~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 10

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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
okie waiting
seems the kids here r more besharam than us elders
hahaaa
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
Besharmo se pala pad gaya di kahan jaoge šŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Apurva

As the night dominated I looked at the sky
Waiting for someone, who told me would come when the moon is high
My heart loped fast when a car passed by
I ran towards the door and looked outside
None was there and my tears were unable to hide
Why didn€™t he come, did he tell all lies?
My Armaan never lied who would explain my teary eyes.

I took out the bracelet that he gifted me ones
Started recalling the moments which would never return
The thought of loosing him pinched my heart
And I sat quiescent as if lost my priceless part
I took his photo and hugged it tight
Prayed and hoped for a glimpse of his sight.

My breathing stopped when I felt him around
As I turned to look for him
He drew my hand and embraced me as if a beautiful dream
I surrendered my self in his mild cozy arms
Seemed like bliss when he whispered
€œDo not fear my love, please smile as it never harms
I will be with you till there is the stars, moon and sun
World would know that JASSI IS ONLY MADE FOR ARMAAN€


~**Ananya**~

Its awesome,its brilliant,its excellent! You are such a good writer! Heads of to u Anu!šŸ‘šŸ‘

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Posted: 19 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

Hey Friends this is my next poem but not the last

"...........
After getting Promotion
Jassi could not control her emotion
Her love for Armaan was eternal
With a Finance background like ledger & Journal
When Armaan told her to make false Balance sheet
Yes it was a punishment for Jassi indeed
She has no right to ask when a sorrow comes
But she made it for her dreams to be in Armaan's arms
Bashing of Maddy, Mallika and Aryan
She tolerated everything just for Armaan
Also she could have answered in return
But she knew one day her turn will come
Billo taught her Life is full of beauty
Only she has to deal with honesty
Jassi become the CEO of Gulmohar
Won everyone's heart with her behaviour
Given Gulmohar a business profit
Jassi as a CEO was really fit
And the day come in Armaan's life
He realised Jassi would be a perfect wife
He has changed his route of life
Started Notice the bumble bee, the small child
His dealing with Jassi became mild and mild
Poor Armaan could not disclose this to any one
In between Raj given him a plan
Unfortunately the written plan Jassi received
She was shuttered and feels being terribly deceived
Jassi left Gulmohar and Armaan
Went to Mauritius with Nandini mam
There She met Purab once who broken her heart
Who made commitment for marriage but had depart
Purab was never a bad man
He knows that Jassi loves only Armaan
There she learned how to love her herself
So many people helped her to forget the grief
She got new look even with braces and spec
Jassi looked beautiful with a saree that Purab gave
Here Armaan without Jassi almost become mad
Life become full of dark, he was always sad
Mallika said Jassi ditched Gulmohar and rumor spread
Billo been insulted & his feeling for Jassi became hatred
Same day night Jassi came back with new face
Seeing her father's reaction she went back in silence
Then the long awaited Day has come
Thrown away braces, spec new Jessica Bedi Born
Now Friends wait for my next Poem
B,coz that will be on Jassi and Armaan's Ahem Ahem

............."
Love you all - Such 😃

its brilliant Such di!šŸ‘ Waiting for the next one!šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 19 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

Anu - my appreciation for this poem will be so small reward for but I can say appreciation of life itself, becoming suddenly aware of the miracle of being alive on this planet when I read your poem, I was thinking how can turn what we call ordinary life into a miracle that's what I have seen in YOU. I come awake to such a realization when we recognize our connection to a spiritual dimension when I read your poem. Tumi satti Ananya. šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘

love u

Such


Such beautiful words for me, i am speechless. I didnt think that you all will like it so much. I have just placed my heart in this poem, my imagination.

Such ur poems are better than mines.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
Ab mujhe sharm aa rahi hai.....i can't write anywhere as well as this. 😭 😭 😭
Anu, Such, Doomed4eva, i can't even put across my appreciation in words. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: blyton

Ab mujhe sharm aa rahi hai.....i can't write anywhere as well as this. 😭 😭 😭
Anu, Such, Doomed4eva, i can't even put across my appreciation in words. šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

Oh my Anjali

tum kaha chali

Aab to ajao

Ek Shayeri suna jao

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Posted: 19 years ago
#98

ANNOUNCEMENT

Before I start JandA Ahem Ahem

I have to write another poem

That would based on Jessica's Game

Without that you will miss the story theme

So my dear friends that is game

How can I shyed to Ahem Ahem

Once I complete another poem

Straight I jump to Ahem Ahem

I am besharam and my friends are toošŸ˜‰

So elders and younger take care of you

Bcoz that poem will be romance in frame

Therefore don't say to me shame shame

Love

Such

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Posted: 19 years ago
#99
šŸ˜†
such was waitin for ur poem
and this funny lyrics already has me in splits

besharmaon se pala pad gaya hai to theekh hai
dekh lete hai aur kyaaa

go ahead
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

ANNOUNCEMENT

Before I start JandA Ahem Ahem

I have to write another poem

That would based on Jessica's Game

Without that you will miss the story theme

So my dear friends that is game

How can I shyed to Ahem Ahem

Once I complete another poem

Straight I jump to Ahem Ahem

I am besharam and my friends are toošŸ˜‰

So elders and younger take care of you

Bcoz that poem will be romance in frame

Therefore don't say to me shame shame

Love

Such

such me ready with the popkorn u start, see me is besharam too.šŸ˜‰

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