not too good, but it is about as good as i can do!

😃👏 So you are not only a good writer you are good poet also.

Originally posted by: blyton

Ok.....here's something i wrote a few months ago when JJKN was still on air.....you guys must have seen it in my siggy:

"You may say it is imagination, dear
But why do i get the feeling so queer
When i see JANDA on my Tv screen
I feel it is MANDA living out their dream....."😳

I know it's not too good, but it is about as good as i can do!

Haila! That was great Blyti!😳👏😳

Thanks Guys! I still don't think it is that good.....but since it is about manda.... 😉

As darkness took over, I heard a light footstep at the door,
A flash of light came in along with which you appeared.
You smiled briefly as you came towards me,
And my heart skipped a beat as it got flooded with all the love that I had for thee.
You took me in your arms and cradled me with such tenderness,
I looked at those grey eyes of yours and soon, the tempest began.
Your skin tasted of wild honey,
And your lips triggered off a passion inside me.
I moved my fingers through the tousled hair of yours,
As you caressed my cheeks like a lion does to his little cubs.
When the wind blew in through the window fiercely,
I wrapped myself closer to you for that masculine security.
You looked into my eyes and nodded with reassurance,
As you locked your strong hands around me and loved me with all that gentleness.
I moaned out in joy as I knew you would never make me feel any pain,
But when you pronounced your love for me through a sweet whine,
I knew nothing in this world could ever stop you being mine.
As I rested my fingers upon your fine structured shoulders,
Dizziness took me over.
My head spun like a marble,
And I closed my eyes as I heard the thunder.
But within a split second I forced my eye lids open,
You were gone, and there was no storm outside.
I sat there on the carpet, all alone,
Thinking of your touch which still lingered.
I mumbled to myself that all these could have been true,
However, it was not your fault,
For a mere imagination cannot really make you into a real form.
You are a fictitious character in my mind,
Who is there to entertain my fantasies in the leisure that I find.


S@R@H