~JJKN POETRY CONTEST 2006~ - Page 19

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Posted: 18 years ago

Hey friendz,

This was my Ahem Ahem Poem I start with. But since there was so fight, fire & fuel in the forum I forget to complete it. Today I got to post it on Bakra thread also for our sweet MOMO's request. But now I feel I will complete it. You can enjoy the part rest I will start writing again.

Jessica won the case so Jassi is back

Mallika & Aryan's plan broken into part

Here in courtroom two hearts and soul

With a tender glance exchanging the love

The passion in the air, gallivant look

Tham Ja Zindegi started & we are hooked

The two soul become one

that's Jassi and Armaan

They came close and close

Both of them lost in their arms

The breath of them whispering

The God ringing the bell

and the smiling faces smell the love rain,

they felt the wind says live your life

Jassi kept her head on Armaan's lap

Armaan came close to touch his love

He kissed her forehead with tender touch

She was shivering and closed her eyes

To feel the warmth, with a fear how to reply

Hungry lips were in resentment so is heart

The burning desire and unending urge

Pulled them and they melt in hugs

The dusky sky spread its colour

in the twilight of the love empire

they look like king and queen in a pair

once in red and once in black

Jassi and Armaan back to the track

Armaan lost in the thought of their next embrace
Jassi saw now she is caught without even a chase

Now I will start again from last line and hope to give u a hot ahem ahem poem with all JJKN story.

love you all

SUCH

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

Hey friendz,

This was my Ahem Ahem Poem I start with. But since there was so fight, fire & fuel in the forum I forget to complete it. Today I got to post it on Bakra thread also for our sweet MOMO's request. But now I feel I will complete it. You can enjoy the part rest I will start writing again.

Jessica won the case so Jassi is back

Mallika & Aryan's plan broken into part

Here in courtroom two hearts and soul

With a tender glance exchanging the love

The passion in the air, gallivant look

Tham Ja Zindegi started & we are hooked

The two soul become one

that's Jassi and Armaan

They came close and close

Both of them lost in their arms

The breath of them whispering

The God ringing the bell

and the smiling faces smell the love rain,

they felt the wind says live your life

Jassi kept her head on Armaan's lap

Armaan came close to touch his love

He kissed her forehead with tender touch

She was shivering and closed her eyes

To feel the warmth, with a fear how to reply

Hungry lips were in resentment so is heart

The burning desire and unending urge

Pulled them and they melt in hugs

The dusky sky spread its colour

in the twilight of the love empire

they look like king and queen in a pair

once in red and once in black

Jassi and Armaan back to the track

Armaan lost in the thought of their next embrace
Jassi saw now she is caught without even a chase

Now I will start again from last line and hope to give u a hot ahem ahem poem with all JJKN story.

love you all

SUCH

Mwhazzzzzzzzzzzzz Such di! Kya poem hai! Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and superbbbbbbbbbb and brilliant!👏😳😃

Me waiting with popcorn and coke for the next part! Plz cont soon!😃😳😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey how about my poem noone liked my new poem..:( how sad 😭
fan no 1 jjkn thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: boparaisonia

hey how about my poem noone liked my new poem..:( how sad 😭

NO DEAR - URS IS GREAT ONE. I LIKED IT SOOOOOOOO MUCH. WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT ONE.

LOVE

SUCH

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: fan no 1 jjkn

NO DEAR - URS IS GREAT ONE. I LIKED IT SOOOOOOOO MUCH. WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT ONE.

LOVE

SUCH

aww thanx such di..i will post my poem so soon and i loved urs too

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: boparaisonia

hey how about my poem noone liked my new poem..:( how sad 😭

Dun cry! Ur poem is berry nice!😛

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